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ManEater

By: tinamonic
folder Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › Het - Male/Female › Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: Adult ++
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Disclaimer: I do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Let Me Make it Up to You

A/N: Hey guys! Here's the bonus chapter! I hope you all love it! I hope you loved the last chapter as well. I hope I wasn't hash when I said to pay close attention to detail. I said that because two people were confused about what Elizabeth left in Jack's cabin...which were both her brooch AND necklace. But she left each of them at different times. So, with all of that said, read on! Enjoy!
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Elizabeth

My body trembled with want as Jack continued to massage my center.

“Oh Jack…” I moaned against his lips.

He gently rubbed my delicate nub with two of his fingers. In response, my body jerked as he moved them in and out of me.

“Oh God yes…”

He kissed my neck and then moved up to my ear and whispered. “I want to ravish your body, Lizzie. I want to make you come more than once tonight.”

He deepened his fingers inside of me and captured my lips into a heated, passionate kiss.

“Oh God Jack…”

After a few moments, he broke away from my lips and stared into my eyes.

“I want to taste you, Elizabeth. Let me kiss your other lips.” He said gutturally as he teasingly ran his fingers along my folds. My breath hitched, for the pleasure he was giving me was becoming unbearable.

“Do whatever you want to me, Jack…just please don’t stop.”

He smiled, and then began a trail of kisses starting from my lips all the way down my body until he reached my stomach. He suddenly got off of the bed and kneeled on the floor in front of me. He looked up at me with those mischievous eyes as he slowly spread my legs. I watched him intently as he lazily rubbed his hands along the length of my thighs. My heart raced as he planted a soft, sweet kiss on each inner thigh.

“Do you know what I’m about to do to you?” He asked as he snaked his hands up to my waist.

“Yes…” I replied in a low, shaky whisper.

“Are you ready for this love?”

“I’m ready for whatever you want to do to me, Jack. My body is all yours for the taking.”

A devilish grin appeared on his face as he leaned in closer to my face. “Just so you know love, you should NEVER tell a dangerous pirate like me that your body is all for his taking.”

“And why not?”

He traced my lips with his fingers. “Because Ms. Swann, you’re giving me permission to lose my self control, and when I do that, things may get a tad bit crazy. You might not be able to handle it.”

I cupped his face and ran my tongue across his lips. “Prove it.”

He squinted his beautiful lust filled eyes. “Lizzie…” He groaned as he quickly captured my lips into a feverish kiss. A few minutes later, his lips traveled down my neck, then onto my breasts. He stopped at my nipples and began sucking on them, kneading them between his teeth. He stared into my eyes the whole time. I arched my back and moaned.

“Oh God Jack…I love it when you do that to me.”

His lips moved down to my stomach and then my abdomen. When he began to kiss my thighs, I scooted my body closer to him. He looked up and grinned.

“You really want this, don’t you? You can’t wait for me to taste your lips.”

“You’re killing me with anticipation; Jack…please shut up and keep going.”

He smiled and spread my legs a little wider. “Feisty aren’t we?”

He proceeded to kiss my inner thighs, slowly inching closer towards my center. He blew warm breath between my legs, causing my body to shudder. He placed his hands on my thighs and lazily ran his tongue along my folds.

“Jack…”

He did it again, all the while looking at me with those damn lustful, piercing eyes. I watched as his magnificent tongue moved along my folds. It felt so damn incredible. I ran my fingers through his plaited hair as he began gently kissing me down there, sucking on my delicate nub. I screamed out in pleasure as Jack increased his ministrations. After a few minutes, he gently removed my hands from his hair and held them down onto the bed. He lifted his head, grinning wickedly.

“Lie back, love…you’ll enjoy this even more.”

I did what I was told. Jack kissed my stomach and lifted my legs to rest on his shoulders. I felt his lips gently kiss my folds. He used his tongue and lapped it against my delicate nub. I arched my back and moaned as he began aggressively sucking on my delicate nub even more.

“Oh God Jack, please…”
He placed his hand on my belly and massaged it. I placed my hands on my stomach and entwined my fingers with his. He lifted my legs further over his shoulder as his ministrations intensified. I could not hold back my cries of satisfaction at this point.

“Oh yes Jack…mmm”

He was literally devouring me. He’d never been this aggressive with me before. I didn’t mind, for I loved every thrilling moment of it. I absolutely loved how he took his time, savoring my body. He was driving me completely mad. I let go of his hands and held on to the bed. His hands slowly traveled from my stomach onto my breasts. I placed my hands on my head and grabbed my hair, for I felt a very strong orgasm rising. Jack lifted his head and glared.

“Come for me Lizzie…” He commanded as he inserted two fingers inside me. I arched my back and screamed as my end washed over me.

Jack smiled and leaned over my body. I felt his hardness pressing against my skin. He smiled and brushed his lips against mine.

“That a girl Lizzie…come for me again.” He rubbed my delicate again. I arched my back and came once more.

Jack crashed his lips upon mine. I could taste myself on his lips. He gently lifted me off of the bed and shifted my body towards the head of the bed. Once my head touched the pillow, Jack kissed me passionately again, pressing his aroused body down on top of mine.

“Oh Jack…” I moaned against his lips.

He broke away from my lips and looked into my eyes. “I love tasting you, Elizabeth. I’ve wanted to do that for quite a while now.” He licked his lips, grinning wickedly. “I can still taste you on my lips.”

He brushed his lips against mine, then kissed my cheek and neck, while his hands caressed my breasts. My need was growing for his again…and it was stronger this time.
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Jack Sparrow

I loved having Elizabeth back in my arms again…not to mention, back in my bed. I just hope that we don’t break the bed again. It’s taking all of my strength to control myself from ravishing this intoxicating woman senselessly. I’d promised myself that the next time she was in my arms, I’d take my time. If she only knew what naughty, yet gratifying things I had planned to do to her. I kissed her pouty lips, then moved over to her flushed cheeks. As soon as I kissed her neck, she moaned…that only made me harder. I moved down to her breasts and tenderly bit her nipples. She arched her back and moaned my name. I watched her facial expressions as I teasingly ran my tongue around her nipples and sucked on them.

“Oh Jack…”

I moved down to her stomach and kissed her. She placed her hands on my head as I moved down towards her center. She moaned as I brushed my lips on her folds.

“Ooooh Jack…” She moaned as she shifted her body closer to my face.

I stared at her as I kissed her down there. I noticed blissful tears forming in her eyes. I planted butterfly kisses from her center all the way up her body until I reached her pouty rosy lips. My body immediately sank down on top of hers. As soon as our privates touched, she moaned in ecstasy.

“I need you inside me, Jack.”

I lifted myself up off of her body and flashed a devilish grin. She wrapped her long, silky legs around my waist. She looked incredibly beautiful as she lay right underneath me…waiting for me to take her. She did something that took me off guard. She took me into her hand and began stroking my hardness. I hissed and rocked my hips, all the while staring into her eyes. She smirked devilishly, for she knew what she was doing to me.

“Do you want me inside you, Lizzie?”

She nodded. I leaned in closer to her face and hovered over her body.

“Then you know what to do with my cock…”

She slowly guided me to her need. As soon as the tip of lil’ Jack entered her, she arched her back and moaned. I groaned as I gently lowered my whole body down on top of hers.

“Oh God Lizzie…” I said as I pushed myself further inside her.

She tightened her legs around my waist and lazily moved her hands along my back. She moaned into my ear with every slow, teasing movement I made inside of her.

“Jack…you feel so good. I’ve missed the way you feel between my legs.” She then kissed me passionately. I deepened myself inside her as our tongues playfully wrestled.

“You love what I’m doing to you?” I asked as I held my position.

“Yes…I don’t want you to stop. Oh God you’re so big.”

For the next half hour, I moved inside her…changing my pace every few minutes or so. We did not speak the entire time, for the passion between us was too intense to utter a word. The only sound that could be heard was our moans, and occasionally the sound of the headboard knocking against the wall.

After a few moments, I felt my end nearing, so I increased my pace. Lizzie’s breath quickened as she held me tighter.

“Oh God Jack…yes like that…oh yes.”

I kissed the nape of her neck and then moved over to her lips. Her body shifted under mine with every stroke. My end was drawing dangerously close. I was not ready to pull out of her, for she felt so damn good.

“Dammit Lizzie you feel so good.” I whispered into her ear.

“I don’t want to pull out of you. I should just come inside you. Let me come inside you, Elizabeth.”

She moaned and grabbed onto my back. “Jack…you…oh God…it’s too risky.”

I certainly knew it was, but at that moment, I didn’t care. She was so intoxicating…I couldn’t control myself. I increased my strokes…faster, harder. She screamed and dug her fingernails into my back. I looked at her and noticed that her eyes were closed, her face was twisted with pleasure. I kissed her neck and buried myself deeper inside her.

“Ooooh Jack, you feel so incredible.”

At that moment, I felt that my end was here. I kept arguing with myself about staying inside Lizzie. Yes it is foolish, not to mention selfish of me if I did that, after she’d said no. I was not ready for any consequence that would happen if I should do that. I kissed her lips.

“Lizzie…open your eyes. I want you to look at me.”

She opened her eyes and stared at me. I felt her walls contract, signaling that she was nearing her end. I bit my bottom lip, for it felt so good when she tightened her walls around me.

“Oh God Jack…” She moaned.

“Come for me Lizzie.”

She did what she was told. I immediately pulled out of her, spilling my seed far away from her center. We both looked into each other’s eyes until she crashed her lips upon mine. After a few moments, we broke away from our embrace. She cupped my face and traced my lips with her fingers.

“I love you Captain Sparrow…I’m falling in love with you more and more each day.”

My heart stopped at her endearing words. I felt absolutely the same way about her. I smiled and gave her a chaste kiss on the lips.

“I feel the same way, too. I find meself falling deeper in love with meself everyday.” I joked.

Elizabeth laughed then secretly moved one hand down my back and pinched my bum with all of her might.

“Ow woman! Haven’t I warned you about pinching?!” I carefully lifted myself up and lay down beside her. My arse felt like it was on fire from her hard pinch.

She continued to laugh and sat up and looked at me.

“Serve you right. It’s not very polite to be so rude and conceited. You could get yourself into a world of trouble with that type of behavior.”

I turned to look at her and was immediately captivated by the way the candlelight illuminated her flawless skin. She seemed to be transforming into a goddess right before my very eyes. I sat up and leaned in closer to her face.

“Just so you know love, YOU can certainly get yourself into a hell of a lot of trouble by pinching the Capn’s arse. That wasn’t very nice.”

She laughed and gently caressed my face.

“My apologies Captain Sparrow…I didn’t mean to bruise your delicate bum, or your tempestuous ego.”

She laughed again. I couldn’t help but to stare at her. She had no idea how even more beautiful she looked when she laughed. Her laughter was another sound I loved coming out of her mouth, besides her moans, of course. She stopped laughing and entwined her fingers with mine.

“So I’m assuming, Ms. Swann, that I’ve fully made up for upsetting you with my detestable actions this week?”

Elizabeth smiled and rubbed our entwined hands across her cheek. She then stared at me with lustful eyes full of mischief and desire.

“What does this tell you?” She asked seductively as she began to kiss my hand.

She then did something very provocative. She ran my fingers across her lips; then one by one, she began sucking on each finger, all the while staring at me. Immediately, lil’ Jack awakened and started swelling with desire.

“Don’t do that love…if you know what’s good for you.”

She moved each of my fingers in and out of her mouth, making my groin very hard and painful at this point.

“Why can’t I do this? Don’t you like what I’m doing to you, Jack?”

“Of course. I love what you’re doing to me.” She then ran her tongue along my index finger and began sucking on it harder. That sent chills down my spine.

“Since I pinched your bum, Captain Sparrow, I believe that it’s time for me to make it up to you.” She then moved my hand down from her lips to her breasts.

I immediately flashed an elated smile. Her gaze dropped down to my lower half. She took my erect member into her hand and began massaging me. I glared into her eyes and rocked my hips.

“Let me make it up to you, Jack…” She brushed her lips against mine, gently biting my bottom lip. I was now at my wit’s end…I couldn’t take it anymore. I needed her now, before I exploded.

“You can do whatever the hell you want, love.” I said as I cupped her face and crashed my lips upon hers.

While we were engaged in a heated kiss, she took that opportunity to straddle my lap. I caressed her breasts and massaged her waist. She moaned into my mouth has she rubbed her center against my throbbing member.

“I need you inside me Jack…I can’t get enough of you.” She kissed me passionately once more. I secretly placed the tip of lil’ Jack at her barrier and pushed up inside her. She moaned and threw her head back in ecstasy.

She glared into my eyes and kissed my lips. “I love you Jack.”

And with those last words, she began riding me, as we continued making it up to each other all night…__________________________________________________________________________________________
A/N: So, how did you like it? Thanks again for reading and if you want to, you can leave a review or email me! I am going to write the next chapter now! Take care!
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