bounty to claim

Okay here you go another chapter hope ya’ll all like it!


Ppl have pointed out a grammar mistakes in my story…first let me apologize second let me kill my beta reader, and then lastly ask for a new beta reader. My current beta reader is suppose to catch these things but it would seem that she is the reason why she needs a co editor! O well…

Now Tinca
You asked me why is Jack so angry…well she just is! She is angry at Riddick for leaving her, She is angry at Saber for numerous reasons, and then there is her family that keeps trying to find her, and then there is the best reason of all she is angry for the simple reason that she hates every one and they annoy her beyond all reason for the most part.

If any one else has a question I will try and answer it as long as it doesn’t try and give away the story…of course!


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Jack stepped out onto New Mecca and cringed. She had hoped she would never set foot on this horrid place ever again, yet here she was. Throwing the cloak about her shoulders Jack pulled the hood over her head and started towards the home of the holy man.

“He’s dead!” Jack fumed as she left the home of the former Holy man. She couldn’t believe it. Jack stalked the streets of New Mecca listening with her honed sense to the various patters the street urchins said. She heard rumors of a woman with white hair desecrating the grave of some woman…the NECRO’s Lord Marshall’s woman.


Jack grinned under the blackness the hood provided. The bounty hunter had been looking for a woman with White hair that would supposedly be in New Mecca….how good was her luck, Jack wondered.


Jack followed the urchins towards the NECRO’s ship. Jack suddenly got a odd feeling and looked about, seeing no one she moved forward cautiously. Jack slipped into the ship unnoticed by the inhabitants. Inside jack had to remove the sunglasses she wore over the contacts to hide the shine job.

The ship was magnificent. Nothing Jack had ever seen. It was fit for a king. Jack looked above her at the abundance of silver and gold that seem to be made of the purest she had ever seen. Suddenly a little girl ran into her from behind, mumbling an apology before she ran off.

Angel opened her hand to revel her prize as she ran thru the crowd. She had a cred card and some kind of odd necklace that looked vaguely familiar to her. As she was running Angel was unexpectedly lifted from the ground, “wrong move kid…” Jack hissed at the pint sized pip squeak.

Angel squirmed in her grasp instantly hiding her booty. “Lemme go you freakin’ weirdo!” she screamed, earning odd looks from the surrounding crowd. Jack shook the kid and glared at her, “then give me back what you stole then kid…” Angel schooled her face into a calm tranquil state, “I didn’t steal nuttin’…” she spat at her.

Jack was just about to strangle the kid when she did something highly unexpected. Angel used her arm as a fulcrum and flipped up kicking her in the jaw. Jack refused to let go of the shirt like vest as Angel flipped backwards, so angel slipped out of it and ran, weaving through the crowd.

Jack let out a string of curses and threw the vest down and took after the kid that had the gall to get in a cheap shot on her. Jack had to admit the kid was good, she ducked and weaved with reflexes that were honed for such, and she almost had a tough time keeping up with her…almost.


Angel felt Jack was right on her tail and did a risky move, she took a sharp corner and ran towards were Riddick would be. Pulling the look of a very touched child, angel ran giggling the whole way into the area Riddick was listening to complaints.

Jack took a sharp halt when she saw how the kid had perfectly escaped from her, she couldn’t run thru a place were dignitaries stood. she was just about to move around them when she heard a voice she hadn’t heard in forever.

Riddick sat on the throne with one leg thrown over an arm and leaning to the side. Most thought he was bored with listening to the complaining of the highbreeds, but the truth was the senseless prater they were making. At the moment he was resisting the urge to rip out the horrendous fat man that was making the annoying sound. The thought crossed his mind till Angel ran through the room as though she was an airplane.

Her presence seemed to be the straw that broke the camels back. Riddick turned his goggled eyes to look at the man and growled at him audibly, “leave….” Was all he said before he swiftly stood and stalked out of the room. It seemed that the fates wanted Riddick to kill something for the second he was out of the circle of people that had gathered the council of advisors was upon him, like vultures.


Jack followed him at a safe distance. She was curious as how he had ended up her in this palace. Jack saw angel weaved through the council like she was a little daft. Jack gave a small feral grin, she had to hand it to the kid she knew how to play her cards right.


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Saber had seen jack enter the ship. She was shocked that Jack was here. Something didn’t seem right, Why was Jack resurfacing after years of staying on that god forsaken frost block? Saber shook her head as she followed. She watched with amusement as angel picked her pockets and how long it took jack to realize what had happen. Saber kept an eye on the two as Jack demanded Angel return what was rightfully her.

Of course even after Angel had gotten a cheap shot in on jack to get free, Angel was never in any real danger. Saber would have intervened before such could happened, but she knew the kid knew what she was doing. Saber had trained the kid to take care of her self from the time she could walk but that didn’t mean Saber didn’t keep a close eye on her. Saber kept up with the two effortlessly almost knowing where Angel was going to head and reaching the spot where Riddick was before Angel got there.

Staying in the shadows Saber watched as Angel became daft and ran around the room unnoticed and the various hidden emotions run through the eyes of Jack. Most wouldn’t have seen it except for a true killer whose very life depended on reading its prey. Saber slunk back into the shadows when Riddick started out of the room.

Jack was following when she stopped the woman from no where stepped out and grab the little brat that stole from her. It was the same woman from the picture so that had to mean the little brat was the kid in the picture. Jack gave a low growl of irritation as the woman looked at Riddick who gave her some unknown command, which the woman nodded and walked away the kid in tow.

Saber let out a disgusted snort. Riddick had refused her release. So now she seemed to be his personal what ever floats through my mind person. Saber stalked towards the kitchens after she had collected Angel. She glared at the kid who kept up the part of being touched. “That was not very smart…” she whispered to her. Saber watched from the corner of her eye when Angel realized that she had seen what she had done.

Angel gave her a bright grin and pulled out her stolen gods. “ yeah she wasn’t as loaded as the others….but she was a good challenge…” angel sounded proud of her self. Saber snorted and snatched what she held away and looked at the cred card which she handed back to her saying, “keep it you stole it…untraceable.” That was all she said as she eyed the necklace…


XO flashback XO

“Hey, Say, what will happen if one of gets separated and killed…?” asked a young Kira. An equally young Jack looked at a dark haired youthful version of Saber. Saber gave her sisters a grin and pulled out a symbol that was broken into three piece sand placed on a chain…

“Here this way we can always identify each other in case anything happens.” Saber handed the two a piece of the puzzle and gave a smile. Jack snickered, “say, how did you know Kira was gonna ask you that?” Young Jack and Kira were in aw of their older sister’s ability of knowing something before it happened, a trait that had saved them many times in the past.


Saber placed the piece around her neck and winked at the small Jack, “because I just did…” was all she said before ushering them into an alley the tree called home. “ now no more questions sleep….tomorrow we go picking.”

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Saber screamed Jack as Jack was tackled by five police. Saber made a move to free her, distracting her from the man she had been fighting. The man slammed her hard forcing her to fall to the ground. The three men she had been fighting started to get shots in on her as she laid on the ground.\

Saber didn’t hear or feel the blows as she heard the screams of Jack and Kira calling to her. She opened an eye as far as it could, swollen from a cheap shot a officer got in on her, and watched as the two were toted away by two caseworkers. All saber could do was croak out a no before she passed out.

Saber had woken up in a hospital a few weeks later to learn she had no recollection of who she was. She had amnesia for a good year after the incident before she got all her memories in a painful rush. Saber had tried to find the sisters she had lost , but all she found was that Jack was in a better home and that Kira had a kid.

Saber had tried to help Kira but Kira had said she didn’t need it….

“Kira…you can’t stay here…” Saber pleaded with the young teenager. Kira looked at her sister with soulless eyes and shook her head as she tried to rock the newborn. “Saber I can’t….We followed you when we were younger now its time to let us go…” Kira let out a frustrated growl when the babe didn’t stop crying.

Saber shook her head and took the child from her and cooed the baby to quiet down, “and what happens when the family comes back to try get what belongs to them?” she asked Kira without looking up at her.

Kira gave a small grin as she watched Her older sister coo at the baby, “then I will run…” she stated stubbornly, “and what of this little angel?” saber asked worried just a little for the small child in her arms. She looked at Kira expectantly. Kira looked thoughtful, she had mercs after her and if their family added their trackers in the mix she would never be able to get away from them all in time, after all she wasn’t her sister.

Kira looked at her Angel and smiled as the baby gurgled at her then looked to her sister. Saber wasn’t the best parent through out the years but she always tried to do what was right in the end. Saber has suffered many life times at her hand and Jack’s hands inadvertently. Kira shook her head, she could never raise her own kid, she had already almost gotten it killed, when just the other day some Meth addict broke in her home and tried to kidnap the kid to sell. Kira thought to her self as Saber watched, Saber would have never let that happen even if she was dead dogged sick,, that man would have never gotten with in touching range of me and Jack…..

Saber looked at her sister, “Keep her safe?” she asked with a small glance at the kid in saber’s arms. Saber looked shocked to say the least. Kira shook her head, “I can’t keep her safe or feed….” Kira went on looking guilty, “besides I got mercs on my trail…” Saber wanted to ask but knew she didn’t want to know why there were mercs.

Saber smiled and leaned in and kissed her sister on the cheek, “ are you sure…I think….” “NO!” Kira irrupted her angrily, “they can’t get her! And leaving her on some one’s door stop will give them the chance they need.” Kira turned her eyes and looked at her sister pleadingly, “please, Say, just keep her safe…” Saber shook her head and sighed. “what’s her name…” she asked as a bunch of foot steps could be heard, “Angel star…” was all she said before she shoved Saber something and she was gone.

Saber heard the foot steps stop before where the two of them had hide for a chat. Cursing she say that Kira had handed her a carrier for the kid and quickly wrapped the thing about her. She had just started climbing a ladder when all hell broke loose. Letting out a string of curses, Saber switched into survival mode and got the two of them out of there before they looked like Swiss cheese.

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“Saber?” Angel called up to her. She had zoned out while looking at the necklace and that worried her. Saber rarely ever zoned out. “Saber...” she prompted again with a small tug on her shirt, hoping she didn’t attack her.


Saber almost attacked Angel until she realized who she was. Giving a tired sigh, Saber hid her emotions and looked at Angel,”what?” Angel squelched the fact that Saber hid behind a cool mask of nothingness, “We’re here. “

Saber looked up and saw they were at there destination. Shaking her head to clear it, as she moved into the kitchen to talk to the head cook about Riddick’s meal, Riddick had just informed her that she would be taking over cooking all of his meals. She knew what he was trying to do. He wasn’t going to win in breaking her with menial tasks, especially if they keep her cooped up.


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okay I forgot that this was finished……hopfully I can get the next chapter written w/o out any more problems. Also if u want to leave suggestions please do you know always like those

Kili087