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BEST FRIENDS MAKE BETTER LOVERS

By: cowgirl1029
folder M through R › Pitch Black
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 5
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Disclaimer: I do not own Pitch Black, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 5

Chapter 5

“Jack....Jack...” He whispered softly. She let out a long shaky breath and Riddick feeling utter disgust for himself rested his forehead on her shoulder.

“God Jack....I am so sorry....” Riddick muttered. He stayed like that for a few more seconds before he felt Jack move, her arm gently wrapping around his back and stroking him tenderly.

“That was....intense.” Jack said still a bit breathless. “Wow.”

Riddick picked up his head to see Jack looking at him with a smile and complete acceptance.
“I’m sorry Jack.” Riddick said with a sad look.

Jack touched his cheek gingerly, “Why...why are you sorry?”

“I hurt you, it was too much, I know it was, don’t try to lie to me.”

Jack considered his words before speaking.

“It was intense Riddick, I’ll give you that. But you didn’t break me. I’m fine. I loved it because I knew you wouldn’t hurt me, and you didn’t.

Riddick touched her shoulder where he left the bite mark. “I did hurt you Jack, Jesus, look at this.” Jack flinched slightly at his gentle touch to the wound. “I lost control, I shouldn’t have done this.”

“Bullshit!” Jack shot at him. Riddick looked at her in disbelief.

“I wanted this Riddick. Don’t you forget that. You didn’t think I knew the beast inside you would take over the first chance it had.”

Riddick tried to move away from Jack but she locked her legs around his waist, his cock still inside her and she could feel him getting hard again.

“Please Jack....” He begged softly. “I need to go get cleaned up.”

Jack squeezed her legs tighter making Riddick groan slightly. She put her hands over his which were on each side of her by her waist holding his upper half off of her.

“I can feel you inside me.” She growled at him. “You think I am just going to let you jerk off in the shower so you don’t have to worry about hurting me.” Jack slowly started moving her hips causing Riddick to wince. “You haven’t hurt me Riddick, you marked me as yours and I couldn’t be more thrilled.” She added with a hint of arousal in her voice.

“Shit....please Jack. I wa....I want....” Riddick tried to speak but her movements on his lower body made it impossible.

“Tell me Riddick.” Jack whispered in his ear while flicking her tongue across the lobe. “What do you want. Tell me what I can do for you.”

Riddick couldn’t think straight. Her movements were hypnotic and all his blood was rushing to the wrong head. He resisted, not willing to respond to her, he couldn’t ask her, it felt wrong.

Jack noticed his distress at asking for what he wanted. Without breaking the movement from her hips she pulled Riddick down a bit closer to her and traced his lips with her tongue.

“Tell me Riddick. All you have to do it tell me.” Jack breathed into his mouth.

Riddick opened his eyes and looked at Jack who was positively glowing through his shined vision. He sought her encouraging glance and shuddered. “I want...aww....Fuck.” He grunted while squeezing his eyes shut for a second. “Fuck me Jack. I want you to fuck me.”

Jack smiled and kissed him hard on the lips, her tongue exploring him. She pulled back and looked him in the eyes with acceptance and devotion and nodded her head slightly.

“On your back.” She whispered.

Riddick rolled over onto his back taking Jack with him. Jack kissed his lips and then traced small circles down his throat and chest to his nipples. She nipped and sucked on them till they were hard. She continued her way down his abdomen tracing the muscles with the tip of her pointed tongue. She slid her body down his thighs so her mouth could play. As she reached his stiff cock she sat up and looked at Riddick with a sly smile.

“I want you to watch me.” She said playfully.

Riddick sat up a bit, his body resting on his elbows, his chest heaving, and his eyes glued to Jack he had no more thought about getting out of this. Jack was in control now, and in a strange way he liked it.

Jack wrapped her fingers around the base of Riddick’s shaft started to pump slowly. Riddick growled in return and watched Jack lower her body to the bed while keeping her eyes trained on him.

“If there’s something you like Riddick, tell me. If you want me to do something again, tell me. If I don’t hear what you want I’ll stop.”

Riddick looked at her in amazement as she ducked down and slowly slid her tongue up the underside length of his cock. Riddick’s breathing caught in his throat, but he quickly recovered.

Jack smiled at him and watched his eyes. Riddick nodded his approval and Jack repeated her previous action. After which she slowly took the head of Riddick’s engorged cock into her mouth and she sucked hard while pulling her head up causing a loud suction noise. Riddick’s head lolled back at the sensation Jack causes and his breathing hitched.

Jack played with the base of Riddick’s shaft, lightly touching and stroking him, while she awaited what he wanted next. Riddick slowly brought his head up and looked at Jack. She smiled at the fact that she had rendered Riddick speechless. She dipped her head down and this time took Riddick all the way in her mouth. It took a couple seconds to get past her gag reflex but she was able to accomplish the task. When she felt him pushing the back of her throat she wanted to smile at what his reaction would be to this next feat. She looked up to see his face as she swallowed.

“Awww......FUCK!” He roared as his upper body collapsed onto the bed, his breathing erratic. Jack sucked lightly as she pulled back up and just suckled the tip of Riddick now rock hard cock.

“That.....” Jack heard him rumble. “Do that again Jack.”

Jack didn’t have to be asked twice. She slid back down his erect member and repeated the motion, again getting an explosive reaction from him. In all he had her do it 5 times before he couldn’t stand it any longer and he almost begged her to stop. Jack inched her way back up his body and straddled his waist, her juices smearing across his cock that lay flush with his stomach. Not able to move Riddick stared at her as she leaned down placing a soft kiss on his lips, then she sat up and reached between their bodies grabbing his length and positioning him at her entrance. Riddick’s hands came to her hips and he grasped her to help her balance. Jack lowered herself onto him so painfully slow he moaned in protest, but did not interfere. Once he was buried to the hilt she started a slow rocking motion.

“Oh...yesss....” Jack moaned as she moved on him speeding up a bit.

Riddick just watched in fascination as she rode him. She was beautiful and smart, and she wanted him. After everything that had happened, she still wanted to be with him. The beast inside was getting restless for something more intense, but Riddick kept his state of mind. He feared letting the beast out again.

Jack looked in to Riddick’s eyes and let a smile touch her lips.

“Tell me Riddick.....I want to hear you say it.” She breathed out.

Riddick clenched his teeth a second before answering. “I want you Jack.” He growled at her. “I want to fuck you, no one but you.”

Jack sped up her movements, leaning forward with a coy expression on her face. She kissed Riddick’s lips and leaned into his ear.

“I want to fuck you too, but I want all of you, not just the man beneath me.” She moved swiftly to the other ear. “I want the beast inside you too that is raging to get out.”

She sat back and leaned back putting her hands on Riddick’s thighs to changed the angle of penetration. Riddick moved with her as that last statement she made to him allowed the beast to rip free from its cage. He grabbed Jack’s breast roughly and played with them while sucking and nipping at her delicate skin. After a few minutes of rough play Jack put her hands on Riddicks chest and pushed him back to the bed.

“Fuck....Riddick.....I’m so close.” She barely got out as the breath was leaving her fast with each thrust that Riddick and her were using to getting closer to their goal. “Touch me Riddick! Make me come....” She rasped out.

Riddick’s thumb found her now large clit and furiously rubbed the sensitive nub making Jack’s world explode. Her body shook as wave after wave hit her. She convulsed above him and her inner muscles clenched Riddick’s cock as he filled her with his seed. His hands gripping her hips so hard she would surely have bruises there. She fell on top of Riddick, her heart beating wildly as was his. They lay together there motionless and silent taking the time to just stroke and enjoy each other before sleep quickly claimed them.








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