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"The Difference"
A/N:
Hey!Thanks so much for reading and for all the wonderful reviews!!!
@ tinamonic~ Hey Sweetheart!Thanks so much for beta reading my love scenes!
"Very,very hot!"--what a sweet compliment to hear from one of the best love scene writer here!Hugs!
@ Zina Wolfgang~ I guess Jack was both protecting his reputation AND furious with Lizzie too...He thought she had no regrets and didn't even care to talk to him,to apologize. And it hurt him very badly!
Glad to hear that you like it so far!I'll definitely write more :)
@ emeraldfire~ A cig?LOL!Thank you soooo much^^
@ JackSparrowsWench~ Oh,thank you!I'm flattered to hear that it came out so very steamy. *blushes*
I'll try to write more smutty stuff!*nods* I love reading and writing steamy J/E scenes!!!
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CHAPTER 5 "THE DIFFERENCE"
"Jack?" Elizabeth was laying deep in Jack's arms, holding his right hand, and tracing the branded "P" with her forefinger.
"Aye, luv?" he asked her back, already half-falling into a slumber, fully satiated but exausted after the whole night of frantic lovemaking.
"Tell me of how you became a pirate."
"Hmmm...you'd better get some sleep,Lizzie.It's nothing interesting."
"Oh, please...Or have you been born as one?" she giggled. "On the high seas?"
"Who told you?" He sounded serious and somehow taken aback,but Lizzie's astonishment was even greater.
"You don't mean it!"
"In fact, I couldn't have chosen a better time and place. Savvy? Somewhere on the open Indian Ocean, no land in sight, my father's histerical crewmen running around in panic, fearing that death was nearing with the raging typhoon. And my mother had full right to be scared even more, because I stubbornly insisted on welcoming the world in said circumstances. According to her, all aboard survived the unsurvivable. My father was a good captain, you know... And a good pirate."
Elizabeth was listening with interest, picturing the unusual incident in her imagination.
"It's unbelievable...and it practically means,that you were born as a pirate."
"Not quite,luv.Even though pirate's blood flows in my veins,I was all set not to follow my infamous daddy's footsteps,whom I've never loved or even liked, for that matter.
"Is he dead?"
"No. He retired a few years back, and is now the much honoured Keeper of the Code."
His last statement made Lizzie giggle.
"What's so funny,luv?"
"Never have thought that pirates retire.Sounds a bit amusing!"
"Have you ever heard of a grandpa-pirate running for his life,pursued by the Navy? With a help of a walking stick, struggling to keep pace with a turtle?"
He caused another burst of laughter from her."I used to think that pirates don't reach old age," she said after calming down a bit. "They get killed in duels and battles, storms at sea or...end up on the noose."
"Quite many pirates do reach old age, darling.Just look at me!" he chuckled.
"Oh, and how old would you be?" she asked in deep disbelief.
The question hit him like a rock and Jack suddenly realized that he had actually set a trap for himself. "It will be bloody hard to outwit her now..." he thought
"I'm a gentleman,so...ladies first!"
"Alright. I just turned twenty.Your turn."
"Well, I'm ...definitely a bit older than that. But I guess, it's better you don't know how much."
"Jack,that's unfair!You've promised!"
"No, I haven't. Besides, if I tell you, you will be looking at me with disgust."
"Oh shut it. I don't care, even if you were twice my age..."
"Why ask me then?" he chuckled in amusement
"Curiosity. No matter how many years you count, you don't look as old as I always assumed you would. After all, you are a living legend already. I used to have an image of you in my mind, based on all the heaps of stories I've read. I used to think, you must be quite old by now. So I was pretty amazed when you fished me out of the water,and I saw you for the first time in my life. Actually, I was shocked to see Captain Jack Sparrow as a young, agile man. And a very witty one, in addition to that."
Jack's broad ,golden smile revealed how flattered he was to hear this.
"And you looked completely different than I've ever imagined," she added after a moment.
"Really? And what did you expect me to look like?" he whispered still smirking, visibly proud of himself.
"First of all, I thought you were taller, and not that slim, and that your body was made of nothing but muscles. As for your face, I suspected it would be somehow...terrifying.You know...kind of more... piratey. And that you were armed to the teeth; your belts filled with a dozen of pistols,and a collection of daggers..."
As Lizzie continued, Jack's grin was gradually disappearing and his eyebrows rising.When she finally finished her litany,Jack pushed her aside rather roughly, and quickly sat up.
"Oh, then I'm terribly sorry to disappoint you, Lizzie!" he growled, raising his hands up.He was clearly offended and he didn't even try to hide it.
"But I didn't say..."she was about to explain herself,but Jack cut her off.
"But what you mean, dearie, is that I'm a dwarfy scrag.Nothing but skin and bones!A weakling whose face doesn't match pirate standards!Eh?"
"Would you shut up and let me finish?" Elizabeth straddled his laps,forcing him to lean back and support himself on his elbows.She couldn't help but giggle while looking at Jack, whose facial expression was absolutely priceless. He was making great efforts to hide his arousal by acting like a sulky child,but she could tell how excited he was getting.
"Jack, you really look totally different than I expected. But..." she paused licking her lips "...what I admire in you is that very difference..." She gave him a smirk and grinded her body against his. A spontaneous moan escaped his mouth against his will,but he didn't intend to give in.
"I don't believe any single word, lass.If you really mean it, you'll have to prove it..." he claimed in a low, husky vioce.
"If you think,you can bear it, Jack..." she smiled seductively and lowered her head,almost touching his lips with hers.
As he was hungrily waiting for her to capture his lips in a hot kiss,she continued speaking.
"The difference is what drives me crazy,Jack...These beautifully different eyes that make my heart melt, your excitingly different voice,that makes my body tremble...These deliciously different lips I could be kissing endlessly..."
Her mouth finally found his,and she gave him a truly wild kiss,that made him plead for more.She pretended not to hear his whispers,and pushed him,forcing him to lay down instead.
"Then, there are these delightfully different hands..." she whispered, placing his palms on her laps,slowly sliding them upwards,allowing him to hold her slim waist.She arched back,enjoying sweet sensations running through her skin,as she was leading his hands up, right to her breasts.Jack was lost in the moment,totally surprised and overwhelmed by her actions.As much as he loved whatever she was doing to him,he knew he wouldn't be able to bear it much longer. Lizzie however,went on.
"And, not to forget about this lusciously different,smooth, bronze chest of yours ..." she gave him a much telling look, bending down to kiss and nip the dark skin of his chest,beginning by his neck,moving down with torturous slowness,not sparing his sensitive nipples.
Jack couldn't control himself anymore.Groaning and whispering her name,he was begging her not to stop. At that moment she withdrew her lips,realizing that she has been teasing both of them to the peak of their arousal.
"And what I adore most, is--" she intended to continue,but Jack didn't let her.
"Enough teasing!" he hissed, and shifted her hips roughly,impaling her on his hardness and making her cry out breathlessly in surprise and deep pleasure.
"Now you are allowed to finish, Lizzie...What is that you adore most, eh?"
Every single movement, every rotation of his hips made her shake and whimper, and her pirate lover admired it as much as the lovely sight of her; her tawny hair tossled, covering parts of her flushed face. He was staring at those raspberry-like lips now parted, eyebrows furrowed and eyes closed in pure bliss.The rapturous view of her on top of him took him higher, and he could hear his racing heartbeat echoing in his ears.
"Say it.I want to hear it. Now!"
"What I...I...ohhh! No fair !" She couldn't think straight when he was filling her to the brim.
"Aye, lass. After all, you don't expect a pirate to play fair. Do you now?" he grinned devilishly "Will you finally release that little secret of yours?"
"What I adore most... is the way you... ahhh...make me... ohhh!" she gasped struggling to finish what she was trying to say
"C'mon, out with it!" he demanded, pushing up into her begging entrance harder and faster
"...the way you...make me touch skies when you're inside me..."
"I'll let you return the favour, Lizzie. Take us there. Right to the blank edges."
Supporting herself on her hands she began to move shyly on her own. Jack's grip on her hips tightened as he was helping her to ride him, sliding her up and down his shaft. She found the rhythm quickly, and gained selfconfidence from Jack's praises - both dirty and sweet in her ears.
"That's it, Lizzie. Ride this pirate..." she heard him say huskily
Her inner muscles clenched around him, pulling him even deeper into her and he hissed inhaling sharply .She knew that he loved what she was doing to him.She could see it written on his face,she could feel his body welcoming her every stroke with eagerness.She heared it in his every grunt and groan. Still it was hard for Elizabeth to believe ,that she was now the one making them tremble and moan in unison. Glancing at his face, she's noticed how his eyes were closing in rapture and how desperately he was fighting against it, struggling to keep his gaze focused on her face, on her body. She suddenly sped up, her body on the verge of climax. He reacted with a guttural grunt and a painful grip on her hips.
"Yes... Just like that... Fuck me! " he growled feeling his end nearing at a staggering speed.
His head tilted back and a frown crossed his face, as if he was suffering from unbearable pain. His release met hers as he plunged hard into her quivering sheath, erupting deep inside her spasming body. She collapsed like a puddle, her sweaty body limp and shivering in the aftermath of her orgasm.
Jack reached for her trembling frame and pulled her close to him, embracing her tightly. Gently combing her tousled hair with his long fingers he smiled to himself.
"She is amazing..." he thought closing his tired eyes, falling into a deep,peaceful sleep.
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A/N:Chapter number 6 is coming soon! If you leave your review it may come even sooner!!! ^^
Big hugs to all my readers !!!
Addicted_to_Jack
Hey!Thanks so much for reading and for all the wonderful reviews!!!
@ tinamonic~ Hey Sweetheart!Thanks so much for beta reading my love scenes!
"Very,very hot!"--what a sweet compliment to hear from one of the best love scene writer here!Hugs!
@ Zina Wolfgang~ I guess Jack was both protecting his reputation AND furious with Lizzie too...He thought she had no regrets and didn't even care to talk to him,to apologize. And it hurt him very badly!
Glad to hear that you like it so far!I'll definitely write more :)
@ emeraldfire~ A cig?LOL!Thank you soooo much^^
@ JackSparrowsWench~ Oh,thank you!I'm flattered to hear that it came out so very steamy. *blushes*
I'll try to write more smutty stuff!*nods* I love reading and writing steamy J/E scenes!!!
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CHAPTER 5 "THE DIFFERENCE"
"Jack?" Elizabeth was laying deep in Jack's arms, holding his right hand, and tracing the branded "P" with her forefinger.
"Aye, luv?" he asked her back, already half-falling into a slumber, fully satiated but exausted after the whole night of frantic lovemaking.
"Tell me of how you became a pirate."
"Hmmm...you'd better get some sleep,Lizzie.It's nothing interesting."
"Oh, please...Or have you been born as one?" she giggled. "On the high seas?"
"Who told you?" He sounded serious and somehow taken aback,but Lizzie's astonishment was even greater.
"You don't mean it!"
"In fact, I couldn't have chosen a better time and place. Savvy? Somewhere on the open Indian Ocean, no land in sight, my father's histerical crewmen running around in panic, fearing that death was nearing with the raging typhoon. And my mother had full right to be scared even more, because I stubbornly insisted on welcoming the world in said circumstances. According to her, all aboard survived the unsurvivable. My father was a good captain, you know... And a good pirate."
Elizabeth was listening with interest, picturing the unusual incident in her imagination.
"It's unbelievable...and it practically means,that you were born as a pirate."
"Not quite,luv.Even though pirate's blood flows in my veins,I was all set not to follow my infamous daddy's footsteps,whom I've never loved or even liked, for that matter.
"Is he dead?"
"No. He retired a few years back, and is now the much honoured Keeper of the Code."
His last statement made Lizzie giggle.
"What's so funny,luv?"
"Never have thought that pirates retire.Sounds a bit amusing!"
"Have you ever heard of a grandpa-pirate running for his life,pursued by the Navy? With a help of a walking stick, struggling to keep pace with a turtle?"
He caused another burst of laughter from her."I used to think that pirates don't reach old age," she said after calming down a bit. "They get killed in duels and battles, storms at sea or...end up on the noose."
"Quite many pirates do reach old age, darling.Just look at me!" he chuckled.
"Oh, and how old would you be?" she asked in deep disbelief.
The question hit him like a rock and Jack suddenly realized that he had actually set a trap for himself. "It will be bloody hard to outwit her now..." he thought
"I'm a gentleman,so...ladies first!"
"Alright. I just turned twenty.Your turn."
"Well, I'm ...definitely a bit older than that. But I guess, it's better you don't know how much."
"Jack,that's unfair!You've promised!"
"No, I haven't. Besides, if I tell you, you will be looking at me with disgust."
"Oh shut it. I don't care, even if you were twice my age..."
"Why ask me then?" he chuckled in amusement
"Curiosity. No matter how many years you count, you don't look as old as I always assumed you would. After all, you are a living legend already. I used to have an image of you in my mind, based on all the heaps of stories I've read. I used to think, you must be quite old by now. So I was pretty amazed when you fished me out of the water,and I saw you for the first time in my life. Actually, I was shocked to see Captain Jack Sparrow as a young, agile man. And a very witty one, in addition to that."
Jack's broad ,golden smile revealed how flattered he was to hear this.
"And you looked completely different than I've ever imagined," she added after a moment.
"Really? And what did you expect me to look like?" he whispered still smirking, visibly proud of himself.
"First of all, I thought you were taller, and not that slim, and that your body was made of nothing but muscles. As for your face, I suspected it would be somehow...terrifying.You know...kind of more... piratey. And that you were armed to the teeth; your belts filled with a dozen of pistols,and a collection of daggers..."
As Lizzie continued, Jack's grin was gradually disappearing and his eyebrows rising.When she finally finished her litany,Jack pushed her aside rather roughly, and quickly sat up.
"Oh, then I'm terribly sorry to disappoint you, Lizzie!" he growled, raising his hands up.He was clearly offended and he didn't even try to hide it.
"But I didn't say..."she was about to explain herself,but Jack cut her off.
"But what you mean, dearie, is that I'm a dwarfy scrag.Nothing but skin and bones!A weakling whose face doesn't match pirate standards!Eh?"
"Would you shut up and let me finish?" Elizabeth straddled his laps,forcing him to lean back and support himself on his elbows.She couldn't help but giggle while looking at Jack, whose facial expression was absolutely priceless. He was making great efforts to hide his arousal by acting like a sulky child,but she could tell how excited he was getting.
"Jack, you really look totally different than I expected. But..." she paused licking her lips "...what I admire in you is that very difference..." She gave him a smirk and grinded her body against his. A spontaneous moan escaped his mouth against his will,but he didn't intend to give in.
"I don't believe any single word, lass.If you really mean it, you'll have to prove it..." he claimed in a low, husky vioce.
"If you think,you can bear it, Jack..." she smiled seductively and lowered her head,almost touching his lips with hers.
As he was hungrily waiting for her to capture his lips in a hot kiss,she continued speaking.
"The difference is what drives me crazy,Jack...These beautifully different eyes that make my heart melt, your excitingly different voice,that makes my body tremble...These deliciously different lips I could be kissing endlessly..."
Her mouth finally found his,and she gave him a truly wild kiss,that made him plead for more.She pretended not to hear his whispers,and pushed him,forcing him to lay down instead.
"Then, there are these delightfully different hands..." she whispered, placing his palms on her laps,slowly sliding them upwards,allowing him to hold her slim waist.She arched back,enjoying sweet sensations running through her skin,as she was leading his hands up, right to her breasts.Jack was lost in the moment,totally surprised and overwhelmed by her actions.As much as he loved whatever she was doing to him,he knew he wouldn't be able to bear it much longer. Lizzie however,went on.
"And, not to forget about this lusciously different,smooth, bronze chest of yours ..." she gave him a much telling look, bending down to kiss and nip the dark skin of his chest,beginning by his neck,moving down with torturous slowness,not sparing his sensitive nipples.
Jack couldn't control himself anymore.Groaning and whispering her name,he was begging her not to stop. At that moment she withdrew her lips,realizing that she has been teasing both of them to the peak of their arousal.
"And what I adore most, is--" she intended to continue,but Jack didn't let her.
"Enough teasing!" he hissed, and shifted her hips roughly,impaling her on his hardness and making her cry out breathlessly in surprise and deep pleasure.
"Now you are allowed to finish, Lizzie...What is that you adore most, eh?"
Every single movement, every rotation of his hips made her shake and whimper, and her pirate lover admired it as much as the lovely sight of her; her tawny hair tossled, covering parts of her flushed face. He was staring at those raspberry-like lips now parted, eyebrows furrowed and eyes closed in pure bliss.The rapturous view of her on top of him took him higher, and he could hear his racing heartbeat echoing in his ears.
"Say it.I want to hear it. Now!"
"What I...I...ohhh! No fair !" She couldn't think straight when he was filling her to the brim.
"Aye, lass. After all, you don't expect a pirate to play fair. Do you now?" he grinned devilishly "Will you finally release that little secret of yours?"
"What I adore most... is the way you... ahhh...make me... ohhh!" she gasped struggling to finish what she was trying to say
"C'mon, out with it!" he demanded, pushing up into her begging entrance harder and faster
"...the way you...make me touch skies when you're inside me..."
"I'll let you return the favour, Lizzie. Take us there. Right to the blank edges."
Supporting herself on her hands she began to move shyly on her own. Jack's grip on her hips tightened as he was helping her to ride him, sliding her up and down his shaft. She found the rhythm quickly, and gained selfconfidence from Jack's praises - both dirty and sweet in her ears.
"That's it, Lizzie. Ride this pirate..." she heard him say huskily
Her inner muscles clenched around him, pulling him even deeper into her and he hissed inhaling sharply .She knew that he loved what she was doing to him.She could see it written on his face,she could feel his body welcoming her every stroke with eagerness.She heared it in his every grunt and groan. Still it was hard for Elizabeth to believe ,that she was now the one making them tremble and moan in unison. Glancing at his face, she's noticed how his eyes were closing in rapture and how desperately he was fighting against it, struggling to keep his gaze focused on her face, on her body. She suddenly sped up, her body on the verge of climax. He reacted with a guttural grunt and a painful grip on her hips.
"Yes... Just like that... Fuck me! " he growled feeling his end nearing at a staggering speed.
His head tilted back and a frown crossed his face, as if he was suffering from unbearable pain. His release met hers as he plunged hard into her quivering sheath, erupting deep inside her spasming body. She collapsed like a puddle, her sweaty body limp and shivering in the aftermath of her orgasm.
Jack reached for her trembling frame and pulled her close to him, embracing her tightly. Gently combing her tousled hair with his long fingers he smiled to himself.
"She is amazing..." he thought closing his tired eyes, falling into a deep,peaceful sleep.
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A/N:Chapter number 6 is coming soon! If you leave your review it may come even sooner!!! ^^
Big hugs to all my readers !!!
Addicted_to_Jack