AFF Fiction Portal

ManEater

By: tinamonic
folder Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › Het - Male/Female › Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 57
Views: 18,809
Reviews: 178
Recommended: 0
Currently Reading: 1
Disclaimer: I do not own the Pirates of the Caribbean movie series, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
arrow_back Previous Next arrow_forward

I Melt When I'm Inside of You

Jack Sparrow

It was now evening in Port Royale. The sun was still setting over the horizon, causing the sky to turn a pink-purplish color. The air was stale and unusually warmer than it was earlier in the day. Gibbs, Pintel, Ragetti, and I sat with Will in the pub, and talking drinking merrily. Normally, I would be the loudest pirate talking and carrying about, drawing attention to myself…but I didn’t feel like doing that tonight. My mind was focused on other things…things that only involved me and a very special lady. I couldn’t help but to think about Elizabeth every single second…about how much I had missed her… how I was finally going to give her what every woman wants…Capn’ Jack Sparrow’s goods. I could feel a large grin start to spread across my face as I took another sip from my second bottle of rum.

“Hey Jack what are you smiling about? Will asked, eyeing me curiously.

I wanted to tell him that in a few hours, I would be alone naked with his beloved fiancée, shagging her, giving her the most unbelievable night that she’s ever had in her life, as I do say so myself. But I felt a little bit sorry for the eunuch…after all; he is one of my best mates. I am technically betraying him and stealing his lass, but I’m a pirate, I take what I want...when I want it. He must understand that no man can compete against Capn’ Jack Sparrow when it comes to the ladies…they can’t resist me, they always choose me. But I can’t tell him that it’s Elizabeth who was the one that brought a smile to my face, the only one who captivated my heart. Even though women have made me smile, but for other pleasurable reasons. I decided not to boast and keep my secret to myself. I placed my hand on his shoulder as I faced him grinning. “If ya only knew mate…if ya only knew…”

Over the next hour or so, I was becoming bored with their company. I grew tired of sitting and talking to these scoundrels. Of course they were my dear friends, but I had no interest in being there with them tonight. For the first time in my life I was not all that interested in drinking rum tonight. My head was still away, off thinking about Elizabeth, and how close it was to the time that I would soon see her again. I began to think about how her body would look naked…what I would do to that body…how I would make her scream. I began to feel a certain 'part' of me waking up, and I knew it was time for me to go.

“Well mates, sorry to cut our little fun short but I have to go tend to my business.” I said as I quickly got out of my seat.

“Hey Capn’ where ya goin’?” Pintel asked drunkenly.

“Can’t tell you! None of your business!”

“Can we come?” Ragetti asked as he stood up.

“No! I mean…no. Why don’t you stay here for the rest of the night and drink more rum?” I said calmly as I pushed him down by the shoulders so that he could sit in his chair.

“But Capn’ what...”Pintel began to ask.

“I don’t know! Do whatever you want to do! But under no circumstances are you to come on the Pearl or come in my cabin, savvy? Do not disturb me tonight! I said as I quickly ran out the door.

------------------------

It was now very dark outside. The moon and stars were shining brighter in the sky than I had ever seen ‘em, as if they knew tonight was going to be (let’s just say) mind blowing for me. I quickly walked down the streets, ignoring every woman who was staring at me, trying to get my attention. Normally I would entertain the attention I got from these women, but I wasn’t interested, I was only interested in Elizabeth. It’s been a while, too long actually, since I have done the honor of giving my goods to a woman. My body was cravin’ this…I needed this. Lizzie definitely needed this. I tried not to think about how it would feel to be inside her, for I didn’t want to arouse myself even more and start walking funny.

I finally reached the ramp of the Pearl and ran quickly into the cabin and straightened up the area. I lit a few candles so that the room could have a romantic, yet seductive feel to it. After all, it was going to be a very special night. Not only for me but, especially for her. I waited inside for a few more minutes trying to control myself until I heard loud, drunken singing coming from outside. “Blasted pirates.” I said as I walked onto the main deck. It was Gibbs, Ragetti, Pintel, and…oh, they brought the little drunken eunuch with ‘em. I continued to watch them as they stumbled along the beach down to the campgrounds. I’m glad that they set up camp so far away…that way, they won’t be able to hear the loud screaming that would be coming from my cabin, not that I would mind but I didn’t want Lizzie to feel embarrassed if they did happen to hear us. I just hope they remember not to disturb me tonight…

I decided to stay on the main deck and wait for Elizabeth; I was too anxious to wait for her inside. I could see the crews’ campfire still burnin’ brightly on the beach. I noticed that some of ‘em were passed out on the sand from drinking too much. That would’ve been me down there, piss drunk. That’s why I only had two bottles of rum. I didn’t want to be drunk or tired because I needed to be wide-awake and full of energy for tonight. I didn’t want to disappoint Lizzie or give her a bad performance.

Off in the distance, I noticed a glowing, womanly figure slowly approaching the beach. The moon shined brightly down on her, transforming her into a ghost. “Elizabeth” I whispered quietly under my breath as I walked over to the cabin door. I had one nerve to go inside and take off all of my clothes and lie down on the bed and let her find me there, but being as though this is her first time, we’ll take it slow...for now. When she finally walked onto the main deck, her beauty floored me. She wore a flowing white nightgown with a nightcoat over it. Her hair was the way I liked it; pinned up with strands of hair flowing in the back. I would have rather she came naked, then we could really get down to business, but that’s just me. I wanted to run over and grab her into my cabin and throw her on the bed and do everything to her. I could feel myself becoming more aroused as she stepped closer to me.

Elizabeth
There he was, standing by his cabin door with his arms folded, legs crossed, leaning against the doorway in all his splendor and unmistakable handsomeness. He appeared different somehow…perhaps it was the bright moonlight that enhanced his features. He looked more seductive and even more irresistible at night. An overwhelming feeling of nervousness well up inside of me. I began to think that I was making a mistake…allowing a pirate to take my virginity. I was scared that he wouldn’t know how to be gentle, that he would take this moment as being a conquest, instead of it being a special moment for the both of us. But I knew in my heart that it wasn't a mistake...I knew he loved me, and I trust him. I nearly fell down to my feet because of the way he was staring at me…as if he was undressing me with his eyes. My heart felt like it was pounding in my throat as I stepped closer to him and boldly gazed into his dangerous eyes.

“So Elizabeth, I see you’ve made it here…right on time. I knew you couldn’t resist…I can tell that your curious…your anxious, aye love?” He said smoothly under his breath as he smiled devilishly at me.

“I didn’t come for curiosity. I came because the captain asked me to come here at midnight.” I retorted boldly as I stepped closer to him. I knew he was trying to play mind games with me, so I decided to entertain his teasing. His arrogance always infuriated me, but tonight I’ll let him get away with it.

“Well, this said captain must have some sort of effect on you if he asked you to come and you’re here. He must be an irresistible fellow I suppose.” He replied as he caressed my cheek. The very touch of his hand against my skin made me tremble, as if I was about to collapse onto the floor.

“You’re tremblin’ milady…I guess I'm starting to have an affect on you. Tell me, are you feeling warmth between your thighs?” He cooed seductively into my ear as he grabbed my waist and drew me in closer, enticing me with those damn eyes.

I was lost for words. I was surprised at what he had just asked me. I closed my eyes and began to move my head in delight as his hands traveled down from my face onto the top part of my center. I let out a soft moan as he moved his hand down to my thighs and began to grope my center.

He then began to kiss my neck and lift my nightgown, stopping right at my waist. He pressed his hardness against my center and began to grind into me. I was shocked at first, but then relaxed into the sensation he was giving me. “See Lizzie, you did this to me…you’re getting me aroused…”

“I…I…”
“You what, Lizzie?” He said huskily as he began to lift my leg and press harder against my center.

I snapped out of my trance and glared him in the eyes. “I’m nervous, and you still don’t have an effect on me…” I retorted defiantly, as I continued to play his mind game.

“Well, if I don’t have an effect on you and you’re so nervous and uptight, you can leave…I don’t have time for little girls.” He said playfully, yet snidely as he removed his hand from my crotch and let go of my leg. I could tell that he didn’t want me to leave; he wanted to see if I was truly ready to lose my virginity to him. I was starting to feel annoyed by his boyish antics and the fact that he wasn’t touching me or holding me in his arms anymore.

“Fine.” I said as I turned to leave.

“Where the hell do you think you’re going, love?” He said commandingly as he grabbed my arm and drew me in closer to him.

“The captain asked me to leave, so I’m leaving. I always follow the captain’s orders.”

A devious grin began to form on Jack’s face. I could tell that he was enjoying my antics.

“Never thought you were the sort to obey the orders of a pirate, love.” He said as he caressed my face.

“Jack, you have absolutely no idea what orders I would obey from you.” I replied seductively, as I stepped closer to him.

He grabbed me by the waist and held me firmly. I could tell by the hunger in his charcoal lined eyes that I had ignited uncontrollable desire and aggression that I wasn’t sure if I could handle.

“Well then love, consider yourself warned. Whatever I tell you to do, you must do…I promise you that I’ll have you doing and saying things that you’ve never even imagined. And I promise you that you’ll be beggin’ for more…” His voice sneered hungrily as he kissed my neck

The very warmth and softness of his lips made me quiver with excitement. He then moved his hand back down to my center and rubbed his firm groin against it.

“You know you want this…you can’t resist. I won’t let you…” He whispered as he nibbled my ear.

“I do…I want you Jack…” I uttered breathlessly as I gazed into his smoldering eyes.

With lightning quick speed, Jack passionately kissed me on the lips and whisked me away into his cabin, closing and locking the door behind us. I could feel his body trembling with desire as he pressed me against the wall and continued to feverishly kiss me on the lips. I could feel him becoming aroused as his body pressed closer to mine. I began to feel extreme warmth between my thighs as his groin continued to press harder against my body. I was so lost in the moment, that I willingly surrendered myself to him.

Jack
I couldn’t help myself. Once she said those words to me and I stared deep into her eyes, I just had to have her now. I continued to kiss her passionately against the wall, savoring the taste of her soft lips. I could feel myself becoming even more aroused as I pressed myself harder against her. I began to tongue kiss her soft neck and grope her breasts, causing her to let out a soft moan. We then broke away from our intense kissing as I led her over to the middle of the room and removed the night coat from her body. I feverishly kissed her on the lips and noticed that she was taking my hat off of my head, and untying my belt, throwing them onto the floor. She then did something that really took me by surprise. She placed her hand inside my trousers and began to caress my private and stared at me with hunger in her eyes. I removed her hand playfully and gently kissed her on the lips.

“Not now love, you’re not ready for the goods yet.”

Her soft touch on 'little Jack' only made it worse. I was about to explode with so much passion that I was afraid I might not be able to control myself or finish teasing her, but she’ll learn not to arouse a pirate so much next time. I led her over to the bed and quickly unbuttoned her silky gown, allowin’ it to fall gracefully to the floor. I was amazed by her naked body; it was the most beautiful thing I’d ever seen in my life. She was at first ashamed to be standin’ there stark naked in front of me. She kept covering her breasts with one hand and covered her private with the other. I stepped closer to her and held her arms out to the side and passionately kissed her on the lips. I tongue kissed her neck as I teasingly moved my hands down her breasts until I stopped right above her center.

“See love, you don’t have to cover up…I’ve seen this all before…”

I could feel her body shuddering and soft moans escaping her mouth as I continued to tease her. I took her in my arms again and grabbed her soft bum. I could hear her moaning weakly into my ear, making me become more rigid.

“You don’t want me to stop love…do you? You love the way my hands feel on your body…Answer me Lizzie…” I commanded her. I could hear her try to utter words from her mouth, but she couldn’t. I made it even worse for her by licking her neck. She dug her nails into my back, holding on for dear life as she began moaning my name.

“Jack…please…I can’t take it anymore…I want you inside me.”

“Patience love, you’re not ready yet…” I crooned enticingly into her ear as her hold on me tightened.

“Undress me.” I demanded her as I placed her hands on my shirt. She slowly began to unbutton my shirt and threw it onto the floor. I could tell that she was amazed by the many tattoos that donned my handsomely chiseled chest. She began to slowly trace my scars with her fingers. I flinched at the soft touch of her hands as they soon traveled down towards my waist and unbuttoned my trousers. As they dropped to the floor, she took one step back and stared at my member in amazement.

“Magnificent isn’t it?” I asked cunningly. I noticed that her face was flushed, as if she was scared.

“I…I had no idea…I’ve never seen anything like it before…” She stuttered, unable to remove her eyes away from it. I grabbed her hand and snatched her closer to me and forced our bare parts to touch each other.

“See love, you don’t have to be scared of him. He doesn’t bite…unless you want him to.” I whispered into her ear as I kissed her along her jaw line. I could feel her hand carefully caress my hardness from bottom to top. I could tell now that she was becoming more relaxed and sure of what to do.

She smiled hungrily at me as she gently kissed me on the lips all the way down to my neck. I felt her hands caress my chest and then secretly stroked my groin again. I let out a soft moan as she kissed my chest and looked me in the eyes again.

“I see I’m having an affect on you Jack.” She cooed as she stopped kissing me, but kept caressing my private. I almost blacked out from the intensity of the moment, but soon gained control over my body. I grinned at her devilishly and passionately kissed her on the lips. My hand traveled slowly down her soft body as I pressed our naked bodies together. I secretly moved one hand down her inner thighs and felt that she was becoming hot with desire. I held her by the waist and lifted her leg and teasingly rubbed the tip of lil’ Jack at the entrance to her center. She threw her head back and moaned in pleasure. I then took her by surprise and slipped two fingers inside, rubbing the soft sensitive area gently.

“You like that don’t you? You love how I’m teasin’ you…you want him inside you. You’re curious as to how he feels…how he can make you do anything I say…”

I could feel that she was about to collapse into my arms. Her breath became short as she nodded her head to every question I asked.

“Jack…damn you…that’s not fair…Jack…please don’t stop…please.” She pleaded as I tongue kissed her neck and continued to caress her center. She finally released her hold on me as she went limp from what I was doing to her.

“Aye love, I’m a pirate…I’m not suppose to be fair.” I said as I glared into her soul. I could tell now that she was ready to feel me inside of her, for she couldn’t stop begging me to do so. I led her over to the bed and lay on top of her, kissing her passionately on the lips. She wrapped her legs around me, ready and waiting for me to slide inside her. She cupped my face into her hands and smiled, staring at me with anticipation.

I smiled and lifted myself off of her and spread her legs apart. She looked at me with questionable eyes, as if she was confused about something.

“Jack, what are you doing?” She asked as she lifted herself up.

I gently pushed her back onto the pillow and grinned wickedly at her. “Shhh. Lie down and do not move. Trust me…you’ll like this.”

I said commandingly as I passionately kissed her on the lips. I teasingly moved my hand down to her center and slid two fingers inside, stroking her innermost part. She shifted her body and groaned softly as I continued to kiss her all the way down until I reached her stomach. I menacingly taunted her even more as I used my tongue and traced an invisible line from her belly button all the way down to her sweet, sensitive spot. I could feel her body shift down closer to my face. I then blew warm breath over her center and watched her reaction. She moaned my name and begged me to do what I wanted to do to her. I kissed the outside of her folds and hungrily slipped my tongue inside her.

She arched her hips and grabbed my hair. Her soft moans gradually got louder with each stoke my tongue made against her delicate area.

“Jack! Oh my God, Jack! She screamed as she continued to pull my hair. She then rocked her hips to every stroke I made with my tongue. I could tell that she was ready. My arousal was at its peak and I knew that it was time to find out how it felt to be inside of her. I got up from in between her legs and positioned myself on top of her, and gazed into her beautiful brown eyes.

“Tell me love, are you willing and able to make love to a pirate?”

She playfully bit the bottom of my lip and smiled at me seductively. “Only if he is willing and able to make love to a virgin.”

“Well then love, I must warn you, it’s gonna hurt, a lot at first, but it’s because of my undeniable large size.” I boasted, grinning at her reassuringly.

She glanced at me in disbelief, thinking that I was exaggerating. “Jack, that can’t be the real reason…the only reason for it to be painful is the fact that I am a virgin and I haven’t been touched there.” She replied knowingly.

“That may be true to a certain degree love, but you forgot one thing…”

“And what could that possibly be?” She asked with a mocking smile.

“You’re dealing with Capn’ Jack Sparrow…my goods are different from other men. I must tell you, it could get a bit rough and I won’t control myself.” I whispered in her ear as I began to slowly, but gently slide myself inside her warm core.

“You can do what you want to me Jack…I can handle it…but please be gentle.” She whispered soothingly as she stared me in my eyes. She suddenly gasped and grabbed my back tightly, as if she was in pain. I immediately stopped and looked worriedly into her eyes.

“Are you alright love? Am I hurting you?”

She opened her eyes and smiled reassuringly. “Yes I’m alright…please keep going...I love the way you feel inside of me. Show me how you’re better than other men…” She pleaded breathlessly as she arched her hips closer to my body. Daring, just like me…I’ll definitely show her what I can do…if she can handle it.

I began to passionately kiss her neck as I slid myself back inside her. I could feel her body began to tense in pain with every slow stroke.

“Don’t worry love, you’ll start feeling better in a few, then you’ll really know what little Jack feels like.” I whispered seductively into her ear.

Over the next few minutes, my thrusts became much easier and smoother as her delicate interior stretched. I was now able to go deeper inside her and really make her scream my name. Her gasps of pain turned into loud moans of pleasure as I deepened myself further inside her and tongue kissed her neck.

“I want you to scream Lizzie…” I demanded as my thrusts became faster and harder.

“Jack…you bloody pirate…go deeper…don’t you dare stop…” She demanded me sweetly as she tightened her grip around my body. A rush of contentment welled up inside me as my arousal became even stronger. I loved it when women said my name, especially when I was inside ‘em.

“That’s Capn’ Jack to you love” I whispered enticingly as I glared into her eyes and passionately kissed her lips.

I could feel my body begin to lose control of itself as I began to feel the effects she was having on me. I’ve never experienced so much bliss just being inside any woman. She was so warm and soft inside that I could not bear this unbelievable feeling. She was actually just as good as me…being that this is her first time and all. Her moans began to turn into screams of my name, but I did not care if anyone heard us.

“You’re not screamin’ loud enough love. I'm going to go deeper…harder...and I don't care what you say” I sneered into her ear as I gently sucked on her neck.

“I want you to…Dammit…do it!” She whined in pleasurable agony as I slowed down my thrusts teasingly...harder. I could tell that she wasn’t able to talk, for she kept whimpering and breathing harder than she ever had in her life.

I couldn’t help but to laugh. I truly loved how I was making her squirm, making her do what I wanted her to do. She thought she could deny the fact that I could never have an effect on her…that she could resist me. But the truth is, she was never able to resist me, and I was never able to resist her. There was no denying how wonderful being inside her made me feel. I had to bite my bottom lip and try not to yell as loudly as she was…it just felt that damn good! I’d never felt like this when I was with other women…I felt like this was actually my first time…my first time truly making love to someone I love.

I increased my thrusts and noticed that her eyes were rolling towards the back of her head, in elated bliss. I kissed her lips as she continued to chant my name in breathless moans

“Pirate” I said teasingly as I once again lost myself inside of her.

Elizabeth
I was in pure ecstasy as Jack continued to pleasure my body. I was not embarrassed that I was screaming his name and begging him to do whatever he wanted to me. I’ve never thought that making love would be this beautiful and so pleasurable for my first time…as I’ve always heard the opposite. Of course I was in unbearable pain at first, but as Jack promised, it subsided after a few minutes. I believed that if Jack wasn’t so ‘unusually large’, as he had happily pointed out, the pressure would not have hurt that badly. I could hear Jack moaning my name even louder than he was before as he kissed my breasts.

“Lizzie…I could stay inside you forever. Damn you, you feel so good…” He whispered as he lifted my legs and deepened himself further inside me. I let out the loudest scream of the night as I felt the pleasure of his engorged member inside my innermost walls.

After a few moments, Jack rolled me on top him. I instinctively sat up and straddled him, but was confused for a moment. He glanced up at me with his smoky eyes and smiled cunningly.

“You want to know how to ride on top of a pirate? Do you think you can handle it?”

I placed a finger over his soft lips and kissed him. “Shhh, you should be asking yourself the same question …can you handle me being on top of you?” With those last words I passionately kissed his lips and traveled down to his neck. I could feel his body trembling as I began kissing his chest and caressing his body. I was unsure of what he wanted me to do until I felt his strong hands begin to grab my back firmly as he moved my body back and forth over his firmness.

“You ride him like this…” He crooned as he moved my body faster. As I sat up straight, I felt that he was pushing himself up inside of me, slowly, teasingly. The feeling was indescribable. Our movement mimicked the slow, but steady motion of the waves. I tried not to look into his eyes, for I knew I would become mesmerized and overcome by his power. But I gave in to temptation. I noticed that he had a wicked expression on his face, as if he knew that he had complete control over me. He moved his hands from my waist and groped my breasts and began to take short breaths as he closed his eyes. I could tell that now I was really having a powerful affect on him now, for he was calling me names out of love and groaning with pleasure.

“Blasted virgin…pirate…” He cooed snidely. I didn’t take offense to it because that’s what I am…and I didn’t care.

“Lie down on me Lizzie.” He said as he grabbed my arms and drew my body down closer to him. I began to feel that something was about to happen inside his body. With quick speed, he rolled me onto my back and sped up his thrusts even faster than before. I couldn’t help but to scream out his name even louder than before, for the pleasure was too unbearable to contain. He smiled at me cunningly with vulnerability in his eyes as he pressed closer to my body and passionately kissed me on my lips.

“Elizabeth…I love you…oh God I love you…” He kept saying as we both came together with his last, hard thrust. We both stared at each other, lost for words as he continued to lie on top of me. He brushed a strand of hair away from my eye and kissed me on my lips.

“I love you Ms. Swann.” He said with a submissive expression on his face.

“I love you too, Captain Sparrow.” I replied as I cupped his face in my hands.

He rolled over to the other side and lay next to me as we stared up at the ceiling. We were both breathless, drenched with sweat. The room was now completely dark, except for where the moonlight shined through the window, casting a romantic glow over the bed. The fire on the candles had already burned out from our all-night lovemaking. After a few minutes, I glanced over at Jack and noticed that he had drifted off to sleep.

“Damn pirate, so selfish, he couldn’t stay up to talk.” I said as I gently kissed him on the lips and lay my head on his chest. His soft heartbeat began to hypnotize me as I found it difficult to keep my eyes open. I gave in to the temptation and drifted off to sleep, in my captain’s arms.
________________________________________________________________________________________

The next morning, Jack and I awakened to a loud knock on the door. He quickly jumped out of bed and fumbled to put on his trousers and walked slowly to the door.

“Quick! Hide under the covers and don’t move!” He whispered to me. I quickly put the sheets over my body and lay still in the bed. I then felt Jack throw more clothes on top of me until my whole shape was covered.

“There, perfect!” Jack said as he walked back over to the door.

As the door slowly creaked open, a familiar voice greeted Jack. I felt a rush of shock surge through my body as I held my breath.

“Oh bugger…” Jack sighed in annoyance. And from that moment I knew who it was… I just hoped that Jack wouldn’t let him into the room, or else we would be caught, and all would be lost…

A/N: So how did you like it? Please review and keep on reading! There is a lot more in store!
arrow_back Previous Next arrow_forward