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ManEater

By: tinamonic
folder Pirates of the Caribbean (All) › Het - Male/Female › Jack/Elizabeth
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The Woman Is Wild

Jack Sparrow

“Hey Jack.” Will said softly as he stood jadedly at my door. He seemed dreadfully beaten up and ragged, as if he’d had a wild night (not as wild as I had last night!). His hair was messy, half of his shirt was pulled out of his trousers, and he reeked of rum. Poor, pathetic, drunken eunuch.

“I see you’ve had one hell of a night aye mate?” I asked jokingly, trying to lighten up the moment. He just stood there staring at me blankly, as if he didn’t understand what I had said. I knew I had this affect on women, but I’d never thought that men would fall victim to my charms…blekh…too weird to think about. He suddenly leaned forward against the corner of the wall and rested his head on his arm. “Are you alright mate? You look like arse.”

“Can I come in? I need to come in. I must talk to you about something that’s been bothering me.” He panted as he tried to stand.

I looked back over my shoulders at the pile of clothes on my bed that hid Elizabeth. I knew that if I let him in, Lizzie and I would surely be found out and that would not be good. I hesitated for a moment before answering.

“Uhhh…no.”

Will glanced up at me drunkenly, with desperation in his eyes. “What? Why?”

“Ummm…er… Because…you smell like arse, too!”

“What? Jack please…”

“Oh bugger it.” I sighed as I opened the door for him to enter.

“Thank you.” He whispered as he stumbled into the cabin.

I shut the door and noticed that he was standing over by the bed, looking down at the pile of clothes that were sprawled everywhere on it. He then became limp and plopped down heavily onto the bed and lay on the opposite side of the clothes…too close to where Elizabeth was hiding.

“Oh no! Don’t lie there! Get up!” I shouted as I quickly ran over there and grabbed him by the arm and lifted him to his feet. I walked him over to the table and sat him down roughly onto a chair. He glanced up at me confused; obviously a bit offended at what I had done.

“Jack why did you do that?”

“It’s not nice to sit on the Capn’s bed…you could be killed for being so bold.” I replied, trying to sound serious as I sat down in the chair across from him. “So…tell me, why the sudden urge to talk to me?”

Will sat back in his chair and sighed as he glanced over at me. I could see sadness in his eyes…distraught. I had only one guess as to who could be the cause of it…and the culprit was lying over there in my bed, blissfully exhausted from our rendezvous last night.

“It’s about Elizabeth.” Will replied disheartened, slightly poking out his bottom lip.

My eyes widened with delight. I tried to form a concerned expression on my face to try to conceal the elatedness I felt inside. This should be interesting. “What about Elizabeth, William?”

Will sat up straight and moved his chair closer to the table. “She just hasn’t been the same. I feel like she’s distant…as if she doesn’t want to be bothered. She hasn’t been the same person since we’ve come back. Do you know what’s gotten into her?”

I tried to hide the devilish grin that was about to spread across my face, but I couldn’t. I thought that Will’s last statement was quite amusing, but I knew it wasn’t meant to be that way. Of course I knew what was wrong with Lizzie. I knew why she was acting boorish with him. It was because of me. And I was the one who had gotten into her…deep inside her, as I should say…but I dared not tell him.

“Sorry Will, I haven’t noticed anything…I really try my best to avoid Ms Swann... the rum disappears and things tend to burst into flame when she's around.”

Will glanced at me and frowned. He noticed that I had a huge menacing grin on my face. “I’m glad to see that this serious matter is hilarious to you. Thanks for making me feel better Jack.” He sneered sarcastically.

I quickly stopped smiling and forced my face into a serious frown. “Oh this is a very serious matter indeed, William. I really do care about what happens between you and Ms. Swann…and it’s absolutely not funny.” (Oh yes it is! Bloody hilarious!)

Will sighed and rolled his eyes as he began to pour his weak heart out to me. “I’ve always loved Elizabeth…ever since we were kids. She’s the only one who has made my heart truly happy…she makes my heart smile. I’ve always had plans for us to be together…happily married, living a normal life. I don’t know what I’ll do without her…I can’t live without her.”


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Elizabeth

I can’t believe that Jack let Will in! Does he want us to get caught? Is he crazy? Of course he is…that’s why he did it. Damned pirate. I could not believe what I was hearing. I’ve always known how Will felt about me, but I didn’t know that I was hurting him by the way I was acting. I can’t stand to hurt him…I’m very touched by his tender words. They sound so true, yet heart wrenching. It’s as if I can feel his heart crying out for me in pain. Maybe I haven’t given us a chance? Maybe I was afraid? Perhaps I allowed my curiosity for Jack to overshadow my love for Will? I certainly do not regret my night with Jack. I don’t deny my love for him either. I wonder if Jack would confide in someone and tell him about his love for me? Not likely. I’ve never been so deeply in love with someone so much as I am with Jack. I never thought that was humanly possible. But now I’m feeling like I’m falling in love with Will all over again. Oh what’s wrong with me! Maybe it’s pity that I feel towards him…or maybe not? Perhaps it’s something that I’m finding very appealing about him? Whatever it is…I must find out.


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Jack Sparrow

My smile quickly curved into a frown as jealousy raged inside of me. I couldn’t stand Will rantin’ and ravin’ about Elizabeth…about how much he loves her, how much he wants to be with her…blah, blah, blah! He’s startin’ to sound like a lil’ crybaby. How dare that eunuch say those things and have plans for her like that! She’s my lass, and I won’t share her with anyone else! I love her even more than he does…or ever will! Blasted whelp! Only I can quench all of her desires and have her beggin’ for more. He could never do that! He’s not what she needs…definitely not what she wants…I have one spiteful nerve to tell him that I just had her last night…right over there in my bed. I glanced over at my bed and smiled mischievously, but Will didn’t notice. He’s still whining about Lizzie. Clueless bastard. I should brag and say that I had her screaming loudly in excruciating pleasure…putty in my hands. I should let him know that she doesn’t want him…it’s me who she craves, who she desires...who she truly loves. But it’s not my place to tell him…she must do it…She had better do it! I’m not going to say anything for the sake of Elizabeth…I don’t want anything ruining her first time, especially this pansy.

“My head is such a mess. What should I do about Elizabeth, Jack?" He abruptly asked me out of the blue. I hesitated for a moment as I came up with a clever idea…one that would definitely work for him and shock Lizzie.

“Never mind Elizabeth, William. I know exactly what you need. I know a very special lady of the evening…perhaps you remember her…Gizelle? She’ll fix you right up…a little nookie-nookie…a little massage. She’ll do wonders for your head…or heads…as it were.”

Will sat quiet for a moment as he stared at me with an appalled frown. “Jack, I could never be with another woman. I love Elizabeth…and besides…I’ve never technically been with a woman…in that manner…”

I couldn’t help but to smile. I almost fell out of my seat from the absurdity of his confession…and the absolutely pitiable expression on his face! How could he ever expect to pleasure any woman, let alone Elizabeth, when he doesn’t know what to do? What an ass!

“Ha! You’ve got to be kiddin’ me mate. So you’ve never had the honor of engagin’ in passionate intercourse with a woman? You really are a feeble eunuch, aye?”

Will’s glare towards me showed that he was slightly insulted, and embarrassed at my teasing. “Jack, enough. Be serious now. I’m not here to play games.”

“Nobody’s playin’ ‘em mate.” I retorted candidly.

“Jack tell me what I should do. Tell me what you would do.” He replied sounding annoyed with my antics.

“Alright, alright…don’t get testy. I can only tell you what you should do, but I cannot give you the secrets as to what I would do.”

“And why not?”

“Because…I’m Capn’ Jack Sparrow. I’m the only expert in pleasin’ the ladies and there can’t be two experts now can there? I won’t give away my secrets and risk losin’ women to the likes of you”

“Fine, just tell me something!” Will said angrily.

“Okay, the first thing an inexperienced whelp like yourself should do is to woo her. You have to make her feel like she’s the only woman in the world…never take your eyes off her form…tell her how smashingly beautiful she is and how much you want her...comment on her starry eyes and how her hair is like silk and all that fluffy nonsense. Oh, and feed her chocolate... it's an aphrodisiac and you'll need all the help you can get!"

Will sat back in his chair, taking in everything I had suggested. “Has this worked for you?”

“Of course, many, many times when I was just startin’ out with the ladies…but now I don’t need to say anything. One look from my eyes makes every woman want me…makes them plead for me goods… I said, giving him my best sexy squint. "I’ve also found that it works on virgins too.”

“So do you think it will work for me?” Will asked smiling with confidence.

“Absolutely not! You don’t have my looks or my irresistible sex appeal. You’ll have to stick to your words. You’re a eunuch for God’s sake!”

“No I don’t mean that…I mean do you think that will work on Elizabeth? The wooing part, not the part about the eyes or sex appeal that only the infamous Capn’ Jack Sparrow can have.” Will replied sarcastically, grinning foolishly.

“Ha! Never…she’s too much of a narcissistic princess to waste good lines on."

“Well I beg to differ…she’s not like that. I bloody well know that she’ll appreciate those kind words from my heart.” Will replied in sweet defiance.

“Alright William…as you please. Just don’t come runnin’ back to me when your wooing words don’t work on her.”

“I’ll take my chances, Jack.” He retorted as he stood up to leave. I watched him walk in the direction of the door. I hoped he wouldn’t notice anything out of the ordinary, especially what was lying under the covers nude. He stopped for a moment and picked up something shiny off of the floor.

“What’s this?” He asked. I nearly shat myself when I saw what he'd picked up. “I gave this brooch to Elizabeth for her birthday! What’s it doing in here on the floor?” He questioned me, somewhat aghast.

“Uhh…maybe she dropped it when the two of you were in me cabin the other day?” I replied, hoping he would buy the lie.

“Oh, well in that case, I’ll just return it to her then. I’m sure she’s searching for it. Ha! I was beginning to think that maybe you stole it from her or something…” He replied smiling.

“Oh now William I am truly offended. How could you ever think that I would steal from a friend…especially from a lass!” I asked, trying to sound deeply hurt.

“Well you are a pirate Jack. Accusation comes with the occupation.” He answered jokingly as he walked over to the door.

I got up from out of my seat and joined him at the door. “Indeed... the best damned pirate ever to sail the Caribbean, Mate! But you must also remember, dear William, that you are a pirate, too."

Will smiled and opened the door. “Okay Jack, I’ve had enough… I'm tired, I have the most excruciating headache and I'm pretty sure my liver hurts. Perhaps I drank a bit too much rum last night. Thanks for the advice. See you later.” He walked out of the door and down the ramp of the Pearl. I quickly shut the door and locked it. I then crept over to the bed and started digging through the pile of clothes to get to the treasure that lay beneath.


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Elizabeth

I heard Jack walk over to the bed and begin throwing the layers of clothes that were piled on top of me onto the floor. I could hear his devilish chuckle as he came across the form of my body underneath the sheets. I felt him sit down on the bed and lean on top of me, as he caressed the full length of my body.

“He’s gone now…you can come out to play…” He said seductively as he quickly ripped the sheet off of my body and hurled it onto the floor. I glared at him for a moment, as I thought about the conversation he and Will had just had about me. He leaned in closer and smiled at me wickedly, glaring his charcoal lined eyes through my soul. I quickly forgot that I was mad at him; for I became lost in his eyes and remembered what I loved so much about him…I could never stay mad at him. He brushed a strand of hair from my eye and traced his finger down to my lips and was about to kiss me until I sat up quickly.

“What’s the matter Lizzie? Dear William’s gone…we could do whatever we want now.” He asked looking confused as he caressed my face.

“How dare you call me a narcissistic princess? Is that what you really think of me? Because that’s certainly not what you were saying about me last night!”

Jack slid closer to me and lifted my face so that our eyes could meet. I didn’t want to look him in his beautiful eyes, so I closed mine instead.

“Elizabeth…open your eyes and look at me.” He demanded in his captain’s voice. I opened my eyes and noticed that he had a serious frown on his face.

“I said that because I didn’t want Will to notice anything peculiar about the way I felt about you. I tried my hardest not to say what I truly meant. I had to pretend that I was indifferent towards you. You didn't expect me to tell him how I really feel about you, now did you? We would have been found out... everything would have been ruined... you wouldn't have me goods anymore ... how tragic would that have been?” He said, pouting his lips. I could see that his words were truly sincere and he was trying to persuade me into letting him have his way with me. I couldn’t hide the smile that was spreading across my face. He leaned in closer and kissed me passionately. I could feel his warm hands slowly move down to my waist as he tried to lay me back down on the bed. I quickly sat up again and broke away from the kiss, as I remembered his lurid advice to Will.

He frowned at me confused as he moved away from me. “What’s the matter now Lizzie? You’re acting like some frightened child!”

“I just remembered something. Why the hell did you tell Will he should seek out the pleasurable company of a whore? Do you not know that Will does not have any interest in whores? I don’t want him being thrown to the vultures like he’s some rotting carcass!”

Jack stared at me as he squinted his eyes, as if he was contemplating something. “Young William doesn’t even know how to be with a whore, let alone any other woman. Besides, what do you care? You shouldn’t care so much about what he does when you truly love me…”

That last statement struck me hard, as if someone punched me in the face. Why do I care? I’m not in love with Will; I’m in love, deeply in love with Jack. So why did I care if he spent his time with any woman, even a whore? I guess there was a small part of me that still wanted Will…that wanted to protect him. I glanced up and noticed that Jack continued to stare at me, waiting for me to respond to what he had said, but for some reason I couldn’t. I didn’t want to because I knew where my heart lay…and it was with Jack. I flashed a wicked smile at him as I leaned over to the side and picked up a bottle of rum off of the floor. Jack’s eyes lit up in delight at the sight of the bottle. I was still angry at the names he’d called me, so I decided to get even and threw the bottle of rum at him. He caught the bottle but the rum spilled all over his neck and on his tanned chest.

He paused for a moment and looked down at his chest and trousers. He then glared at me with surprise in his eyes. “I knew I should have hid the rum! When are you going to learn not to waste rum, woman! Now lick it off!" He retorted in his commanding voice as he grinned at me wickedly. I couldn’t help but to laugh. I slowly crawled over to the middle of the bed and gazed into his eyes.

“Whatever you say Captain Sparrow.” I said as I bent forward and began to lick the rum off of his neck. I could feel him shudder and moan as I began to suck at his neck. I then kissed down to his chest and licked at the drops of rum. I went further down to his stomach, just above his groin and sucked at the rum that had traveled down there. His breath quickened as he let out another moan, and I could tell he was becoming aroused.

“It tastes better when it’s on you Jack.” I said temptingly as I moved my kisses up towards his chest.

“Careful Lizzie, you’re gonna wake up lil’ Jack and he’ll be much more dangerous than he was last night.” He said as he let out another soft moan. I continued to make my way upward until my lips touched his.

“I don’t care…let him come out and play. And I want him to bite me…” I crooned seductively into his ear. He grabbed my body and straddled me onto his lap and began to kiss my neck.

“You’re a saucy lil' wench aren’t ya? Don’t say I didn’t warn you.” He said as he laid me down and quickly pulled off his trousers. He then positioned himself on top of me and passionately kissed my lips. I could feel his member becoming completely rigid as it pressed against my center. He kissed my neck and moved his head down and glided his tongue around my breasts. I felt his warm hand slowly move between my thighs and slip two fingers into my wetness. I let out a soft moan as his fingers began to rub on the sensitive area. I felt him smile against my neck before he lifted his head to face me.

“I see someone’s ready to play. But before I do anything, I want to taste you...” He said enticingly into my ear as he trailed feathered kisses down my breasts, onto my stomach and then inside my center. I let out a soft moan as his tongue agonizingly licked up and down my soft spot. I rocked and arched my hips with every stroke so that he could go deeper. “Deeper Jack…go deeper…” I said in a soft whisper. Jack looked at me with those dangerous eyes and shifted himself closer and placed my legs on each side of his shoulders. He then smiled at me cunningly as he kissed my inner thighs and slipped his tongue back into my member, going deeper this time. He then began to gently nibble on my folds and then on my delicate nub. It was painful at first, but then a rush of pleasure engulfed my body. I couldn’t help but to moan in unbearable ecstasy as he continued his ministrations. After a few moments, he lifted himself up and kissed me passionately. I could taste myself on his soft lips. He then gently slid himself inside of me. I winced as he began to slowly sink deeper inside. He quickly stopped and looked at me with concerned eyes.

“Are you alright, love?”

“Yes, just a little sore, but keep going.” I said and kissed him on the lips reassuringly. He began to slowly deepen himself inside of me. As the moments passed, his strokes came much faster, more pleasurable…I believe they felt much better than last night. My nails dug deeper into his back as his thrusts became harder. I could feel him sucking at my neck, biting it; unable to contain his own pleasure.

“I want you to scream Lizzie…louder than last night. Dammit Lizzie, you feel too good.” He moaned into my ear. I could feel him slowing down his thrusts as he grabbed my bottom aggressively with both hands and buried himself even farther inside of me. The feeling was different than anything I had ever felt before. I couldn’t help but to scream out his name.

“JACK! Oh bloody hell…don’t stop!”

I heard him chuckle as he continued to tease me with his thrusts. “That’s right Lizzie…oh God…”

He then looked at me and kissed my lips as he sped up his thrusts and moaned my name. After a few minutes, he pulled himself out of me and rolled onto the other side of the bed, spent and panting. I glanced over at him and noticed he had an elated smile stretched across his face. He then looked at me with his beautiful, brown eyes and kissed me ever so gently on the end of my nose.

“Lizzie, your goods are almost as good as mine…” He said breathlessly. I sat up and traced my fingers along his chest. “Jack, you’re so arrogant…you could never give anyone the credit they deserve…”

“Aye love I would…but you see, no one can be better than me…” He retorted as he smiled diabolically at me.

I leaned over and playfully smacked the evil grin right off his face and got out of the bed. I dug through the pile of clothes on the floor and put on my nightgown and night coat. I felt Jack's lustful eyes on me as he watched me get dressed. I suddenly felt someone standing behind me, grabbing my waist.

“And where do you think you’re goin’ Ms. Swann?” Jack asked as he began kissing my neck. I turned around and stared into his eyes, becoming fixated on them once again.

“I have to go back to the mansion. My father and I have some business to attend to with some state officials.”

“Oh is that so? You’re not leavin’ because of dear William now are ya?” He asked as he stared at me suspiciously.

“Now why would I do that when I’m standing here with the man I love?”

“Well the poor lad did say that he was going to take me up on the advice that I gave him concernin’ you…I thought maybe you’d be curious as to what he wanted to say.”

I rolled my eyes in frustration. What was he trying to do? Does he think that I still have feelings for Will? “Jack I’ve already heard what he has to say and I’m not the least bit concerned about my relationship with him. When he talks to me, I’ll tell him that I don’t want to be with him…” Jack loosened his grip on me and walked away to put on his clothes.

“And what will you tell him if he should ask you if there’s someone else?” He asked as he pulled up his trousers.

“I won’t tell him anything about us…it’s none of his business”.

Ah, but it is his business now isn't it, my dear Lizzie?" He hissed into my ear, causing an icy chill to run down my spine. "You are, after all, his fiancée.”

I quickly turned around and met his glare. “That may be so, but I stopped being his fiancée the moment I fell in love with you. I’m yours now, Jack.” I could feel tears well up inside my eyes and begin to trickle down my cheeks. Jack was quiet for a moment as he stepped closer to me and cupped my face into his hands. He gently wiped the tears off of my cheeks with his thumbs as he stared into my eyes. I noticed something different in his eyes. They didn’t seem so dangerous and cunning. I could see for the first time love radiating out of his eyes. He smiled and pressed his lips gently against mine as he held my waist firmly.

“Lizzie, I’ve never said this to any woman before…I hoped I would never have to say it, but I have fallen in love with you. From the moment you buckled my belt, put my hat on my head and called me despicable... I've had eyes only for you.”

My heart felt like exploding from all of the tender words he was filling it with. I did not expect him to say that he was in love with me…of course he’d said that he loved me, but to hear him say that he’s in love with me was so surreal. I was speechless. I was about to collapse into his arms until he began to say something heartfelt, yet slightly disturbing.

He kissed me again on my lips and grinned devilishly. “You see lass, you must realize that a pirate has fallen for you, not just any pirate, but Capn’ Jack Sparrow. I must warn ya that a pirate’s heart is nothin’ to play with, especially mine. Don’t think you can mess with me head cause it’s not little mister eunuch that you’re dealin’ with here.”

“Jack I would never say or do anything to hurt you. You know that I’m in love with you and that I’m yours, all yours.” I replied seductively as I brushed my lips against his.

He smiled wickedly and swept a strand of hair from my eyes. He then walked over to the bed and sat down to put on his boots “All mine, eh? That's quite a commitment Ms. Swann; it's only fair that I tell you what said commitment entails.”

I smiled and stepped closer to him. He stood up and gave me his famous squint. I knew that he was thinking about something improper, yet charming to say. “And what’s that Captain Sparrow?”

He grabbed me by my waist and smiled sinfully at me. “That Elizabeth, requires you to obey the Capn’s orders under any circumstance and you must be willin’ and able to please him…” He sneered as he secretly moved his hand down between my thighs.

I smiled and rolled my eyes playfully at him. “And what if I don’t?”

He quickly moved his hand under my nightgown and slipped two fingers inside of me and caressed my center. I almost collapsed into his arms from the pleasure he was giving me. He then kissed my neck and glared into my eyes. “Oh but you will, dearie…and do you know why? Because you can't resist. And whenever something's mine... I do with it what I please...whenever it pleases me.”

“And what about me? I said that you are mine, so what can I do with you?” I asked as I tried to stop myself from moaning.

Jack moved his hand from inside of me and grabbed my waist and stared at me fiercely. “Whatever you damn well please…” He retorted as he kissed me feverishly on my lips. After a few moments we broke away from the kiss and I walked over to the door. “I’ll see you tonight Jack.”

He walked over to the door and shut it as I tried to open it. “Before you leave Lizzie, let me give you a warnin’. In case young William should ever try convincin’ you to stay with him just remember whose heart you have, and who has your heart. Don’t get the idea that you can bounce back and forth…I forgave you when you unforgivably left me for dead... a deed most foul that was... but if you leave me for another man... I won't be so inclined as to absolve you... nor he... I won't let him have you... I WONT share what's mine. He held my gaze for a moment, daring me to look away, then walked over to the table

I felt shivers run down my spine at his warning. I wouldn’t dare hurt him. I knew from that instant that I must tell Will it’s over before something dreadful happens and I won’t have the man I love. As I opened the door and was about to step onto the deck of the Pearl, Jack suddenly called my name.

“Oh and Elizabeth, when you come back tonight, try not to wear anything but your necklace…Capn’s orders.” He sneered as he smiled at me wickedly.

I smiled and blew him a kiss. “Of course captain, whatever you desire…” I replied seductively as I walked out of the cabin and closed the door. I quickly walked down the ramp of the ship and onto the cobblestone streets. I felt something drawing me back to the Pearl, I didn’t want to go back and face Will, for I was uncertain as to what would happen between us, how I would react to him. I knew something had to be done…for the sake of my heart…for Jack’s heart.

A/N: Are you on the edge of your seats yet? I hoped you liked this chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it! Take care and keep the reviews coming!
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