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Darker Side of Elastigirl

By: jdadragon
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Chapter 9

It is a clear, peaceful day on the ocean. There is a small island in the distance. Suddenly a large swarm of aircraft carriers, cruisers, destroyers, frigates, corvettes, submarines and amphibious assault ships approach the island. Jets and military helicopters take off from the aircraft carriers and circle the island. The submarines remain hidden below awaiting orders. The rest of the ships come to a stop and aim their cannons. This swarm of ships consists of American, Russian, Japanese, and other countries’ military forces that were available for this important mission.

Mr. Dipper is in the control room in one of the aircraft carriers. He is very busy giving orders for this highly dangerous operation.

“Does anyone see anything yet?” he asks everyone.

“No one has found any further detection besides the signal that was given to us to locate this island,” one of the marines tells him. “Might this be a distraction or a ruse?”

“That’s not like Kevin,” Mr. Dipper explains. “He always appreciated a little competition…”



Mr. Incredible stands at the bow of an American destroyer ship staring angrily at the island before them. Mirage comes up onto the deck to check on him.

“You shouldn’t have come, Mirage,” Bob tells her. “Things are going to become extremely dangerous.”

“That’s exactly why I came,” Mirage claims. “I still care about your wellbeing, and I want to help however possible. I might not have powers, but I feel compelled to help you out. If Helen has truly turned sides, than perhaps I could-”

“I’m not sure you can say anything to her that will help.”

“I won’t know if I don’t try.”

“Let the woman help!” Lucious calls out to him as he comes up to the deck with Dash and Violet. “You don’t know what’s going to happen. Even though everyone else here has no superpowers, they’re still helping us out.”

“They’re all here as a distraction,” Bob tells him. “There’s a good possibility that they will die. If anything, I don’t want that to happen to Mirage.”

Mirage smiles and appreciates his concern.

“So what exactly are we going to do?” Dash asks.

“Yeah,” Violet also ponders. “We have no idea what the layout of the Assimilator’s hideout is, and we don’t even know how to stop his machine from working…”

“That’s exactly why we have gathered this many armed forces,” Mr. Incredible explains. “We have no idea what we’re in for…”



The Assimilator watches the many monitor screens that show the numerous vessels outside of the hideout. He grins wickedly as the giant ships wait for his response to the situation.

“They made it just in time. Just as I predicted…”

“What are your orders?” Agent Zero asks as she and Elastigirl walk up behind him.

“Agent Zero, you shall start the machine. It will take half an hour for it to fully charge before it is fully functional. Elastigirl, you will turn on all of the drones and give them their orders. I will go and check on Jack-Jack before I go up to the surface and say hello. When both of you are finished, you may both come up and join the fun.”

“As you command,” Helen says unemotionally as she and Agent Zero bow down to him.

“Alright, let’s come together for good luck,” he tells them. The two women step towards him, and he embraces them both in his arms. He gives Helen a passionate kiss, gives Rachael a passionate kiss, and watches Helen give Rachael a passionate kiss. The three of them take off to complete their specified duties.



Dash and Violet explore the deck of the ship to see what sort of equipment it carries. Mirage notices them and runs up to them both.

“Hey you two!”

“Oh,” they both reply uncomfortably. “Hi…”

“Oh please don’t be like that with me,” she implies. “I know you two were going through a rough time with your mother being gone, but that shouldn’t ruin things for us.”

“Why do you even care?” Violet asks.

“Yeah,” Dash agrees. “Weren’t you only interested in our dad?”

“I admit, at first I just wanted to be with him,” Mirage tells them. “But I’ve also grown to like the rest of you, even your mother. You’re all such a wonderful family who make Bob happy. I don’t want anything bad to happen to any of you.”

Both of the children are surprised and are caught off guard as Mirage bends down to hug them. They feel sympathetic for the platinum haired woman as she lets go of them and walks away.

“Wait,” Violet calls out to her getting her attention. “We don’t want anything bad to happen to you either…”

“Yeah,” Dash agrees giving a warm grin. “If you need anything we can come and help you.”

“Thank you,” Mirage tells them with a gracious smile. As she walks away to check on other things, a tear streams down her face.



The Assimilator goes to Jack-Jack’s crib. He has a hard time changing the baby’s diaper and getting him a warm bottle since the baby angrily struggles from him. It is apparent that the child does not like him at all and wants his mother. Jack-Jack is especially fussy since his powers have been restrained by a mere bracelet.

“You will appreciate me in time,” Kevin tells him as he finishes up and leaves the baby to play with his toys. The drone keeps a watchful eye on the baby in Kevin’s absence.

Agent Zero goes into the control room where numerous nuclear generators are all linked up to a terrifyingly dark machine. She walks up to the control panel and types on a keyboard some commands. The machine begins to activate with lights turning on all over. A load bar appears on the screen reading “POWER UP SEQUENCE.” The bar slowly begins to increase. Rachael leaves in order to allow the machine to operate from here on in.

Elastigirl enters the loading bay where hundreds of robots of all shapes and sizes are all waiting in rows and columns to be activated. Helen walks over to the command modular and activates all of the robots with a press of a button. She types in some more for certain commands.

The robots all begin to blink red lights and shout out, “BATTLE MODE ACTIVATED! OBJECTION: DESTROY INTRUDERS!”

“I’m sorry guys,” Helen says. “But you honestly leave us with no choice. This is for the best…”

Elastigirl takes the remote from the side of the command modular and walks over to a hovercraft. She turns it on allowing it to hover in place. Giant doors on the ceiling open up and the floor begins to rise.



Mr. Dipper still waits in the control room on his ship for the Assimilator to show himself. He takes a radio receiver and clicks it on.

“Kevin, Rachael, this is Agent Dipper. We have your island completely surrounded. Surrender or else we will be forced to fire!”

“It’s no use!” Kevin assures him while speaking on an intercom. He comes out of his hiding place in the forest onto the beach for all to see. “You can shoot those primitive weapons all you like. It won’t destroy me or my base of operations.”

“Assimilator!” Mr. Incredible shouts out on a megaphone angrily. “Where are my wife and son??”

“They will come out in due time,” Kevin guarantees him into a microphone. “But for the time being, why don’t you settle your wrath on me and my friends?”

Lasers and plasma shots begin to fire out from the forest aimed for the navy and the aircrafts. Everyone on the boats take cover from the barrage of fire. The jets and helicopters swerve away from the projectiles. Legions of drones fly out of the jungle shooting away at all of the oncoming opponents. The navy and air force retaliate and fire their weapons at these machines. Soon the surroundings are filled with load noises and explosions as casualties from both sides are lost. The ships also cast their missiles at the island hoping to destroy it.

The Incredibles begin to fight off the drones as well. Violet and Dash team up with their rolling force field sphere taking out drones here and there. All projectiles the robots use against the two merely bounce off of Violet’s shield. Frozone skis on the ocean water freezing robots as they try to shoot him. The robots fall into the ocean and sink to the bottom as they are encased within ice. Mr. Incredible leaps from ship to ship, punching away at the robots with such fierce rage that the robots are torn up by the mere impact of his fists. Their laser power prove to be of no use against his invulnerability.

From time to time, our heroes are forced to protect the marines from the onslaught of the drones. The whole battle appears to be very difficult, though from the looks of it, they are prevailing against this lifeless army.

Mirage is running from place to place on the deck of the ship as it begins to blow up. She desperately tries to get away from all danger, but there is simply too much. She trips over a fallen robot. Another robot spots her and approaches. It aims its laser gun at her. Mirage trembles in fear.

“DIE,” the drone tells Mirage coldly. Lasers are fired.

To her surprise, Mirage is unharmed. She notices that Violet has appeared and generated a force field over the two of them just in time. Dash zooms by the robot tripping it and then starts taking out all of the nuts and bolts leaving it in pieces. Mirage is surprised at this turn of events.

“Thank you,” she tells them.

“We’re supers,” Violet tells her with a smile. “It’s what we do.”

“I wish I wasn’t such a burden,” Mirage says. “If only I could do something.”

“I’m sure there’s something you can do,” Dash says. “You just need the will to do what’s right.”

Mirage is surprised at the boy’s comment. Suddenly more drones appear and begin to fire at them. Violet shields them from the projectiles again. Dash takes the nuts and bolts quickly and spastically throws them at the robots. The nuts and bolts hit the robots like bullets taking them down. Dash and Violet rush off to continue saving others and fight the robots. Mirage is left behind wondering what to do.

Bob and Lucious are fighting side by side on the beach taking out robots as they approach. Bob even takes the frozen robots and chucks them at other robots.

“I think we’re winning,” Lucious claims.

Suddenly there’s a huge blast of energy that takes out a ship. They all look up to see the Assimilator floating high in the air. He casts down bursts of energy at the ships causing huge explosions. Missiles and bullets prove to do nothing against his powers. Kevin laughs as he stretches his arms and punches attacking helicopters and jets letting them fall in big chunks of burning metal.

“This is fun!” he shoats. He sails down and plunges through a ship sinking it. He comes back out of the water lifting a submarine in the air and tosses it onto another ship causing another explosion. He laughs wickedly from his own shear destructive power.

Then two hovercrafts come out from the island. Agent Zero jumps from one of them onto one of the ships at one end while Helen leaps out from hers at the other end. They each begin to fight the men aboard the ships with graceful fighting moves. Agent Zero’s combat moves are too sophisticated, and Helen’s stretching powers make her a hard target. None appear capable of fighting them.

Bob can see Helen on one of the ships from the mainland. He finds it hard to believe that his own wife is fighting the marines.

“Lucious, could you freeze me a path to that ship? I must confront Helen.”

“Sure thing man,” Lucious tells him. “Do you want me to come with you?”

“Perhaps not, maybe you can find a way to help fight Agent Zero or the Assimilator.”

“I’ll see what I can do,” Lucious tells him. He creates a walkway for his friend to run across to the ship. Bob runs along it and tries to think up of the words to say to his wife. Lucious then rushes off to try to find someone else who needs his help.



The Assimilator takes a short rest on the beach from his destructive onslaught. He smiles at the sight of his destructive power as he sits in the sand.

“Ah, if only this would never end. But I do wish there was more of a challenge…”

“How about this?” a girl’s voice asks him from behind. Kevin looks behind him as a floating robot arm comes crashing into his face. He stumbles a bit from the sudden attack from the invisible Violet.

“Darn it!” he says. “I should have kept myself prepared for that.”

“How about this?” Dash asks as he races around him creating a vortex in the sand.

Kevin simply lets out a burst of energy from within and casts the two super children aside. He floats there spitting out sand from his mouth and rubs his eyes.

“Is that all?” Kevin asks as he floats down to the ground. He waits a little bit, but sighs when the two of them refuse to move. “This is boring. You two aren’t even worth it to kill.”

Kevin turns around to walk away when he’s suddenly run over by Violet’s and Dash’s rolling attack. He slowly gets back to his feet as they come racing back around. Kevin smiles and creates a force field around them. He then stretches his arm out and wraps his fingers around the force field and begins to whip them in the air. He floats up swinging them around and around. Like a wrecking ball, he crashes them into a ship and then lets go of the to send them flying into another ship. He flies after them after their impact.

Dash is on the ship next to his sister. He tries to wake her for help but she remains unconscious. Kevin appears in front of them. Dash crawls back in fear from the dreadful sight of him as flames rise from all over the ship. He appears even more menacing than before.

“I will offer you a chance to join me in my new world. I’d hate to have to kill you two.”

“You hurt all of these people and my sister!” Dash shouts out. “Go to Hell!”

“So be it.” The Assimilator regretfully says as he raises his hand to finish them off.

“Kevin!” Mirage shouts out as she comes over. She stands in between him and the children with her arms stretched. “Leave them alone!”

“Mirage no!” Dash cries out.

“Mirage?” Kevin is surprised to see her, but dismisses his interest in this matter. “I do respect you as a friend, but if you wish to die with them that is your choice.”

“I’m not letting you harm these two!” she angrily tells him.

Kevin raises his arm again. “Goodbye then Mirage…”

A shot of energy surges out of Kevin’s outstretched hand. There is a huge explosion. He waits for the cloud of smoke to dissipate in order to see his fallen enemy, but he is surprised to see a large, hard, organic form shielding his opponents. It is white and resembles a turtle shell.

“What is this…?”

The organic form shrinks and turns into white Mirage’s hair. She has her eyes clenched tight for a moment longer and opens them after realizing they weren’t killed. Dash is in awe by this new discovery.

“What happened?” Mirage asks confused.

“Your hair can shield against attacks…” Dash explains. “That must be your power…”

“You never had any powers before,” Kevin says. He raises his hand again for another attack. “Oh well, it can’t protect you anymore.”

“No!” Mirage cries out with her arms stretched out in front of her. Suddenly sharp shards of dense material shoot out from her fingernails. Kevin shields his face as these shards stick into his skin.

Mirage is surprised at this new ability. Dash remains speechless behind her. Kevin appears annoyed by this new ability. He uses his phasing ability to simply let the shards fall off and through his body.

He charges up for another attack. Mirage deflects it with her shield hair and attacks with her shards. The Assimilator uses a force field to deflect the shards. This goes on for a few minutes.

Violet awakens to this intriguing sight. She thinks she is dreaming when she sees Mirage fighting the villain with odd superpowers. It is to her surprise that this is indeed real.

“You’re finally awake!” Dash exclaims.

“What’s going on? How is Mirage doing that?”

“I don’t know, she just came not knowing anything about it and it just worked. She blocked the Assimilator’s attacks from hitting us with her own body. The powers just showed up from there.”

“Huh,” Violet wonders. “Maybe her powers were already there, but she never knew how to use them. Perhaps being thrown into a dangerous situation gave her body the adrenaline it needed to show her powers.”

“I’m not sure,” Dash says. “But this is awesome!”

Mirage shields against another one of the Assimilator’s attacks and is about to attack again after the shield turns back into her hair when her opponent suddenly disappears. She looks around wondering where he is.

“He’s using my ability!” Violet realizes.

It is too late though, they are hit by the Assimilator’s mind numbing attack, and they all fall down limp. The Assimilator appears before them looking down at their motionless bodies. He then looks at his fingers and points them at a passing marine on the ship. Shards come shooting out of his finger nails and pierce the marine’s body. He looks at his finger tips again and smiles. Kevin leans down to Mirage.

“Thank you for this wonderful addition to my powers,” he compliments her sarcastically. “Luckily for you, I am now in a compassionate mood. I will lock you all up in the brig.”

He freezes the lower extremities of their bodies, wraps his arms around the three of them, and flies back to the island with his prisoners.



Agent Zero continues to fight her way through marines on the top deck of the ship. After rendering about fifty men she stops to look for any more combatants around her.

“Is there anyone else?” she calls out.

Suddenly her arm is hit with a blast of icy coldness and it is now covered in ice. She is surprised at this and turns to see Frozone flipping through the air in the distance chucking freeze blasts at her.

“Gotcha!”

She realizes that he is out of the range of her powers and makes a dash for it. She is forced to dodge his blasts here and there. She takes cover and grabs a fallen marine’s handgun. She stands up and fires the guns at Frozone. Unfortunately, she is not the best far distance shooter and the black superhero skates around on frozen water avoiding her shots. When she runs out of ammunition, Frozone comes back and fires some freeze blasts at her again. Rachael continues to run.

Finally Frozone manages to freeze the floor in front of her and she trips. She falls hard onto the floor, and then her feet get frozen together. Agent Zero tries to claw at the ice with her free hand, but it is no use.

“You just stay right there and chill out!” he shouts to her. He realizes what he just said. “Man that was lame even fore me…”

Frozone skates away. Rachael reaches to her ear to press the button on her radio receiver.

“This is Agent Zero calling any available drones,” she says. “I require some assistance…”



Elastigirl fights her way through the last of the men on the ship. She flings a few men off who try to shoot at her. They splash into the water far below. Helen then turns around and presses a button on her remote to call back her hovercraft.

“Helen!” Bob shouts as he climbs aboard the deck from behind her. She turns around to face him. “Why are you doing this?”

“I do it because I must…”

“That’s not you speaking Helen. The Assimilator must be controlling your mind. Fight it Helen! Fight it-”

“He’s not controlling me,” Helen assures him as she stretches her arm out to punch him in the face. Mr. Incredible is barely hurt, but he finds this surprising. “He has a point Bob. We supers are not like the rest of humanity. We have been outcast when we were trying to help people. Don’t you remember? You of all people should understand.”

“We don’t save people weather they want us to or not,” Bob says. “We save them because we must. Nothing you’re doing right now justifies that.”

“Humanity would be better off with everyone having super powers and with a chosen few to lead them. Don’t you want that for our kids? To live in a world where they can freely use their powers. It would be a chance for them we never had.”

“They don’t need that world,” Bob says. “What was so bad about how we lived? We were special among people. Come on Helen, you know better than this.”

Helen begins to look sad. Bob reaches his hand out to offer her one last chance.

“Please Helen, come home…”

Helen angrily glares at him and charges to attack him. Bob is forced to block and dodge Helen’s dexterous punches and kicks. Bob can’t bring himself to fight back against her because of his love for her.

“Helen! Stop it! Why are you doing this? What’s really bothering you?”

“You want to know why I can’t come home with you?” Helen asks as she punches Bob in the face and sends him falling back to the floor. Bob looks up at her as tears stream down her face. “I’ve hurt you and the kids so much within the past few days. How could any of you possibly forgive me for what I’ve done?”

“Helen I…”

“I’m better off working for Kevin than living in a household where I would feel guilty for the rest of my life…”

Helen turns to walk to her hovercraft when Bob grabs her hand and pulls her into his embrace. Helen is surprised at this compassion. She notices Bob is tearful.

“I don’t care anymore for whatever you did to me. I don’t care if the kids can’t forgive you either. I just want you back. You’re the only woman I could ever be with. I love you!”

Helen begins to cry and hugs him. They stay like that for a while until Helen looks into his eyes and kisses him.

“I’m sorry,” Helen whispers to him. She swings Bob around and tosses him into the water below.

“Helen!”

“If you want me back, join us.” Helen shouts down to him from the deck. “Otherwise we can never be together.”

She begins to walk to the hovercraft again.

“Helen!” Frozone shouts to her as she begins to climb aboard the hovercraft. She turns to see him as he lands on the ship after making a ski jump in the air.

“Bob couldn’t convince me to stop this and neither can you…”

She’s about to climb aboard when Frozone suddenly freezes her hovercraft over. Helen steps away as the craft falls down, and glares angrily at him for doing this.

“I know you don’t think Bob can’t forgive you,” he tells her calmly. “But you gotta give him a chance. He truly does love you.”

“I know he loves me, but this is best for all of us.”

“Is it really Helen?” Frozone asks. “I can clearly see that you have not killed a single man aboard this ship.”

“So what?”

“You’re still a superhero aren’t you?”

Helen stops to ponder about that. “Where are you going with this?”

“Rachael and Kevin have been killing people, and if their plan succeeds more people will die,” he explains. “You don’t want people to die do you?”

Helen collapses to the ground crying. “But what am I supposed to do?”

Frozone rushes over to hold her. “Just come back with us. Try to live with us again. Join us and help stop this madness.”

“But I still think about you as much as I do Bob,” Helen admits. Frozone didn’t expect this. “I wasn’t happy without him and I’m not happy without you. What am I supposed to do?”

Frozone pauses to think about this. He comes up with an answer. “Go back to him Helen. You are one of the Incredibles. I will try to find my own happiness. I will always hold a special place for you in my heart, but you belong with Bob…”

Helen is surprised at this response. She smiles and kisses him a little. Lucious smiles back.

Suddenly Lucious is hit from behind and falls forward unconscious. Helen is surprised at this and wonders what just happened. She looks up to see Agent Zero with Bob unconscious by her feet.

“Are you ready to finish this Helen?” she asks.

Helen looks at the two fallen men with mournful eyes. She tries to figure out a plan through this. She comes up with an idea and looks up at Rachael with a blank expression.

“Yes I am,” Helen replies at last.

“Good,” Rachael says as she presses a button on her arm cufflink to automatically bring her hovercraft over. “We’re going to bring these two to the brig. The others are being stored there as well.”

“The others?” Helen inquires as they drag the two men onto the hovercraft.

“Yes, Kevin has taken the two children and Mirage into the prison. Apparently Mirage has powers though.”

“How long do we have until the machine is functional?” Helen asks.

“Not long,” Rachael says getting into the craft. “My cufflink says about five minutes.”

“Good,” Helen says as she sits next to Rachael. She places her hand on her shoulder. “Oh, By the way Rachael…”

“What is it-?”

Helen punches Rachael in the face rendering her unconscious. Helen quickly gets out a pair of hand cuffs from a compartment in the hovercraft and she places them on Rachael’s wrists. Helen pulls on her hand for a second.

“Just as I hoped,” she discovers. “Her powers are still in effect.”

Helen takes a glance at the two men laying behind her before taking off back to the island.



Agent Dipper and the marines on his ship are all standing in a line as robots hold their laser guns pointed at them. Kevin comes strolling by admiring the sight of his assured victory.

“Isn’t this perfect?” Kevin asks grinning. “You have all given quite the fight, but in the end I still came on top as it should be.”

“Kevin, please stop this,” Agent Dipper insists. “You’re going to kill so many people doing this.”

“I’m just giving the world it’s greatest fantasy,” Kevin declares. “Everybody wants to be a superhero, but no one knows the painful sacrifices that are involved. Now they will know.”

“None of this is worth it!”

“I beg to differ,” Kevin speaks directly into Agent Dipper’s face. “I have been working on this plan for fifteen years and it is finally occurring. You never would have guessed that it would turn out this way did you? Well, now the world is going to become anew under my domain! I will rule-”

Suddenly the robots begin to twitch. Kevin notices this and is wonders what’s wrong. The robots reboot back to normal and point their guns at the ceiling. The marines and Agent Dipper are also confused by this turn of events.

“NEW OBJCTIVE,” the robots says simultaneously. They all turn towards Kevin and point their guns at him. “DESTROY THE ASSIMILATOR.”

“What the-?” Kevin inquires.

The robots all fire their weapons at Kevin. Kevin is sent flying back and is forced to phase through the ship to avoid the lasers.

“What’s going on with my robots?”

All of the remaining robots fly at him and start firing. Along with the military forces everywhere, Kevin is forced to shield himself and fight against his own drones. He angrily uses more and more of his powers.

“Racheal! Helen!” he shouts into this radio transmitter. “What’s going on? Did someone reset the robots?”

There is no answer.

“Is there anyone there?!”

“I’m sorry Kevin,” Helen answers him. “But this is where it ends. I can’t support your ways and I have chosen to stop you.”

Kevin is surprised at her betrayal. He angrily shouts into the transmitter again. “Rachael! Find Helen and stop her at all costs!”

“Rachael isn’t available now,” Helen tells him. “If you want to stop me you’ll have to find me…”

Kevin angrily roars at the top of his lungs and wrecks the rest of the robots that attack him. He remains floating there for a second huffing angrily. He then starts flying towards the island at top speed.

“ELASTIGIRL!!!”

“Oh by the way,” Helen mentions. “I thought I’d let you have one last fair fight with a worthy opponent…”

Suddenly the ground explodes before him and Jack-Jack comes flying out in demon form looking angrily at Kevin. He is surprised to see the child.

“She found the unlocking mechanism,” Kevin realizes. “That bitch… Fine, I guess I have no choice. Come little one, I’ve become nearly twice as strong since last time we fought. Show me what you’ve got!”

The baby growls before flying at him. Kevin flies at him with as much rage. Their impact casts a huge explosion that nearly destroys the entire surface of the island.
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