Angelus Vs. Riddick "The Ghostination" (REVISED)
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Category:
M through R › Pitch Black
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
33
Views:
3,242
Reviews:
3
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
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I do not own the movie that this fanfiction is written for, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
Chapter 9
Chapter 9/32
Back On "The Shinning"
Jack stood in front of the full-length mirror in the bathroom. She still couldn’t believe her eyes. She examined herself from head to toe.
Oh My God…last time I checked, my hair was just starting to grow back some and now it’s flowing down my back, she thought. She put her fingers in her hair and stroked it.
Her eyes then roamed down at her chest…obviously not flat anymore. "Holy Crap, I have breasts now,” she exclaimed happily. I mos def need a bra for these babies, she thought.
"I mos def can’t go masquerading as a dude anymore,” she said.
She turned from side to side admiring her new physical features. She lingered there for a few more minutes then looked further down.
"Damn, Jack’s Got Back!
Finally, she looked at her thick thighs and sighed.
"Hell Yeah! If only Riddick could see my now," she said proudly with her chest sticking out.
Hmmm, I guess it’s true, milk really does do a body good, she thought.
She twirled around a few times until she heard a knock at the door.
"Hello Jack, it’s Mr. Shine. Are you hungry? I brought you a sandwich and a glass of milk. May I come in?" he asked.
"Can I even stop you from coming in here?" she asked.
He smirked and said, "No, but it’s respectful to ask before you enter a Lady’s room."
"It’s your world. I just got "Jack-Nabbed" into it I don’t really have a say,” Jack replied.
He laughed as he walked in with the food in his hands. He sat the food down on the desk beside her bed. When he saw Jack, her hands were behind her back.
"Oh My Sweet, what are you doing?" he asked.
"What the hell do you mean…" she was suddenly cut off.
"I know you have a vase behind your back," he revealed.
"But how did you…" he cut her off again.
"My Dear Sweet, don’t you know that I hear all and see all," he smugly prided.
Jack cursed under her breath and put the vase back on the desk. She looked up and asked, “Why is this room a spitting image of the one I have on New Mecca?”
He told her that having "familiar surroundings" would help her to adjust to her new life there.
"When you saw that glowing ball open up into the vortex, it scanned and recorded everything in that house. We saw everything as it happened. So we had your room replicated as we saw it," he admitted.
"Who the hell are "We" and why the hell are you silver?" Jack asked.
"All will be revealed in time My Sweet," was all he said.
As they were talking, the "three little green men" snuck into her room. They hid in the huge closet near her door.
Mr. Shine told Jack to eat her "food" and get cleaned up.
"I Don’t Want Any Of Your So-Called Food…I Wanna Go Home My Father!" she yelled out.
Although her stomach was doing the "Cha Cha" and "The Tango," she couldn’t eat anything that this Mr.Shine had brought her. She was furious and one single tear fell from her right eye.
"Just Go! Get The Hell Out!" she bellowed out at him.
"My Sweet, I’m so sorry that you’re angry and upset right now. I’m hoping that things will change. This is your new home now; the life you had before is gone. You have come to a better place to live a better life," he said as he walked out.
Jack watched him leave and looked at the "food" again. She then curled up in a fetal position and sobbed while holding on a pillow for dear life. She kept saying Riddick’s name over and over again.
"Oh don’t cry…Chosen One," three little voices said.
Jack immediately looked up and saw her tiny "Jack-Nabbers" walking out of the closet.
"The Triobs, where were you guys when I first arrived here?” she asked.
"Mr. Shine didn’t allow us to be there," Xan confessed.
"Oh, so when did you little green dudes sneak in here?" she asked.
"When you and Mr. Shine were talking," Ret said.
Her stomach started to growl and it strangely reminded her of Riddick. She looked at the food and took a bite. To her surprise, it was rather tasty. She always did love tuna sandwiches.
"We’ll go and let you eat in peace, Jack. If you need us just ring this bell and we’ll be here," Xan said.
Jack nodded and watched her new lil’ friends walk through a very itty-bitty pathway in her wall. She laughed at the sight and finished eating. She took a long hot bath and tried to go to sleep.
Somewhere On "The Shinning"
The crew was thrown out of the vortex and landed on their a$$e$. All you heard were seven thuds, a few "ouches," and handful of curse words. Everyone stood up and dusted themselves off. They all took a quick glance around them. The atmosphere had a medium silvery glowing tone to it. Very close to Riddick’s eyes. Surprisingly, he could still make out shapes and colors as before.
Angel and Riddick both sensed that something or someone was out there along with them. Angel walked over to Riddick and asked him in a low tone if he saw anything. Riddick growled and shook his head. Angel then walked back to the group to figure out what to do next.
Why the hell would he ask me that? Oh damn, he must’ve seen my eyes before I put the goggles back on, he thought.
As Riddick walked back to the group, he heard them discussing what they were going to do.
"Okay, people listen up. Cari here is going to lead us through da woods.
Wes and Gunn will be in the middle while I’ll be in the back. Each woman should be placed in between two men so they will be protected," Angel commanded.
Everyone nodded in agreement and got into their places. Riddick scanned the area once again and then lead his group through "The Shinning."
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Not too far away, DeepToothDev saw and heard everything. She waited until the crew was a good distance away and followed behind them.
Back On "The Shinning"
Jack stood in front of the full-length mirror in the bathroom. She still couldn’t believe her eyes. She examined herself from head to toe.
Oh My God…last time I checked, my hair was just starting to grow back some and now it’s flowing down my back, she thought. She put her fingers in her hair and stroked it.
Her eyes then roamed down at her chest…obviously not flat anymore. "Holy Crap, I have breasts now,” she exclaimed happily. I mos def need a bra for these babies, she thought.
"I mos def can’t go masquerading as a dude anymore,” she said.
She turned from side to side admiring her new physical features. She lingered there for a few more minutes then looked further down.
"Damn, Jack’s Got Back!
Finally, she looked at her thick thighs and sighed.
"Hell Yeah! If only Riddick could see my now," she said proudly with her chest sticking out.
Hmmm, I guess it’s true, milk really does do a body good, she thought.
She twirled around a few times until she heard a knock at the door.
"Hello Jack, it’s Mr. Shine. Are you hungry? I brought you a sandwich and a glass of milk. May I come in?" he asked.
"Can I even stop you from coming in here?" she asked.
He smirked and said, "No, but it’s respectful to ask before you enter a Lady’s room."
"It’s your world. I just got "Jack-Nabbed" into it I don’t really have a say,” Jack replied.
He laughed as he walked in with the food in his hands. He sat the food down on the desk beside her bed. When he saw Jack, her hands were behind her back.
"Oh My Sweet, what are you doing?" he asked.
"What the hell do you mean…" she was suddenly cut off.
"I know you have a vase behind your back," he revealed.
"But how did you…" he cut her off again.
"My Dear Sweet, don’t you know that I hear all and see all," he smugly prided.
Jack cursed under her breath and put the vase back on the desk. She looked up and asked, “Why is this room a spitting image of the one I have on New Mecca?”
He told her that having "familiar surroundings" would help her to adjust to her new life there.
"When you saw that glowing ball open up into the vortex, it scanned and recorded everything in that house. We saw everything as it happened. So we had your room replicated as we saw it," he admitted.
"Who the hell are "We" and why the hell are you silver?" Jack asked.
"All will be revealed in time My Sweet," was all he said.
As they were talking, the "three little green men" snuck into her room. They hid in the huge closet near her door.
Mr. Shine told Jack to eat her "food" and get cleaned up.
"I Don’t Want Any Of Your So-Called Food…I Wanna Go Home My Father!" she yelled out.
Although her stomach was doing the "Cha Cha" and "The Tango," she couldn’t eat anything that this Mr.Shine had brought her. She was furious and one single tear fell from her right eye.
"Just Go! Get The Hell Out!" she bellowed out at him.
"My Sweet, I’m so sorry that you’re angry and upset right now. I’m hoping that things will change. This is your new home now; the life you had before is gone. You have come to a better place to live a better life," he said as he walked out.
Jack watched him leave and looked at the "food" again. She then curled up in a fetal position and sobbed while holding on a pillow for dear life. She kept saying Riddick’s name over and over again.
"Oh don’t cry…Chosen One," three little voices said.
Jack immediately looked up and saw her tiny "Jack-Nabbers" walking out of the closet.
"The Triobs, where were you guys when I first arrived here?” she asked.
"Mr. Shine didn’t allow us to be there," Xan confessed.
"Oh, so when did you little green dudes sneak in here?" she asked.
"When you and Mr. Shine were talking," Ret said.
Her stomach started to growl and it strangely reminded her of Riddick. She looked at the food and took a bite. To her surprise, it was rather tasty. She always did love tuna sandwiches.
"We’ll go and let you eat in peace, Jack. If you need us just ring this bell and we’ll be here," Xan said.
Jack nodded and watched her new lil’ friends walk through a very itty-bitty pathway in her wall. She laughed at the sight and finished eating. She took a long hot bath and tried to go to sleep.
Somewhere On "The Shinning"
The crew was thrown out of the vortex and landed on their a$$e$. All you heard were seven thuds, a few "ouches," and handful of curse words. Everyone stood up and dusted themselves off. They all took a quick glance around them. The atmosphere had a medium silvery glowing tone to it. Very close to Riddick’s eyes. Surprisingly, he could still make out shapes and colors as before.
Angel and Riddick both sensed that something or someone was out there along with them. Angel walked over to Riddick and asked him in a low tone if he saw anything. Riddick growled and shook his head. Angel then walked back to the group to figure out what to do next.
Why the hell would he ask me that? Oh damn, he must’ve seen my eyes before I put the goggles back on, he thought.
As Riddick walked back to the group, he heard them discussing what they were going to do.
"Okay, people listen up. Cari here is going to lead us through da woods.
Wes and Gunn will be in the middle while I’ll be in the back. Each woman should be placed in between two men so they will be protected," Angel commanded.
Everyone nodded in agreement and got into their places. Riddick scanned the area once again and then lead his group through "The Shinning."
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Not too far away, DeepToothDev saw and heard everything. She waited until the crew was a good distance away and followed behind them.