Angel Fallen, Love Arise

Angel Fallen, Love Arise

Disclaimer: We own nothing of Star Wars, we are just two simple women borrowing a man’s life work for our own twisted amusement. Please don’t sue us, you’d only get pocket link. The characters here are however ours, Te’ni is the work of only Makaiah, and Fluer and Edessii that of Taka, and yet still without Mr. Lucas they also would not exist.

Taka: I’d like to dedicate this story to Kira Takenouchi who has made all of my boylove fantasies come true, made me realize I’m not that different, and who has continued to do the same for many. I hope you enjoy this!

Makaiah: I would also like to dedicate this story to Kira. It was only through her voice in writing that Taka and I realized just how similar we were and it was because of Kira that our love has evolved to what it is today. I would never have truly found Taka if not for Kira and for this I give her my humble thanks.


Lesson One: Responsibility


Te'ni entered into the club, gazing about, looking for the Force Signature that flared like a beacon to those who were gifted enough to see it. His gaze fell upon a young human male sitting hunched over the bar, his blue black hair glistening in the hazy light of which the club was accustomed.

Smiling he took in the teen’s features and his smile turned fond as his body responded to the visual stimulus. He certainly was a pretty one, and basing by his posture, inexperienced and naive; that would soon change.

Making his way gracefully through the crowds he slinked up next to the teen and ordered a lomin ale before turning to speak to the young force user. "Tell me young one, just what is a padawan doing in the bowels of Coruscant herself? Whose apprentice are you? I've a feeling your master won't be pleased to know you were here."

Fluer looked up to see the flowing blood red hair of the Jedi before him, and his sparkly green eyes and had to stop before he answered him. The younger Jedi was feeling very sorry for himself and un-jedi like at the moment, something he was not proud of and he didn't want to leak the emotion when he spoke. "I'm not a padawan anymore, Sir, but I am sure you are right. If my master knew that I were here she would no doubt be very displeased with me."

Te'ni, sensing the mood of the younger knight sat down and smiled sympathetically, "Forgive me, many your age are still wearing their braids. Your powers must be truly great to have achieved knighthood so quickly." He smiled and sipped at his lomin, "I sense that your Master is lost to you, who was she, if I might inquire?"

Fluer relaxed at the words the other man spoke to him, his voice alone soothing. He allowed his shielded feelings to ease to the open. "Lady Edessii Afonas'ev." He said quietly, avoiding the gaze of the stranger. He hoped that he had not met her before. To him the woman was a mother and a teacher and also ironically his first crush and now he felt lost without her. She was lost to the force but to hear others speak of her badly still wounded him no matter the truth of the words.
Te'ni grinned, something quite rare for him as he thought of the female Jedi of whom this young one spoke of, "Force alive! Dessii was your Master? She and I were sent on a few missions together when we were younger, That woman had a sharp wit and even sharper tongue, I envy you not my young friend." He smiled softly, "What might I call you young one? For your name must be beautiful to match your face. It is surely a sin to withhold such beauty from others."

Fluer was abashed at the compliment and looked at the other man. "My name is Fluer Munin Noir, but no sir, I'm really not beautiful." He laughed.

Te'ni's eyes grew slightly darker as he watched Fluer laugh, "I assure you Fluer, You are quite beautiful, more lovely than any one thousand sunsets." He leaned forward and whispered into Fluer's ear, "I would worship you, as you are surely an angel, one of the mythical creatures of beauty untold, of pureness unmatched. Even more than this you are an Angel Fallen. One whose tears brings all mortals to their knees for you are even more beautiful knowing you are weak." Te'ni licked the outer shell of Fluer's ear and nibbled slightly on it bringing a gasp from the younger man. Pulling back Te'ni said, "Tell me young Fluer, have you lost your angelic pureness? Have you fallen from grace as of yet? I can help you if you wish it of me."

Fluer laughter had ceased when Te'ni spoke to him and he watched him now for a moment before he spoke, stuttering as he did so. "Sir, if you're propositioning me. I don't even think that as Jedi we're allowed to engage in those things." It was obvious it was proposition and he knew it, although he was not sure he wanted to, because now he didn't want to believe that he could cause unchaste feelings in a knight older and wiser then he was.

Te'ni smiled and replied, "True, we are discouraged from sexual relations with others for we are forbidden to fall in love, however, It is not as uncommon as the teachers would have you think." He sipped his ale once more; "I feel your reluctance, and your guilt. Do not let these guide you Fluer. I would wish of you not to have either in your heart. Your innocence calls to me and begs of me to strip it from your soul. Come young Fluer, let me help you fall."

"Sir." Fluer started indignantly. "I don't see how a sexual relation would help my guilt and not just add to what I feel right now. I don't let my guilt guide me or control me and I'm quite capable of making a decision without that."

Te'ni smirked, "I must say, you really are innocent aren't you? Trust me young one, within the right hands you will learn that guilt is nothing. If you can make a decision without guilt then prove it. Come with me and let me love you, and I will help you leave your guilt behind as I reshape you into the angel fallen that you were meant to be." Te'ni rose from the bar and held out a hand towards Fluer, offering nothing and everything at once.

Fluer pushed himself up and glared at the man defiantly. "I don't even know your name!" he felt rage tear at him and he huffed. "If you can take me and do as you like and I will feel no guilt then I accept. Whatever you want, but when I feel guilty for it, I no longer want to be with this!"

Te'ni smiled and reached up to place a gentle kiss on Fluer's lips, "I am Te'ni Ona Kelis, be mindful young flower, for you do not know the words that you imply. For, if I do as I like I shall make you more than fallen, can you accept this? I will be your teacher and my lessons are harsh, not all is as it seems. I can resolve you of your guilt, but you will lose your innocence, you must chose between these two, now before I will allow this."

Fluer thought not for a second as he had already spoken his mind although he felt regret at having been rude to the man. "I accept. I do not want my innocence. Innocence is lost no matter which I chose, but my words hold true. If I feel guilty still and this only adds to it I have no obligation to stay."

Te'ni gave him a predatory grin and nodded, "Then come, and we will rid you of both." He offered his hand and tossed two credits on the bar before leading Fluer out of the bar and towards a small black speeder parked nearby. He opened the door for Fluer and smiled before climbing in and driving up and away from the lower levels. They flew in and out of the traffic lanes before arriving at one of the apartment towers that were common in the mid levels. Getting out Te'ni led Fluer in and down before arriving at an inconspicuous door in the middle of the hall. Entering in he smiled, "Welcome, young one." He smiled and led him into the bedroom. "I believe the tour can wait until later, for now you will start your first lesson.

Fluer looked to the floor for a moment and calmed himself. He wanted badly now to either leave and break his word but keep his virginity, or to give into the desire of his flesh and feel less then pure, more filthy, more vile, but yet remain true to his word. He looked up at the other Jedi and let his knowledge escape him and his honesty stand true.

Te'ni sensed the hesitation in Fluer and moved closer to him. Coming up to stand in front of him he nodded at Fluer, "Take off your clothes, fold them and place them at the foot of the bed."

Fluer undressed none too quickly, folding each piece of clothing exactly so and did as he was obliged. Gently putting the clothes onto the foot of the bed before standing back and looking at Te'ni again. Before having been averting his gaze so he wouldn't know if the man did or did not watch him as he disrobed.

Te'ni nodded in approval he moved to the closet and grabbed something from a shelf. Pulling it down he walked back over to where Fluer waited and smiled harshly as he placed a collar around his neck, "This is yours, a sign you might say of your belonging to me. It does not come off until I say it does. This collar shows that you are mine to control and to use, it shows that everything that we do here is under MY control. You have no control, you have no freedom save that which I give to you." He held out a hand and a chain leash flew from the same shelf, he attached it to the collar and led Fluer to the bed chaining him to the headboard. Nodding in approval at the downturned eyes he smirked. "You have been so bad Fluer, so bad. I think it's time that you were punished.”

Holding out his hand he called the whip to him from the hook on the wall, "Turn over." He commanded in a silky venomous voice as he fingered the braids of the leather.

Fluer gaped for a moment as a warm feeling rushed through him. He had never in his life been touched in a way close to being whipped and the thought raked through his mind. He swallowed hard and turned, yanking on the short chain as he did, reminding him even more of its presence as if it would have been possible not to notice it. He pressed his arms up against the headboard to balance him and keep him from choking himself on the collar and bowed his head down, his hair falling forward into his face as a perfect shield to him. Nothing had even happened yet and he wasn't sure if he felt more the urge to scream or cry.

Te'ni licked Fluer's back once along his spine before pulling back and letting the whip fall across the expansion of flesh. Reveling in the cry that was ripped from the boy's throat he waited, soothing the welt with his hands, stroking softly, "Why am I doing this, Fluer? What reason have you given me to punish you so?" He whispered. Before he got an answer he slapped the whip down again. "Well? Answer me! Why, Fluer? Why am I punishing you!?”

Fluer screamed and began to answer Te'ni tearfully, his voice cracking as he wept. "I want power. I want power that is corruption." The boy inhaled deeply and choked, leaning forward into the headboard and pressing himself against the cold chain. "I asked Edessii about the Sith. I bothered her. I pestered her. I lusted after her. I made her change. It's my fault she's not a Jedi anymore!"

Te'ni nodded at the explanation, "That 's right it is your fault. If you hadn't pestered her she would never have fallen." He let the whip fall. "If you hadn't lusted after her, if you hadn't given in she would have never considered the dark." the whip found its target once more, "If only you could be good, Fluer she would still be here. It's your fault, for everything!" another blow, another lick to the welts. "In fact it’s all your fault." Te'ni searched through Fluer's mind picking up on different incidents from the past. "It was your fault that Tana Sousa lost his vision wasn't it? If you hadn't punched him, he would still be able to see!"

Fluer shook and held onto the headboard firmly, gripping it till his knuckles turned white. He sobbed and choked on his words as he tried to form them, having to repeatedly try to start his sentences. “Yes! It’s my fault! I’m evil! I shouldn’t be a Jedi!” he wailed and continued. “I shouldn’t be knighted! I don’t deserve it! I deserve only to be exiled!” He gasped, closing his lavender eyes, and letting the pain wash through him as his tears dripped down his cheeks in a steady stream.

Te'ni frowned, before letting slapping him harshly with the whip, ripping a scream from Fluer's throat, "No." He growled harshly. Then he paused letting the pain sink in before beginning again. "I must say, if both of these are your fault then what else is yours to blame? Ah, I know. It was your fault that Ota Relannis was killed in a lightsaber duel three years ago was it not?

Fluer sniffled and whimpered. "No! No, it can't be! I didn't even know about that till now! You just told me!" He shook his head vigorously, snapping his long hair back and force as he did.

Te'ni purred, "No? He smiled rubbing the younger man's back before yanking his head back by the hair until the leash was pulled taunt. Licking down his cheek he smiled before letting go of his hold and letting the whip fall once more. "Then mayhap you are the reason that we find ourselves in the middle of a war? You are the reason so many of us have died in battle?"

Fluer jerked forward from his release and the crack of the whip and slammed back into the headboard. "No! No! I’m not!" He yelled, knowing this was true, and meaning it with his heart.

Te'ni paused before unceremoniously flipping him onto his back, lengthening the chain by a few links so that he wouldn't strain his neck. Staring him straight in the eyes he whispered, "No? Well then you must be the reason that the Republic is falling to pieces?"

Fluer stared up at the man above him and spoke softly, the tears drying on his cheeks and leaving burning red lines across the pale skin of his face to match his back. "No." He said softly as he gazed at Te'ni "No, I'm not." And with those words his tears that had so abruptly stopped started again this time much softer, burning cool against the hot scratches the previous tears had left.

Te'ni searched his eyes and smiled approvingly. "No? Then tell me Angel, how is it you are responsible for some of these crimes but not all? For if you were the cause of one evil you must be the cause of all others. You are evil, you say. Then evil was born from you. It is your fault that Edessii fell, it is your fault that Tana is blind, it is your fault that Ota died, it is your fault that we are at war, it is your fault that we are dying, it is your fault that our society is crumbling it is ALL YOUR FAULT!!" He screamed at the youth letting the whip fall on his stomach as each accusation rang forth.

Fluer screamed and pulled his arms up to his face. "No! There was evil before me! There was evil before I committed evil! I did not make the world evil! Everything is not my fault!" He screamed in anger, shaking his head and clanking the chain. Finally he pulled himself up against the wall away from the blows. "ONLY WHAT I DO IS MY FAULT! ONLY THE CHOICES I MAKE CAN BE MY FAULT! I CAN'T MAKE PEOPLE DO THINGS! IT'S THEIR DESCION IN THE END NO MATTER WHAT I SAY!!!"

Te'ni dropped the whip and released the leash before leaning down and licking the tear trails off of Fluer's cheeks, "Congratulations Angel, you've just passed your first lesson, and you aced it." He whispered before pulling the younger man into a passionate kiss and embracing him. Holding him close he revealed in the feel of skin rubbing against skin. He sent healing waves towards Fluer's welts and smiled as he rubbed up against the younger man's erection. Releasing him from his embrace he moved lower, he licked the head of Fluer's cock tasting his precum before sucking softly on the tip and plunging his head down to take his entire length in his mouth.

Knowing Fluer was close he sucked him hard, swallowing and working his throat against the head and humming his enjoyment at the whimpers. As Fluer's cries became louder he sucked even harder hollowing his cheeks and sending a tendril of force to his prostrate whist moving up a bit.

Catching his screamed release in his mouth he quickly came up as Fluer bent forward and captured the older man's mouth in a kiss, licking his own seed from his mouth, his arms flung around Te'ni's shoulders. He pulled the Jedi do into an embrace that he wanted never to break, and when the kiss ended he lay his face against Te'ni’s chest and fell into a deep sleep.

Te’ni smiled down at the sleeping youth in his arms and kissed him lovingly on the forehead, "Sleep well my Angel,” He whispered, “For another lesson awaits you when you wake."