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for Streets of Tortuga

by Arella

person MarzBar
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I am enjoying this story about this very strange woman. What makes her such an unstoppable killer? I know Cap'n is the best there is but he does tend to let his guard down around good looking women, so . . . .
person Celeste
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
written like a pro with the whole perspective jumping thing.
its fabulous!
you must continue!
person DarkBubbleGum
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ah Shucks ::blushes::
It wasn't a problem...your work is truly wonderful.
Well this chapter is just as great as the last one. Well done my little German Vampire Aspirererererere..sorry...babbling.
Well g2g..keep it up girl..your great!
person DarkBubbleGum
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's really good! I don't know why you worry so much.
Like the idea and I think your direction is really well thought out. Plan it and take your time with grammer and spelling.
I still love your femalame.ame...it's great!
Keep going and I hope to read your update when I get home from Spain.
You go girl!
Hoffnung I erhalten dieses Recht. Sie schaukeln!
Tell me if I wrote that right.
person Cait
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Please write more. :)
person Into The Sun
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for a wonderful beginning - please keep it up!
person Iamwickedcool
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start luv, keep up the good work!