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You havent updated in forever you have to its such a good story but Jack and Will must get together in the end they just belong together so plz plz update i love the story!!!

Wonderful story! Everything is perfectly described! You've got a great plot line going. The only problem I hwithwith it is that the chapters are too short! I like your story, tough cookie. On a side note, avoid milk.

oh this story is just so beautiful yet so heartbreaking at the same time.update soon!

Thank you =) Now I get it. I hope you don’t think that I don’t like the story, I’m just out of coffee and I need a longer minute to understand few things :P Now everything is making perfect sense.

*wants to pet Jack and tell him everything will be okay* (I'm such a sap)

Awe, poor Jack.., he, he kinda did...*motions with head* that *grunt*...and...

AGG! Can't decide how to feel!

Write more, so I can make up my mind! *yells* END THE TORMENT!

*Laughs at self*
I'm silly

great story but there’s one thing I don't understand. Will was raped by Jack and he was almost dead but why all of a sudden he’s „starving, weak and battered for weeks” ? I get the “lost a lot of blood” part but you mean to tell me that Jack treated him like this all the time ?

No-o-o-o! Please update this, you can't leave it there! It's a great story that has potential to explore Jack and Will's characters more.

OMG!!

Why have I not seen this before? Well, I'm kinda glad I haven't... I'm having a rehap of insomnia if that's even the correct phrase..can\can't think right now... I'm amazed I'm typing lol! But I completely loved it! Especially the rape, I think you've got the emotions so down pat. I can really feel them in my gut. I get that tingle... doesn't happen that often. I really like how you've portrayed Jack, but I don't quite understand why Will suddenly "died".... it is really interesting though. I can't wait for more. I hope you update soon. I can't really offer much advice... afraid my muses are all tapped out with all my shiznit. But take heart.... loss of direction comes to us all and I'm sure you'll figure it out. I would like them to get back together though....

I think you should have Will seeking out Jack so that they can talk about what happened at least.... I'm not a big fan of HET so I might be a bit biast against a Will/Elizabeth...

~lydia~

Please write more!!! im desperate its brilliant! lol :)

Hello! It's a nice story. You should continue. Um,I was even thinking about few ideas as I read. I keep doing that,lol. Seeing that you asked,I'll tell you. Since Jack promised to let Will go if the boy lived,Jack should let him go. Period. Will goes away,finds Elizabeth again,but then he decides it's Jack the one he really loves. He can be disappointed with something about Elizabeth...he'll go find the Pearl again and will forgive Jack. Oh,please write some smut after that. ;) Hope that helps. Mahie