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AWWW!!! That's soooo sweet! Poor Jack! He feels so wretched! And Will doesn't even care!? You CAN NOT let Jack leave Will, or Will leave Jack! You can't! They BELONG together! You hear me!? They BE.LO.NG TO.GETH.ER!!! I'm off my high horse now... thank you.
Great job! Cheers, mate!
Rutaari

NOOO! How could you do that to our poor muffin!? Jack isn't a bad man! He just doesn't know himself. As Robin Williams said, and I quote, "God made one mistake in his creation of men, and that was that he gave them a brain and a penis and only enough blood to run one at a time." I can't wait to see what Will thinks of Jack after this.

I love your style of writing! You obviously passed English class with flying colors! I was wondering, though where you say "Jack proclaimed with utter serenity." if you meant to say "Jack proclaimed with utter sincerity." Just curious. Anyway, keep it coming!
XOXOXOXO!
Rutaari

Wow! I love this fic!!! The way you say Liz "haunts Will's soul" is really cool! Poor Jack! Let him get Will back!!! Please! Update soon! I'll review more later... sorry so short.
Rutaari

Oh that was so beautiful and so sad. I got a little irritated with Will. What if he's making Jack believe he loves him when he doesn't? But hopefully everything will be alright for them. :) Please write more? Cheers,Mahie