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Yay! Will is fighting that erm...what is that other voice? Evil Will? Well who/whatever it is I'm glad he's fighting it...

Don't worry about the link...the comic is about 3(?) years long or something like that...and you'll be happy when you do get around to it.

Write more, please, I wanna know what happens...(I fear Will killing himself...I've read some stories where he does *tear*)

oh oh oh oh!!!! beautiful!!!!! Does that mean that he can't hear the humming when he's with Jack in 'that' way? Is the voice in his head silenced by this?!!! Pleae say yes!!!! they're so wonderful together...look at me...they make me go all fangirl!Seraph...BLOODY HELL. Sorta like Will's coming outa the blackness and seeing some grey hues or something. Hope Jack can help him...hope Jack DOES help him. Hope you also got my email with the addresses for other forums. more soon please!!!!

oh, and just another thing, i have been known to cry out randomly 'I wish i were a gay man' so you're right, you'r not alone. *grabs grayceful, her elven-eyes, will, jack and anyone else who is of the same mind and drags them off to a gay bar*...for research pruposes of course...remind me to take my painkillers only as precribed!!!
Oh and reading back on the chapter again...WIll's not gonna off himself is he the the ending IS gonna be happy isn't it??? *whimpers* have been reading an interesting book on self harm though...made me thing of your Will...that is all...you know i love your stuff already!!!!

Here's some more reveiw flavored nourishment for you! You are exactly correct about the shared sentiment of being a gay man. Mine is slightly more strange though sin hav have actually dated several gay men. Poor me. I need to pay more attention to my gaydar. But anyways, great chapter. Will and Jack kissage and naughty rubbing. Yay! Things are seeming to get better. I suppose I won't know if you're tricking me until you post the next chapter. I garentee you I will like it even if it was a trick. Hopefully things will work out for them. 'till next time!

I like this story. Have I told you that? I can't remember.

I like how Will talks to himself, and how worried Jack is.

A I t I total agree with you about wanting to be a guy so I could be gay...*meh* I guess I'm not so weird. Oh, and I agree that the sexiest couple would be two guys.
You should read Boy Meets Boy (it's a finished web comic on keenspot * http://boymeetsboy.keenspot.com/d/20000922.html *) Go check it out...it's sweet.

Yay! More updates! SOOOOO COOL! If you want to post on another website try mediaminer.org. It's a pretty good spot even it decides not to work every now and then. (What can I say, it's the internet) Anywayz... as I was starting to say, great chapter. So, does Will offically have a pesky voice in his head now? Sucks for him. The voices always get you in trouble and when you try to blame them ( to outside parties ) then people say your crazy. Or you are crazy. Is it the same thing? I think it might be. Okay, I've started to ramble. Time to slowly back away from the keyboard.....

well, now i feel just horrible for not updating recently. but, what's done is done. last chaper i wanted to say that i was thrilled that will stood up to the voice in his head (that must be difficult, seriously). and this chapter the conversation he had aloud with himself was hilarious, i'm sitting here laughing my head off while my roommate questions my sanity, again.
oooooooo, btw, in case you cared slash came upmy wmy women's studies class. i squeed when the teacher mentioned it, everyone looked at me like i was crazy, but slash is the best thing ever.
YAY for slash!

Hiya! I told you I would reveiw again. Now you'll never rid rid of me. That was a good chapter. It wasn't too short. At least I wouldn't have called it short. Well I'm glad that you updated. Gave me my fic fix. See ya next time!

/I can see mouths moving, but I don’t know what is said./

Dear god, sounds like the uni lecture i was forced to sit through this morning. Twas nice to jump online and find you'd updated though, made my day despite the drakness of it all.

Will's really falling deeper and deeper huh? These conversations that he has in his head...well they're more arguments really. aren't they, well they scare the crap out of me but i love them all the same.

/I had lost interest at some point in the conversation, so I’m not positive./ find myself doing that constantly too. Is it bad that i can relate myself to Dark!Will more easily than i can with any other Will?

Anyway dude, hope writing this isn't having too much of a bad effect on you...anxiety attacks aren't good. Would REALLY like to know what's going on in Jack's mind though even if you don't make whole chapters of him. And if you're after more reviews perhaps you could consider posting this on other forums aswell? There're quite a few yahoo groups that would accept and embrace this as well as Live Journal communities if you have an LJ that is.

Please keep writing!!! *sends much motivation*

Hiya! I really like your story. I would have reveiwed sooner but I just started reading it today. I think for future chapters you should stick with Will's POV. Your doing so well with it and I like his point of veiw (can you tell I have the same sort of strange thinking as you?) Anyway, I'm the type of person who loves to reveiw and you seem to like reading reveiws so I think we could have a good arangement. You write the chapters, I'll reveiw (strange thoughts and all) and we can be happy with the lovely symbiosis. ( Told you I was strange) I look foward to the next chapter.