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*bleches and pats her belly happily* ahhh, nothing better then eating some pizza while reading a good slash fic. *makes contented noises*

In other news, yes, I completely agree. Will ~should~ have Jack's babies. Think of how cute they would be! And after several several many years of longness, think of how sexy they's be! o.o Excuse me while I uh... go to the bathroom. Heh, no, I kid. But yes, I like how while you changed Will, making him "OOC" you did so rightfully, and according to the situation. I was a bit worried at first as I am with all fics that make charaters OOC that they'll be somewhat flat, but your will started with his steady charater developement in the first chappter, and little quirks of his (as in the mirror scene) keep popping up here and there, making him even more interesting and colorful. Wooow, I just became all serious and meaningful and junk. o.O. That almost never happens! Yeek! *flees*

Lurv,
Jessi

Still loving the emotional depth of Will. When Will said he wantedbreabreak something I had a horrible feeling that something was actually someone, namely Jack. Jack seems to be stronger than this, though.
There really is an element of suspense because I have no idea what Will's little smirk in the last chapter meant. Is he planning to hurt Jack? I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chappie :)

I really like your fic. I've been getting annoyed with all the fics where authors turn Will into a crying baby too. If people actually paid attention to Will's character in the movie, they'd see that unlike Jack, he's rather quick to anger, kills without hesitation when it's necessary, and isn't afraid of danger. Well, Jack isn't afraid of danger either, but you get the point. It's nice to see a fic in which Will isn't a sniveling wimp. *nods*

This just keeps getting better! I don't think you'll let me down and make Will woosie! You're WAAAAAY too good to do that! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!

aaaah! o.o! Will just raped Jack! There are so many fics out there in which it's the other way around, that I must admit the change is refreshing, *giggle, snort* I wasn't expecting that to happen, which was also refreshing. And I also liked that fact that it wasn't complete rape like woah, as Jack didn't seem... too... upset over it. *looks around* Write more! quick!

I love it when Will isn't so much of a wussy-boy! Will raping Jack is HOT! Please continue!

I don't know if I've reviewed yet, but I just wanted to say that I love this story. I love Will's voice; the apathy is very realistic and common to rape victims. And I love how Will raped Jack. Obviously Will has lost his morals and regard for others and is on his way to becoming a sociopath. And it almost seems like Jack can forgive him for what he's done. The fact that I don't knowt tht the next chapter holds is what keeps me coming back. Great job!

WowIamsocool. XD I started reading your fic again, 'cause there was a new chapter, but somehow stupidly managed to start reading the first chapter, thinking that it was the thrid.ot vot veeeery confused. "Oh my goodness, what is this, a flashback? o.O" the the smartest ever. woot. Just thought I'd share that with you. My smartness boggles the mind, it does.

And anyhoohahs, unless you lose you plot, give Will magical Marysueish powers, and start using chatspeak in your story, I think you're safe. It will still be good. Haw, I sure told you, I did. *looks around*

I've been glomped, hee!! ^_^

I really am enjoying this fic, hun. It's one thing to write about the events, but to get into the person's mind can sometimes be difficult ... well, doing it effectively, at any rate. So far, you've got a good handle on it.

This is making me want to post my stuff now, and is also making me think of writing something dark (Kali's never done dark before, but, I've got the mind for it). Between you, Selene, me, and soon Sora, we should start our own fanfic club. ;)

Ah, the beauty of first person narrative. Will has every RIGHT to be snarky. I'd be pissed if they didn't feed ME, too! ;) You're doing well with this, hun. And, I'll say it here, I like your other one too. SO THERE! Okay, I must flee now.

Kali ~ the Uber Tired (and therefore a Bit Loopy)