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OK, so Jack and Cass' father is a god right? I'm assuming Quetzalcoatl? (he WAS mentioned in the last story, wasn't he?) And from Jack's reaction and Cass's hysteria at the end, they have some kind of glamour to make them appear more human? Tell me if I'm right here, please! :P This story is excellent - i love the way you've incorporated the gods, and the storyline's had me on the edge of my seat so far! Keep up the good work, hopefully you'll update soon!

Fainpathe Elanesse

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Id itd it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, the dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...

Jack and Cassandra are.... bro and sis? And they... ? They...? EEEEEeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. gross. Please tell me one of them will turn out to have been adopted. Still, in all, the scene between them.. very hot.

Thanks for reading my story!
ummmm......I'm REALLLLLLLLY confused. Please email me and explain or give me a hint of what's happening. I liked it but I'm confused. Update soon and email me!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

ok ok I love this story! I like the idea of Jack having a sister. I'm guessing they're twins, paternal twins. Am I right??? I didn't review To Ride the Waves simply because I wanted to read this one. I love both. Although I'm kinda foon ton the plot, but I'm sure that will clear up soon.
Could you possibly give my story a go?? It's called La Belle Rosa and it's under my pen-name HisBeautiful. My main character is a girl but she's no Marysue so could you please give it a try?? Review and let me know what you think! I hope you update this soon! It's great!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Very interesting so far. I liked the bit about the storm on the previous story. I'riourious about this 'other' treasure. Keep typing!

Hey! You can't leave the story there. I want to know more about this ship The Moon. I would also like to know what happened to Elizabeth. Please put op the next chapter soon.