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November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I need an update!!! It's just to cute! *Squee* I can just imagine a chibi Will being too quiet but so adorably cute. And mini Jack with a bottle of rum! Sounds like he started early! Lol, well please continue. I'm looking forward to the update.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why, me liked it a lot...
Please continue, didn´t think it sucked at all!
I found it very cute...waitin´ for the next chapters...
*impatientwriggles*
;-) Liz
Please continue, didn´t think it sucked at all!
I found it very cute...waitin´ for the next chapters...
*impatientwriggles*
;-) Liz
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
Keep up the awesome work, coolsa.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is very interesting and is off to a good start. One thing, some of the spelling is rather scrambled, but that probably is not you because I have seen the same thing on different fics. I look foward to reading more and good luck with your writting.
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i looove ur story so far i'm totaly hooked in... i cant wait to see what happens next, i hope u update soon ^^
ur new fan, manda ^_~
ur new fan, manda ^_~
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You want a review?!!! I'll give ya damn review!!! I like it!! It started out really depressing, one of the reasons why i didn't cnue nue reading it until now, but, i llike what you've done with it!!! Please update!! I wanna know what happened to the Turners and what other twists you've given the story!!! Keep it up, cuz its really intersting! Thanks!
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya sweetie! Great job you're doing here! I know reviews (even flames) are like gold to writers like you and me.
Only a couple of tiny details though...according to canon, Gibbs was with the navy when Will crossed to the Caribbean, and as far as I know (I could be mistaken...ask Pendragginink...she's my expert), they didn't take pirates or ex-pirates into their ranks... And I'm sure that Annamaria is about the same age as Norrie...so figure 30-33 about the time of the movie...so she'd be a little girl during your story.
However, I like the plot too much to givadam about such tiny details. Keep going please! I love it!
Hellborne
Only a couple of tiny details though...according to canon, Gibbs was with the navy when Will crossed to the Caribbean, and as far as I know (I could be mistaken...ask Pendragginink...she's my expert), they didn't take pirates or ex-pirates into their ranks... And I'm sure that Annamaria is about the same age as Norrie...so figure 30-33 about the time of the movie...so she'd be a little girl during your story.
However, I like the plot too much to givadam about such tiny details. Keep going please! I love it!
Hellborne
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Clicking off the safety I’m reminded of the last time I stood like this
Did pistols have safety's back then? Hmmm. Anyway, sounds intriguing so far.
Did pistols have safety's back then? Hmmm. Anyway, sounds intriguing so far.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start! You've got my attention, now just write more!
Great stuff!
Hellborne
Great stuff!
Hellborne
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm...interesting. when i read the first chapter, i almost didn't want to read anymore, cuz it seemed like a dead end (ew, bad pun). anyway, i saw the second chapter, and i felt i had to read it - good thing, because i've found another fic that i'll want to follow. your original characters add depth to the story, and i'm waiting to see what happens to them, even though we kinda know the ultimate result from the first chapter...ok, well, all of that babbling was a roundabout way of saying, "I like it! Keeping going! Add more soon!"