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for Confession

by Emeronis

schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! I can't take it any more. I was only able to make it to the end of chapter two. Seriously, WAY too many songs. They're really detracting more than they're adding to the fic.
Limit one, or two songs at the very most, for an entire fic, IF they're cleverly put in, and truly add to the plot. Otherwise, they're just distracting, take the reader out of the scene, and honestly, seem as though you're trying to appear as though you've written more than you really did.
person Miya Sparrow
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! I love it...*sigh* those two are the cutest, sexiest things in the world. oh and I love that song, and I thought I was the only one who thought that song went with Jack and Will!...cause it does! ah! *sigh* i'm ok, yay I loved it!
person luisa
schedule September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it but i wanted to ask what song is the one with no other love and who sings it
thanx
person MK
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic's been doing great! Go on, go on! I need more. More sex, please? ^_^
person AdrianaSparrow
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I used 3 different songs. The song I used for Jack was "Dying" by Five For Fighting. Will's song was "A Million Miles Away" by Goo Goo Dolls. Then, for the sex scene, I used "Love Song For A Vampire" by Annie Lennox.
person forgotten_evil
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
** so* so wonderfuly beautiful AND hot!!!...amazing;)

this may be a stupid question but what song did you use?
person Mahierj
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh,how beautiful...it's just the kind of fic I like to read...first time and romance... ^__^ I loved it. It was really sweet. What song is that? The lyrics are beautiful.