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i like this but please update soon. maybe if achilles see's paris fighting menelaus, pov of achilles then paris see's him, realises that he doesn't want to die and fights for achilles. maybe achilles could sneak into troy. just ideas, you don't need to use them just know that i love this fic and would really like for you to continue it.

Love the story so far. Please make another chapter. Love Achilles/Paris-pairings.

Achilles could always save Paris from Menelaus and whisk him away then screw him. That's pretty much all I can think of. Helen's an annoying bitch. She pissed off my friends as well because I wouldn't shut up about how annoying she was throughout the film. She must have snuck on board, since Paris would never really want that snarky cow.

this fic has a great deal of potetial, keep it up, so far i'm loving it

Keep it up, a very good start. You can only get better. Just one request, please update frequently.