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Hello!!! This is my first fic on this site, I’m not the best writer in the world, and I’d greatly appreciate any pointers and creative criticism on what I’m doing wrong!!!!

Disclaimer: I don’t own anything, except the idea and story line!!! If you don’t like Male/Male relationships then don’t read this fic, you’ll be wasting your time.

Summary: What if Paris didn’t want Helen to come with him, and she snuck aboard anyway? What happens when he’s forced to marry a woman he only lusts, not loves, in the face of a War?

Pairing: I’m thinking Paris/Achilles.

They are both so HOT, I cant help it!!! and Sibcest, is just disgusting in my opinion. <shudder>

(A/N): / / means thought. “ “ means talking (duh). ~*~ ~*~ means flashback.

okay now that we got that straight.....ON TO THE STORY!!!

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Chapter 1:

It was a warm day in Troy, and the Princes were in the main chamber with their father the King, and his counsel. “What do you suggest we do?” Priam asked his sons.

“I still say give Helen to the Greeks.” Hector replied with some disgust.

“No, Menelaus will only kill her, and Agamemnon will still fight Troy.” A older man from the counsel said, and a majority agreed.

“I will fight Menelaus myself then. It is my fault that Helen is here, and the Greeks are after her.” Prince Paris said with vigor, though inside he was shaking, he hoped he wouldn’t have to face the barbarian alone, he was not a man to fight, he’d never wielded a sword for anything other than practice.

“ No Paris!” Helen cried, as she ran into the chamber and grabbed a hold of her beloved prince.

“Helen, it isn’t Paris’s fault the Greek’s are here, you are the one who snuck aboard our ship.” Hector said as he glared at the milky skinned woman.

“I think Paris’s idea is phenomenal and courageous. We shall see tomorrow when the Greeks advance upon the walls.” The King said with conviction, and the counsel erupted in chatter.

Hector stormed off, he had no use for half the men in the counsel. He was the leader of the Trojan army, yet his father dismissed his fair minded ideas every time he gave a suggestion. Sure he loved his father but his father was senile, he was the only one to see that except the Greeks it seemed. /Always blabbering about the God’s protecting us...HA. I’m sure they are laughing at me, I should have turned that blasted ship around when I seen her...Its to late now, she’s here and engaged to marry Paris, who won’t even be living after tomorrow if he fights Menelaus./

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Paris stormed off to his room, he was a mess. He wanted so badly to beg his father to not making him go out tomorrow. He had a feeling he’d die quickly and shamefully, if he did face Menelaus.

Once he got to his room he threw himself across the bed and cried silently. How had this happened? Why was he to marry a woman he didn’t even love? Why didn’t hrothrother turn the ship around and return Helen?

That’s right, he only said all that sweet stuff to Helen the night of the feast to swoon her, he didn’t mean it. He was only 20, and he had no wish to marry, he enjoyed his time sleeping with women, not loving them. Sure he loved women, their body, their beauty, but not their personality, especially not royal women, all they wanted was perfumed baths, money, and children. That wasn’t what he wanted, anything but that truthfully.

He thought back to the day they shipped off for home.

~*~ The cool crispy breeze of the ocean was glorious, they’d successfully made a peace treaty with Sparta, it was a nice day to sail, and the men were in good spirits, what more could you ask for?

“Paris, go fetch some water for us, if you don’t mind.” Hector told him.

“Alright.” He answered, as he went to pull the door open and started to go below deck. Upon reaching the bottom, he turned around and looked around for the water bags. They were beside a couple of crates, and as he passed them he seen something move in the corner of his eye.

/There are no rats on this ship.../ He thought, and he reached over the crates to move the tarp that was there, and when he did there was a feminine gasp.

“By the Gods!” Paris exclaimed, seeing the creamy face, and golden locks that could only belong to Helen.

“Paris, my love, are you not happy to see me?” She questioned. She knew the answer, all she had to do was look into the young Prince’s eyes.

“Do you know what’s going to happen!?” He was distraught, he ran up the ladder to get his brother, he would help solve this. “Hector!!!” He shouted as he ran to the side of his elder brother.

“What is it? You look like you’ve seen Hades.” The older Prince said, slightly chuckling.

“You must come below deck, right now!” Paris said, hs cos confused, he had no idea what to do. If Helen came to Troy, the Spartans would come after her, and all their hard work would be in vain.

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He was right, but not only the Spartans, the whole Greek army had come for her, not just her, but to over take Troy. A thousand ships, at least fifty thousand Greeks were upon Trojan territory. If they didn’t act fast, Troy would be over run with Greeks, and would fall to its knees. He knew this, and his father was to naive to see it.

“Father thinks he can hide behind four thousand men and the Trojan walls. He’s wrong. His foolish beliefs will kill us all!” Paris said to himself, for no one else was in his chambers. He was tired, and it was getting late, he could worry about the upcoming battle tomorrow morning when he awoke.

He soon fell into a restless sleep, the nightmare of what could happen tomorrow filled his mind with terrible dreams.

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DONT KILL ME!!!!!

(looks sheepish)

I don’t think its very good....YET. I’m just starting out, I hope to have another chapter up by tomorrow!! Hopefully that one will be longer, and it will get more interesting.

Like I said before, I would greatly appreciate some creative criticism and some pointers. Also let me know what you think of the fic, and if it seems to plain, and even suggestions on some of the plot. Every idea helps!!!!

Feed my plot bunnies~!!!!