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for Hidden Dangers

by Aithilin

person midnighteyes
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hope you update soon.. Real good start to a story
person Crecy
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I wanna read more please!!
person pio
schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm intrigued in how you plan this story to go, especially the meeting of Achilles and Paris (and where it goes from there)!
person Monica
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. I rather like it, continue soon :)
person MissJinny
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am really impressed with how well you write. The story line is interesting and developing at a nice pace (i.e. not those stories where -using your plot- you say he's going to spy then in the next paragraph he's been in the palace a week). I like well thought out, developed plot and it looks like this is going to be one of those stories. Can't wait for an update.

~Nnif -.-
person Larissa
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's spelled Odysseus.