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for Metamorphosis

by hellborne

person josephine
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes i'm having a lot of fun now update soon please!!!
person smiley_one_83
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read all your fics. This one's my absolute favorite. Gender switch fics crack me up. More please soon. Thank you.
person jesse
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story. i love the way its written, i also like how youve played it out. but i am curious, when does jack get his body back (ohh i love jacks old body!!)
person sallie
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE! Update!
This story is great.
You're one of my favorite AFF.net writters!
person littlebird
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A ship full of gentle(wo)man-pirates, the Pearl is. Crewmembers massage Jack and nobody even tries to grope. (Why dont they leave the care for a woman to the other rescued women some of whom live in the captain's cabin anyway, if they are not out to grope?)
Annamaria lets a stranger steer the Pearl, and an ill woman to boot, of whose skill she knows nothing.
They are all a bit too caring and gentle for my taste, sorry. They are pirates after all. I would have expected half the crew lusting after Jack. Not trying to molest her (knowing she is Mrs Turner, and with a captain who objects to such things, and with Annamaria). But at least some talk among themselves, some lewd glances and remarks, the one or other proposition ... That could have been funny, the crew lusting after their captain.
Good scene for Jack in the bilge, though. It's nice when (s)he sometimes shows that (s)he is a dangerous, er, person, not helpless, soft or a clown all the time.
Ack, men fucking in bilge water. *shudder* Pigs!
Jack might have tried to pile up the corpses and step on them to get the chain loose. OK, they would probably have been to heavy.
Don't take my habitual complaining to heart; if I didn't like your stories I wouldn't read them.
Please continue!
person spanishgoddess86
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Jack and Will are back together and rescued from being kidnapped. Now though I'm anxious to read how Jack going to get his body back and last how is Will going to adjust to his love actually being in a mans body. Anyway please update really soon. I love your work.
person spanishgoddess86
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is interesting if anything is really said about it. I don't know if I really like the idea of Jack and a woman, but you do make it work as far as the story goes. Anyway I hope Jack does get found by Will and James and saved and then I hope Jack can get his body back. Well please update soon I can't wait.
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Such lovely confusion! And Jack Sparrow making Teiresias' choice, whether he knows the precedent or not. :-) I hope you keep educating Will, wising up Elizabeth, and giving a bit of fun to anyone else in the vicinity, before you do much about the curse. But by all means, get on with the story, "bit of fun" or not!
person littlebird
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was nice. Now Jack only has to confess to Jamie also. He could hardly hang a woman for being Jack Sparrow, or Bedlam might get crowded.
person JAZ
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tHAT WAS FUN BUT PLEASE TURN JACK BACK INTO A MAN SO HE CAN TAKE WILL