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for Metamorphosis

by hellborne

person littlebird
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that's Jack: more curious than shocked and exploring his new body intensely.
I wonder how he/she would take to pregnancy, though.
person littlebird
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mr "opportune moment" transformed to Miss "worst moment possible" - poor creature.
I do hope they act through the ceremony nonetheless just to be safe, and that they have a nice wedding night.
(Congratulations to you for your renewed existence.)
person DjRainbowBrite
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GAWD it's JACK isn't it?! It took me a minute to figure out, but then I was like why's it called metamorphosis? and it hit me lol. *wants to know who the woman is that turned Jack into a woman and sent him to Port Royal.. so I can have her turn him back into a man an send 'im to me ~grin~*
I really like this so far, hopefully you'll add more? XD
person DjRainbowBrite
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, uhh.. sorry if I spoiled it for anyone ;_; Woops... >_<
person littlebird
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This version looks less odd and more understandable than the previous one. That aside, I have no idea yet where the story is going, so I can't make any substantial comments.
Good luck to you in Las Vegas!
person Ani Sparrow
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Hmm. This is rather intriguing actually. I have a feeling I know what might be going on but won't say. I hope you post the next chapter(s) up.
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sounds like this story is going to get intresting. check mine out iv just done my first chapter as well xx

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