rate_review Reviews

I think your doing pretty good on this story. Umm I'm not sure what advice I could give you.......well........I's kind of missing details or maybe it's just short. I think it's good for a first fanfict though. Good Job!!

Wow this was great! I've read it like, ten times now. I can't believe you're the only one writing Miguel/Tulio on AFF though, because it's so absofrigginlutely (is that a word?) obvious that they could be a couple! I would write my own, but my friends kinda think the pairing is wierd. >_< Keep going though, cause you're doing great as a writer, and if you get the opportunity, check out my stories and tell me what you think of them. They're Trigun, but I've discovered an interseting little detail: Miguel and Tulio have the same character traits and looks about them as Vash and Wolfwood. Watch an episode if you don't believe me. The resemblance is uncanny! Oh well, I'm rambling again. See ya

J-chan

Praise God! Finally a yaoi Road to El Dorado story. I can express how happy I am. I've been surfin' the web 2 long looking 4 a yaoi story of the two. PLEASE rite more soon.!!!

I am impressed already, in a short span of words you give us a taste of backstory and inner dialogue for darling Miguel. And it's betaed, oh my yes, you have my approval. ^_~ Keep up the good work, precious.

~Rose Black
"Half a week before the winter
A chill that bites before it comes
And I'm a child of the pleasure
That he brings before he runs."

what are you waiting for ....keep going ...keep writing damnit lol

Hey, I'm lovin this idea. If you updated you might make someone happy (hint hint). I've always loved the El Dorado movie and am phsyced that you're writing a yummy-yaoi-goodness fic.

i liked it...quite a lot. i would really enjoy a sequel.

~Remember, fire is dangerous to those who dont play with it all the time~

Lillia AKA 1/2 of the PKmaniacs