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for One Good Woman

by JoyLyn

person TJ
schedule February 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good.
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!
schedule March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So good! More please!

ch13
person Adrianna
schedule December 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update this is great :)
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woah... that was.. unBELIEVABLY hot.. PLEASE KEEP WRITING.. wow. I need to go and cool off now. Wooow..
person Shyann
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this It's great I wonder what happens next..
schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh that was nice =] More Please?
person Bratney
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of the best stories I've read on this site. Please keep it up!
person Keen
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let me start off by saying I eagerly await the fourteenth chapter. I just spent the better part of a half-hour catching up with your fic and I am enamoured with your unique writing style. Its like a constant train of thought from the characters, divvied up as they arrive and it sucked me right in. Not to mention some of the situations you constructed were also just so grabbing. The part where Jason presents the thug for her to batter and his unexpected reaction to seeing her kill the man slowly, that was stirring. The pacing and reasoning on his part after sex was so well timed. And the knife play was hot, tapping on her shirt to make her take it off, the pants for the same purpose. So yes, yes, yes, I do look forward to the next chapter! BRING IT ON!
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wish you could update. You've got us all wondering what will happen now that the 'bad' people have taken 'his' Jesse away. I have NEVER read an F13 fic this good, it's actually believable. Please update!