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for One Good Woman

by JoyLyn

person anonymous
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, finally! I've been waiting forever for an update.
Though, I must say - it was definitely worth the wait. ^_~
person Detroit
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter ( a little long in the making, but no complaints here. You more than made up for it) Love the psychosis. Keep it up.
person Graz\'zt
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy to see you continuing the story. It would be a shame to see such a good tale go uncompleted. That said, I loved the new chapter! Great build-up for what I am sure is going to be a great finale. It's nice to see that Jesse is staying loyal to Jason, and seeing how she's changed through the eyes and reactions of those who knew her before. It was really decent of her to try and warn Beth, whom she has good reason to hate or at least dislike. I'm really looking forward to seeing how it all plays out!
person Zidane
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this has got to be the most best and accurate depiction of jason in a fic so far....will there be any more to come....I hope so!! keep it going you're awesome ^_^!
person stormy
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm curious, I just watched Freddy vs Jason, And was just thing it would be interesting what reaction Jason wouls have if Freddy tried to target Jesse out of revenge? I thought it kinda soundedfub anyway:) Love your story am now off to check your other stories.
Keep up the Great work!!!!
Stormy
person Lost Soul
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u had me scared i thuoght u wouldn't finish it. But u r finishing it!!!!! what can isay , your story kicks ass. can't wait till the next chapter
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing story you created!! *giggles* jason's getting some different kind of action, if you catch my driff...
*heheheheheee* please update soon!!
person Graz\'zt
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continuing in the same excellent vein! I especially liked the scene where Jason is justifying his actions to himself. Good work!
person Pallas
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, two chapters in such little time! Yeah!! I really liked chapter 11 & 12. After 11, I was wondering if Jason would slowly start to see Jesse as something good, or just 'his', instead of Jesse being a 'bad' girl. Chapter 12 was very good, as it painted a somewhat dreamy picture. I am looking forward to more: where are yoy taking this? I do hope for a happy ending (for both Jesse and Jason), for I am a sucker for those. Plus, it would be nice for Jason to have something to hold on, to have, don't you think?
person razielslittleflamekaat
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well woot! That was awsome yeah it was! i like it! That and the Inhabitor is a cool character the way you write him. Neato! More please!