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for One Good Woman

by JoyLyn

person an enthusiastic fan
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i adore this story more than anyone has a right to. i am so psyched that you updated! i was waiting on edge to see what happened next and you didn't disappoint. seriously, you've got me riveted. please continue to write this marvelous, if twisted story. ^_^
person Dark Topaz
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see what happens
person Pallas
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really feel sorry for Tommy and for Jesse. I can really understand what she did, because when someone hurts a person you love, you just want to hurt that someone back, I think. I'm looking forward to next chapters. Will Jesse feel sorry for her actions? She will probably blame herself for Tommy's death, won't she? And what kind of changed will happen to Jason's body? Update soon. please.
person Devilish Kurumi
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"There was a naked woman, in bed, reading about him!" -- Hehe, no idea how close to home THAT line struck.
person Devilish Kurumi
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"And he did not expect her to plunge the blade into the man’s lower belly." --- And Jason was like "...Whoa" and got a total nosebleed because goddamn, there is nothing hotter than a woman killing a man who had hurt her. :D I love you. I love you, and this is one of the best fics I've read on this site.
person Cobalt Glass
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*
You stoped?! Wha--How---WHY??!!
Ahem. Good show. Please continue :D
person Nemo
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you keep this one-chapter-a-day stuff up. I need my fix, man!
person anonymous
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ A quick update is always good. And please, don't rush the story. The 'play' sex was actually alot better then real sex would have been this soon in the story. Keep up the good work. :)
person Nemo
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OhdearjesusGOD

Hurry up with that next chapter you, you - TEASE!
person anonymous
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This is the best F13 fic I have ever read. And to top it off, you're even managing to put sex between a normal human and a big rotting zombie in there and make
it sound plausible. It deserves a reward of some kind. I applaud you. The only complaint I have is that the updates are so far apart. But, as long as you actually finish the
story(so many people just leave their own uncompleted) I will withdraw said complaint.
'Cause... you roxxorz!!!1!!onehundredeleven. ^^