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Thanks for the update!! I sure hope the next will be up soon, especially as you promised us some action... I really am looking forward to the next bit: does Jesse gets away, or is she stopped by Jason? Does Jason go after her if she manages to get away? !Questions, questions. Only you have the answers!!

It's intriguing! Really very much so... I do hope there will be more parts added!! Please continue!!

love your story please update soon.

Love the story so far, can't wait to read more.

Very very interesting. Good stuff without the "good stuff". I hope the next chapter comes out soon because I can't wait to see what happens to everybody and just how far you're gonna take Jason's changes.

I really like how this story is going. Please write or I shall make your Huge head IMPLODE on its self.

You rock.

Guess who's on my reccomended reading list...? Some person in 'Celebrities' *grin* Kidding, you and only you (so far) my dear... now, get on with the next chapter already. I finished mine now you hold up your end of the deal! ... oh, that's right, there was no deal... still, get the next chapter and stuff.

Love this story...MORE MORE!! Yeah squishy decomposed um...parts probably wouldn't work too well LOL!! That'd be pretty embarrassing if it just kinda, yah know, fell off...EEP!! *hides*

Ah, it just keeps getting better and better, it's wonderful how these serial stories have a noticeable improvement when someone is just starting out. It goes from being allright, few typos here, some grammatical errors there, usually due to typing in the late hours of the night or the wee hours in the morning as far as I can guess. Then as chapters or posts are added you see the improvement grow into something rather impressive, more gripping, more captivating, and it's pretty fucking rare that those words can be used in reference to a story on this site without some vulgar undertone. Especially, of all things, a friday the 13th adult fan fic... well... then again, if there were to be a fan fic involving sex and horror friday the 13th would probably be the best series for the job. Anyway, I pray my little story shows such improvement, provided I can beat myself into writing the next part.

Keep up the good work White Raven, seems oddly fascinating... oh, and just for clarifcation, saying you've improved doesn't mean you were horrible in the beginning so don't dare bring that up! :P Later.

DoR