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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
*Deafening applause* Bravo, bravo! That was one hell of an ending! You have really blown me away with this entire story! I'm your most avid fan! Fantastic job!
Smithsbabe65
*Deafening applause* Bravo, bravo! That was one hell of an ending! You have really blown me away with this entire story! I'm your most avid fan! Fantastic job!
Smithsbabe65
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
What a plot twist! You've managed to blindside me. I didn't even see that coming! Whew, I am just beside myself with sadness. Poor Amanda, but she loves Smith! Hurray! Now, you must hurry and write the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Smithsbabe65
What a plot twist! You've managed to blindside me. I didn't even see that coming! Whew, I am just beside myself with sadness. Poor Amanda, but she loves Smith! Hurray! Now, you must hurry and write the next chapter! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Smithsbabe65
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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*fucking dies*
more.
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*fucking dies*
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
She's just got to love Smith back, she's got to! What's not to love? Those baby blues, that nice tight ass and a voice that would send any girl into a tizzy! Poor Amanda, she's scared that she'll loose Smith the way she lost Kyle. Hurry with the next chapter, I've just got to know if Smith love will be requited or not. Great job, BTW!
Smithsbabe65
She's just got to love Smith back, she's got to! What's not to love? Those baby blues, that nice tight ass and a voice that would send any girl into a tizzy! Poor Amanda, she's scared that she'll loose Smith the way she lost Kyle. Hurry with the next chapter, I've just got to know if Smith love will be requited or not. Great job, BTW!
Smithsbabe65
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
Very hot! I wasn't aware that Smith was such an exhibitionist...I love that way you write him, he's hot, horny and insatiable! It seems the other agents are the same way. Damn, where can a girl go to get her very own love machine? I guess I'll have to consult the Oracle about that one! Keep going, this story is just too good to stop now!
Smithsbabe65
Very hot! I wasn't aware that Smith was such an exhibitionist...I love that way you write him, he's hot, horny and insatiable! It seems the other agents are the same way. Damn, where can a girl go to get her very own love machine? I guess I'll have to consult the Oracle about that one! Keep going, this story is just too good to stop now!
Smithsbabe65
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
Hmmm, it seems that Amanda is going to tread into uncharted territory...I could sense her apprehension, I can't say that I blame her. I would be as jittery as a jackrabbit not know what was going to happen next, but I am a bit curious and am looking forward to finding out.
Hmmm, it seems that Amanda is going to tread into uncharted territory...I could sense her apprehension, I can't say that I blame her. I would be as jittery as a jackrabbit not know what was going to happen next, but I am a bit curious and am looking forward to finding out.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
Could Smith and his fellow agents be involved in some kind of clandestine white slavery ring or something like that? Or perhaps the agents will be swapping partners, although I don't picture Smith allowing Amanda to be touched by another man without some serious reprucussions happening...well I guess I'll have to wait and see if my theories are correct in the next inticing installment. Great job Alex, as usual!
Smithsbabe65
Could Smith and his fellow agents be involved in some kind of clandestine white slavery ring or something like that? Or perhaps the agents will be swapping partners, although I don't picture Smith allowing Amanda to be touched by another man without some serious reprucussions happening...well I guess I'll have to wait and see if my theories are correct in the next inticing installment. Great job Alex, as usual!
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
That was so delicious!! Outstanding chapter! I'm glad to see that comments from narrow minded people like Outlaw have not diminished the intesity of your story!
Oh, and one more thing: More, more, more!
P.S. Selina, I'm glad to see that I wasn't the only that came to Alexandra's defense, although you were a bit harsh, NOT!!!
Smithsbabe65
That was so delicious!! Outstanding chapter! I'm glad to see that comments from narrow minded people like Outlaw have not diminished the intesity of your story!
Oh, and one more thing: More, more, more!
P.S. Selina, I'm glad to see that I wasn't the only that came to Alexandra's defense, although you were a bit harsh, NOT!!!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To Outlaw:
I hate to point out the obvious, but this is an adult fan fiction site! It is clear from your reaction to sexual material that you are either a prude or you are too young to be on this site. Might I recommend that you check out Fan Fiction.net., the stories there might be more to your liking.
To Alexandra:
Don't let the last reviewer ruffle your feathers, this story is fabulous!
Smithsbabe65
I hate to point out the obvious, but this is an adult fan fiction site! It is clear from your reaction to sexual material that you are either a prude or you are too young to be on this site. Might I recommend that you check out Fan Fiction.net., the stories there might be more to your liking.
To Alexandra:
Don't let the last reviewer ruffle your feathers, this story is fabulous!
Smithsbabe65
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"outlaw unknown to you 2005-03-10 id # 2035176857
This story is too sexual, and it depicts Smith too dominating. I couldn't even read the rest of it. I read part of it and then quit because it started disturbing and forcing me to shake my head."
First of all, Outlaw: Do you see a DISNEY sign here? Or sweet fluffy teddy bears?? Or perhaps a Ronald MacDonald???
This is the ADULTfanfiction.Net, Outlaw.
Let me enlighten you what Merrian-Webster says about the word 'adult':
Entry Word: adult
Function: adjective
Text: Synonyms MATURE 1, full-blown, full-fledged, full-grown, grown, grown-up, matured, ripe, ripened
Related Word: aged
Contrasted Words: adolescent, pubescent
Antonyms: juvenile, puerile
Mature - that means being capable of reading the stuff for ADULTS such as EXPLICIT SEX SCENES.
Secondly, if you don't like Alexandra's story or don't have any constructive to say, I suggest you shouldn't comment.
AdultFanFiction.Net is not a church. And if you don't like the contents, perhaps you should be better off to Disney.com
That will be all.
--S
This story is too sexual, and it depicts Smith too dominating. I couldn't even read the rest of it. I read part of it and then quit because it started disturbing and forcing me to shake my head."
First of all, Outlaw: Do you see a DISNEY sign here? Or sweet fluffy teddy bears?? Or perhaps a Ronald MacDonald???
This is the ADULTfanfiction.Net, Outlaw.
Let me enlighten you what Merrian-Webster says about the word 'adult':
Entry Word: adult
Function: adjective
Text: Synonyms MATURE 1, full-blown, full-fledged, full-grown, grown, grown-up, matured, ripe, ripened
Related Word: aged
Contrasted Words: adolescent, pubescent
Antonyms: juvenile, puerile
Mature - that means being capable of reading the stuff for ADULTS such as EXPLICIT SEX SCENES.
Secondly, if you don't like Alexandra's story or don't have any constructive to say, I suggest you shouldn't comment.
AdultFanFiction.Net is not a church. And if you don't like the contents, perhaps you should be better off to Disney.com
That will be all.
--S