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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*ahem*
I might have overreacted a bit. But Alex is a good girl and I will fight for her.
I might have overreacted a bit. But Alex is a good girl and I will fight for her.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the last reviewer,
This is ADULT FAN FICTION. If you have a problem with a fan fic being overtly sexual, then don't read it. If you have problems with sexually graphic descriptions then this is not the site for you. There are a lot of stories on this site that are more sexually graphic than this one. Have a nice day!
The Author
This is ADULT FAN FICTION. If you have a problem with a fan fic being overtly sexual, then don't read it. If you have problems with sexually graphic descriptions then this is not the site for you. There are a lot of stories on this site that are more sexually graphic than this one. Have a nice day!
The Author
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is too sexual, and it depicts Smith too dominating. I couldn't even read the rest of it. I read part of it and then quit because it started disturbing and forcing me to shake my head.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
Best chapter ever! It was naughty and nasty, just the way I like it! You have such a talent for being so descriptive and the dialogue is priceless. Phone sex with Smith, very yummy indeed! Great job, girl! Keep going, I can't wait to see what kind of homecoming Smith will be receiving from Amanda!
Smithsbabe65
Best chapter ever! It was naughty and nasty, just the way I like it! You have such a talent for being so descriptive and the dialogue is priceless. Phone sex with Smith, very yummy indeed! Great job, girl! Keep going, I can't wait to see what kind of homecoming Smith will be receiving from Amanda!
Smithsbabe65
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra:
I don't think I can take much more! This story is scorching hot! It just gets better and better with each chapter you post. Please hurry with the next one, I can hardly wait!
Smithsbabe65
I don't think I can take much more! This story is scorching hot! It just gets better and better with each chapter you post. Please hurry with the next one, I can hardly wait!
Smithsbabe65
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,
Wow, you've left me panting for more!!! Nice tie in with the interrogation scence from the first Matrix film. Now when I watch that particular scene I'll be grinning from ear to ear wondering what is really going on underneath that table! Nicely done!
Smithsbabe65
Wow, you've left me panting for more!!! Nice tie in with the interrogation scence from the first Matrix film. Now when I watch that particular scene I'll be grinning from ear to ear wondering what is really going on underneath that table! Nicely done!
Smithsbabe65
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,
You've outdone yourself! This chapter was so hot, I could swear that my fingertips were burning on my keyboard! My God, you've taken one of my favorite sex scenes from 9 1/2 Weeks and given it a whole new twist! Awesome job! I don't know where you are going to take us next, but whereever it is, I, your loyal reader, will be sure to follow!
Once again, outstanding job!
Smithsbabe65
You've outdone yourself! This chapter was so hot, I could swear that my fingertips were burning on my keyboard! My God, you've taken one of my favorite sex scenes from 9 1/2 Weeks and given it a whole new twist! Awesome job! I don't know where you are going to take us next, but whereever it is, I, your loyal reader, will be sure to follow!
Once again, outstanding job!
Smithsbabe65
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,
I am speachless...this was sooooo hot! I've got goosebumps all over!!!! I bow down to you. You are the master and I a mere apprentice! Fabulous job!!!!! I really mean it, you've have a knack at writing NC-17 fics, I'm truly impressed! Keep up the great work!
Smithsbabe65
I am speachless...this was sooooo hot! I've got goosebumps all over!!!! I bow down to you. You are the master and I a mere apprentice! Fabulous job!!!!! I really mean it, you've have a knack at writing NC-17 fics, I'm truly impressed! Keep up the great work!
Smithsbabe65
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAWT. I mean too hawt. *hans burned*
Outch.
I'm addicted, Alex. But you know that already :-D
Outch.
I'm addicted, Alex. But you know that already :-D
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,
You are so wicked, you sure as hell kept me waiting long enough for this update, but I must say it was well worth it! This chapter was erotic, exciting, electric and extremely hot! I'm also so glad that those two creepy gay bashing twins got their just desserts! Serves them right! As always, terrific job, keep the updates coming! I want to read more!
Smithsbabe65
You are so wicked, you sure as hell kept me waiting long enough for this update, but I must say it was well worth it! This chapter was erotic, exciting, electric and extremely hot! I'm also so glad that those two creepy gay bashing twins got their just desserts! Serves them right! As always, terrific job, keep the updates coming! I want to read more!
Smithsbabe65