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by AlexandraXI

person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

Well, well, well, this was a very naughty chapter indeed. I guess our girl is finding out how the other half lives! Nice, very nice!
Keep up the good work, I'm panting for more!

Smithsbabe65
person Selina
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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*is speechless*


*cries for mor*
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

What a twisted imagination you have! I LOVE IT! Talk about your ultimate gender bender, whew, this one left me breathless! What I love about Smith is that there's enough of him to go around, for crazy fangirls, and whacked out fanboys! You rock, and this story is just divine, simply divine!


Smithsbabe65
person Selina Enriquez
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Alex. All your sexual Smith energy makes me doing stuf....

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...shut up Selina.


*ahem*


Anyway, I'm not really into S&M. Although it's beautifully written.


Heeeeey!

*idea*

How about a Smith/Neo/OOC sandwich???

*evil, evil thoughts*
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

You are so wicked, but you already know that, don't you dear? I was absolutely hysterical, I laughed my ass off! Smith is such a delicious bastard, and you know how to write him so well! Good job, keep it going, you're on a roll!


Smithsbabe65
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

The morning after sex scene was perfectly divine! Casting Merv as a fussy hairdresser was sheer genius, I can absolutely picture him as an overly neurotic salon queen! Very funny indeed. As for his wife as a make up counter girl...I think she's a bit too classy for that, but hey its your story, so I'll play along. All and all, this was another devilish chapter. The leather collar, hmmm, could it be our girl has submitted to Smith as his sex slave? Some girls have all the luck!!! Keep up the good work!

Smithsbabe65
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

Oh my freaking God!!!!! That was absolutely yummy! I command you to write more! I must simply have my daily fix of this story!!!!!

Smithsbabe65
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alexandra,

Damn, just when things were getting interesting you leave us with a cliff hanger! Argh, I hate it! You've got to post the next chapter soon, or I will go nuts! I love this story!


Smithsbabe65
person Smithsbabe65
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, very kinky! I like, I like! Please hurry with the next sexy installment, this story is getting better with each chapter you write! Keep up the good work!


Smithsbabe65
person Selina
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seems like you have grown into quite a Smith author, Alex. Where do you find the time to produce all these stories? I envy you :-)

Love,
Selina