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July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually had to go and create an account to review this story, but it was worth it! :) I haven't come across this story elsewhere, and I must say I was pleasantly surprised to find something of this quality that I haven't read before. Very well written dialogue with everyone in character. Loved the "six minutes, 18 seconds" line -- I find it very believable that Alan would be this overprotective in the aftermath. Overall, an extremely enjoyable story, and if you've written more JPIII slash, I'd love to know about it!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cant believe no one did review your beautiful story. I liked it so much. The characterisation of Alan and his fears was so realistic.
Its really sad you wrote no more JP stories.
Its really sad you wrote no more JP stories.