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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you are going with this story, hope you update soon.
Because I can’t wait to read more!!
Because I can’t wait to read more!!
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you are going with this story, hope you update soon.
Because I can’t wait to read more!!
Because I can’t wait to read more!!
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January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far I cant wait to see where you go with it. Thank you for taking the time to write and post it on aff. Oh and PLEASE UP DATE SOON!
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September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE must have more please update soon TTFN
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like an interesting idea, keep rolling with it and I'll be looking forward to see how your writing progresses. I get the feeling I've read something similar to this, it's very deja vu for me, but you'll keep us on our toes with plot twists, no? A few errors though that are niggling at the back of my head and I absolutely have to put down. 1- Hoggle is a dwarf and not a gnome. 2- Sarah ate an enchanted peach, not a pear.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I got the comic for Return to Labyrinth. It's so cool I can't wait till volume 2 comes out. Also you are doing a fantastic job on the story keep it up!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please review some more, Toby was just getting interesting, and Jareth is his usual self. Keep it comin
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I'm very interested in what's going to happen next. Keep it up. :D
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this, it's got a good flow an a very good grip on what you want to get across. The spacing is good, an I love your over all concept. This has been fun to read, an thank you for posting it.