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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tha was shithouse
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! Great fic! Anakin/obi wan is such a good pairng. update soon why don't ya?
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It think this is really good so far! =) You have some spelling and grammar problems, but those are easily fixed. Your writing style is wonderful though! I especially like the way you are making Anakin and Obi-Wan speak, its like how they do in the movies. Great job overall, and I hope you update soon!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE aniken/obi-wan...i think of aniken more on top and the domient one and obi-wan as the submissive one...
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck you! Just continue already!!! You really can't leave us hanging like this!!! Please I'm begging you!!!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I've never really been into M/M pairings before, I like this story. Please continue it.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! The Revenge of the Sith is much slashier than Episode II, and it was in the third episode that I realized how slashy the relationship between those two was. Now I'm hooked. :) It's wonderful to read a slash fic in the timeline of RotS. :-) Please post more soon!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..
Well... the only way I can see Annakin and Obi Wan together in a slashy type of a relationship would be an angsty, power struggle type of a thing; simply because with Annakin, it's all about the power and the possession. For example, his obsession for Padme - which starts with his mother who is remarkably similar in looks and attitude, and begins at the age of nine - becomes an unhealthy fixation where he elevates her on top of a pedestal, and breaks down each and every one of her objections in order to acquiesce to thier eventual relationship and marraige. It is a story of deception and lies, and a love so fiery and unhealthy, that it causes Annakin to crash and burn eventually from the fear of losing her/it. Therefore, the warm and fuzzy approach with Obi Wan just doesn't quite work, espeically since Annakin is always competitive with his master.
But if you were to turn the tables and make this a bit more about dominance and submission, it would work beautifully.
JMO
Well... the only way I can see Annakin and Obi Wan together in a slashy type of a relationship would be an angsty, power struggle type of a thing; simply because with Annakin, it's all about the power and the possession. For example, his obsession for Padme - which starts with his mother who is remarkably similar in looks and attitude, and begins at the age of nine - becomes an unhealthy fixation where he elevates her on top of a pedestal, and breaks down each and every one of her objections in order to acquiesce to thier eventual relationship and marraige. It is a story of deception and lies, and a love so fiery and unhealthy, that it causes Annakin to crash and burn eventually from the fear of losing her/it. Therefore, the warm and fuzzy approach with Obi Wan just doesn't quite work, espeically since Annakin is always competitive with his master.
But if you were to turn the tables and make this a bit more about dominance and submission, it would work beautifully.
JMO
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! ^^ I am enjoying this so far! :D