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for The Darkness of Desire

by courtier

person GellyBelly
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WWOOOOO!!! GAY PRIDE!!
I'M ALREADY LOVING THIS STORY!!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*squeaks* Omg! I'm getting anxious!!
person GellyBelly
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... fuck dude! Why! Please update soon!
I have a feeling it will never happen though :(
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Fantastic Obi/Ani fic. I love the kind that follow their lives together. It makes for such better characterization. I hope you update this, I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
person kikvws
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is an amazing ficcie. I am just adoring the way you write Ani, your tilt on his thought processes...I'm finding it spot on. And Obi-Wan's struggles with his own feelings come through really well through both blatant and subtle observations on Ani's part. I hope you're still working on this lovely story, I really look forward to more from you.
person StarRo
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The emotions are really well portrayed, and I can't wait to see where it's going. The way they've cut each other off is almost painful, it's so realistic.
person Pikkupioneeri
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This fic is one of my absolute favourites, and I thought it'd be only fair to give you some +++++ feedback. =) The characters are unbelievably well-written and touching, and I just can't wait to see how the story's going to unfold. Happy to hear you're going to finish this story, I'd probably jump out of my window or something like that if you didn't. =)
person Physe
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooo! Keep up this awesome story ^^ I like it how Anakin and Obi don't immediately fall for each other (the usual cliche), and how Obi's keeping Ani at a distance. ^.^ It'll make the end all the better :D I'll keep reading if you keep writing ^^ And if you're interested in having a beta (not sure if you have one already or not, heh), then feel free to email me-starwind_moondance102@yahoo.com
person gizzi1213
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As someone who works fulltime and has just return to college to get another degree, I fully sympathize with the demands on your time! I'd forgotten how much work studying is!!! But I'm very glad to know you'll continue this story to the end, no matter what. Checking for updates is a wonderful study break for me! This chapter was especially enjoyable. I love the way you wove this scene into the canon scene from the movie. Keep up the good work.
person SereneNuit
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loyal reader checking in. Was very happy to see you updated. In college and working full time, so I completely understand real life messing you up with writing. I promise to stay faithful to the end.