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Oh, please write more soon! This is getting better and better! You're writing this fic in a way that makes us not able to wait till Anakin is older...heehee. His love for Obi-Wan and Obi-Wan's love for him is growing in time and I can't wait to see how it's going to develop as soon as they can really act on it. :-)
Lovely description of Anakin's jealousy. Oh, please, the poor boy needs reassurance!! Where's Obi-Wan? :-)
Lovely, lovely fic! It's different from most others in the fandom! Please continue asap!
Mahie

Wow, so no pause? I'm always rereading my own stuff a billion times before I put it up. lol.

Anyways, Obi-wan cares so much for Anakin, and when reading this (just the small details you write of them interacting as they both grow together) makes it really sad when you think: "Someday they'll become Darth Vader and Ben Kenobi."

I like how you show how much Obi-wan cares for Anakin. I wouldn't be able to stay awake that long if you payed me. However, it's sad he can't stop thinking about Qui-gon... No one really realizes how depressed someone as (for some strange reason) emotional as Obi-wan would be. I'm glad to see someone remembers how important Qui-gon is to Obi-wan. Great job as always, I can't wait to read more.

Still an absolutely lovely story.
This is, truly, a pleasure to read. I'm looking forward to future chapters.

This story is great! The pace is slow but it allows the relationship between the two to be fully developed. Update again soon!

SSSOOOOO GOOD! I love that you are telling the story of the span of their relationship. I am completely hooked! Please update soon.

This is one of the best Obi/Ani stories I have read.
You have captured the emotional termoil, I belive is the heart of their relationship, very well.

And my deprave slashy heart ís hoping for some well written, passionte love in the (not too far) future.

Whee. To say that I love what you're doing with this story would be an understatement.

OH! That was my favorite chapter yet! Poor Anakin and Obiwan! Angsty emotions!!!

T_T. Do you have this pretyped or do you type it up then post it? This story is truely amazing!

Let's see, where to start... Obi-wan seems to be pretty torn over Anakin's question a few chapters ago. The poor guy... You really make me feel bad for him. With the way you had Anakin figure out he was all angsty, it made it really dramatic. Most people would just explain the emotions from Obi-wan's point of view or something, but Anakin finding out (and still not finding everything out) was clever and original.

And when Anakin said "He understands... he cares", This was me: T_T <3!

lol. Really looking forward to the next chapter!

:D! I was so happy to see there was a new chapter. I am in so much love with this story!

Poor Anakin, figures he would be jipped out of seeing his mum. I bet the Jedi Council did it on purpose, because they're such big fans of the original trilogy and want Anakin to turn to the darkside...

Yay! This fic is like constant great character interaction; like angels decending down onto adultfanfiction.net singing one continuous high pitched note. Total love. Keep up the great work!

Chapter 6 was beautiful! I loved the setting, with the quiet of sunset in the Temple contrasting with the sexually charged activity at the club. You've written Anakin so well, he's so very vulnerable, and yet so closed. Flustered Obi-Wan is precious, I can almost hear him. Please write more, your work is wonderful. Thank you for sharing, I'm really excited to see where this plot is headed. At the same time, I love your pacing and descriptive detail, so please don't rush it because you have so many eager readers ;D I'd like to savour every chapter!