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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious how you will continue this story. So far I liked it very much, especially after I had read the prequel. What can I say? The pace is temperate (which is exactly how I prefer such stories;-) and the characterisation is convincing and believable, which - let me repeat myself - IS rare. Not to mention that it is also not easy. Congratulations, again. ;-D Don't keep us waiting very long, please.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You would never know how much I love this fic. It's so refreshing to find such a well written fic out there. Alot of stuff out there sucks. This fic is the only reason I come to this site anymore.
You characterization is the best, I can really honestly feel for the characters. You should consider becoming a real author: You would totally kick ass.
... Eyes of Passion, huh? I am going to read it, I wouldn't pass up a chance to read more of your works. But first, I need sleep. It's six in the morning V_V
You characterization is the best, I can really honestly feel for the characters. You should consider becoming a real author: You would totally kick ass.
... Eyes of Passion, huh? I am going to read it, I wouldn't pass up a chance to read more of your works. But first, I need sleep. It's six in the morning V_V
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter it was very VERY amusing!!!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>The man’s lover was another man.< Dun dun dunn!
i absolutely love the way you portray Obi-Wan. The mildly chastising, yet thoroughly compassionate, affectionately patient mentor. And Anakin's curiosity. *sighs* I wish I were half so decent at writing plot as you are.
i absolutely love the way you portray Obi-Wan. The mildly chastising, yet thoroughly compassionate, affectionately patient mentor. And Anakin's curiosity. *sighs* I wish I were half so decent at writing plot as you are.
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL. Poor anakin. Poor Obiwan. Fanfiction is so mean to them.
*Dead* I can't believe that couple was actually two guys, I seriously wasn't expecting that. Good Job, this chapter was awesome. I am really like the character interation and how you write their personalities. It's as if I can actually watch them in my mind.
*Dead* I can't believe that couple was actually two guys, I seriously wasn't expecting that. Good Job, this chapter was awesome. I am really like the character interation and how you write their personalities. It's as if I can actually watch them in my mind.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you've captured young Anakin's restlessness and affectionate nature. I can just imagine him using the emergency code out of simple impatience. It's really sweet, in a non-sickening kind of way. Looking forward to your version of adult Anakin. Can't wait to read more :D
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good! pls update soon!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo... how interesting. Please continue soon.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, how cute. This fic has totally killed me with cute. And angst. I really like how you didn't jump into the relationship... and I would hope so considering anakin's only 9 right now, lol.
I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fanfics I've read ^o^ Please continue, I cannot wait for the next update!