rate_review Reviews

hurray! update! can't wait for more!

:D You totally win at life. I love this story tons.

(Omg, its scaryanakin! Wouldn't it be scary to have that dream? Eep)

Hey, this story was really good so far!

It was written alot better than ALOT of stuff I've read. You're a very good writer, and this story has certainly caught my attention. So much, I went and registered so I could write a review!

:D

Update soon!

Another wonderful chapter! ^^ I really like how you're building it up instead of just throwing the two together as I've seen in many other stories.

Interesting!

My god. Wonderful! Keep up the good work! ^.^

This was a sweet story. I liked the way it begins with Anakin not even recalling Obi-Wan's name, and then he learns his future Master's name in a gentle exchange, making an astute observation about the latter's character in the process. I enjoy your prose, it brings together a lot of thematic threads in a precise, unfussy way. This is a promising first chapter in what I hope will be an O/A series. Hoping very much that you will write more, there isn't enough quality stories of this pairing out there, and your work is something I'd like to read. I'm sure I'm not alone :D Thank you for sharing!

can't wait for more!!!!

I like it muchly! (Yes, I know "muchly" isn't really a word...) Continue, please?

And I know this may sound weird, but thank you for using proper grammar and spelling. We can enjoy the plot without worrying over run-on sentences.

Aw, I love it! It's adorable. I didn't notice even one mistake in the entire chapter, you are an awesome writer! Keep up the good work!