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by JBLOVER

person sourapples
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. It's really good.
person spuffyover
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my good, i've only read the first chapter, but it's my dream come true, anakin staying on the good side, i prayed for this at the movie, thank youuuu=))
person spuffylover
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wanna a post, i wanna post!!!!!!!!stomps foot like a five years old, i loveeeeddd it!!1
person LoveAnakin
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I have read your fan fiction and I love it, mainly, both last chapters, although I believe that in the following chapter you would have to cause that Anakin did not obey to Padmè and went away to fight (a relapse on the part of Anakin would be cool), because that is not Anakin’s style, and thus you could cause that Padmè punished him or something similar, I believe that I would be very graceful, but this is an idea, I do not want that you get upset, because your fan fiction seems to me very interesting and I like it.Also I would like that you update your fan fiction soon, please, because this fan fiction is one of my favorites.Thank you very much and greetings.
person Laurachan (not logged in)
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!
Anakin is quite the sex-fiend, uh? ^^
I enjoy the chapter and I like this story more and more: please keep writing ^_~
person eli
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please WRITE MORE!! ;) I'm on the edge of my chair!
person smart
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finish it! finish it! finish it! Please!
person jeannie
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! Dont let Anakin die!!! :(! Update soon I'm on the edge of my seat
person TkMur
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is up there. K33P UP THE GOOD WORK!
person jeannie
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Don't let him die!Poor Anakin!! Write more!