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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I've been reading fan fiction, and writing it, for many years and there are very few stories that impress me anymore. However, not only is your fan fic very well written, I find myself wishing this was actually one of those trashy romance novels I love so much. Seriously, this story is amazingly well-written and the characters could be made your own. I truly feel you have the talent to make this a novel, and I would gladly buy the book to read it. I hope to read more of this story and, if you have written any more stories, I look forward to reading those as well. If you ever do decide to write a novel, feel free to send your chapters to me and I'll proofread and offer suggestions.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent job so far...do please keep going!
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Such a mixture of romantic and erotic! Loved it!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Keep this up! I like it alot!
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Hope you get moved in fast so you can continue. Keep up the good work. Tootles!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story :) I like it a lot! please update soon
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. It is very cute! You are a good writer. And this bein your first story means you'll get better!
Keep posting, I'l be reading!
Keep posting, I'l be reading!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it I hope to see more soon.