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June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I liked this story very much but I think that Leia is right, sorry, but the character fucked with 5 different characters!
I hope you don't be angry with me, ^__^' cause I love Vader and their scenes are good.
I hope you don't be angry with me, ^__^' cause I love Vader and their scenes are good.
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June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story, but i still think that Cell 13A is the best Vader fic of all time. That story captures Vaders true nature more, and is actually more addicting to read.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I had to read this twice it's that good.
This is the best Star Wars story I have ever read.
lov the plot twist!
please keep writing!
AishaK.
This is the best Star Wars story I have ever read.
lov the plot twist!
please keep writing!
AishaK.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Kel, I've been reading this over again, and I still love it!
You follow canon so faithfully and then *BAM* it takes this unbelievably sharp turn into AU, so smoothly that I actually didn't realize right away that things were not going according to "plan". Great job, can't wait for more updates!
You follow canon so faithfully and then *BAM* it takes this unbelievably sharp turn into AU, so smoothly that I actually didn't realize right away that things were not going according to "plan". Great job, can't wait for more updates!
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is utterly atrocious. Awful, awful dreck.
Luke and Han would never go for this stupid slut Mary Sue of yours. She would never lay a hand on princess Leia: the guards woudl drop her dead. She would never get away with sasssing and verbally abusing imperial officers like that. Furthermore, the wound she gave to Leia wouldn't even be fatal unless she competely ignored it. Luke got worse from the Wampa and survived with just a few bacta treatments. I must ask: why are you wasting your talents writing stupid selfish slut mary sues? Write something worth reading! Ugh.
Also: if she is from the modern world and not from a third-world backwater country, HOW HAS SHE NOT HEARD OF STAR WARS !?!?
Luke and Han would never go for this stupid slut Mary Sue of yours. She would never lay a hand on princess Leia: the guards woudl drop her dead. She would never get away with sasssing and verbally abusing imperial officers like that. Furthermore, the wound she gave to Leia wouldn't even be fatal unless she competely ignored it. Luke got worse from the Wampa and survived with just a few bacta treatments. I must ask: why are you wasting your talents writing stupid selfish slut mary sues? Write something worth reading! Ugh.
Also: if she is from the modern world and not from a third-world backwater country, HOW HAS SHE NOT HEARD OF STAR WARS !?!?
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!!?
THAT BITCH PADME!! THAT BETRAYER OBI-WAN!! OMFG!!! how could they do this to Vader???
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!!?
THAT BITCH PADME!! THAT BETRAYER OBI-WAN!! OMFG!!! how could they do this to Vader???
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!?!? Obi-Wan is Luke's father? I didn't see that coming! Nice twist. Can't wait to see where you take this!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! I just caught up with this and Oh. My. Damn! All the action with my favorite men in the GFFA. *fans self* And now my Luke's here.....hehehehe............
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH SHIT!! Everything went fucking wrong and Leia is dead....OMFG!!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! My vote for what to name chapter 9 is, Betrayal at Cloud City.