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for The day I died inside

by Bubbles4011

person Dum Ass
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, make more and make it bloody!!!
person Unknown
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was cheery at the begining and sad at the end. Poor chick man, right a sequil, and like make her fall in love with Obi-Wan or something. Nevermind he would be too old then, how bout Anakin? nuhuh him and Padme uhhh I dunno anyways its your story man, great storry buh bye!
person Chryl
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good One-Shot, make it a story.
person VampireOlivia
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I love the plot!
person Jordan
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very sad at the end mate, post a sequal to it.

Gives it ***** stars