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by rainbowbrite

schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*bookmarks and bounces around* Don't suppose there is anymore to this is there? I know it's been a while since you updated and I don't know if you've got mroe planned or not, but I hope so it looks like it'll be as fun as your other stories.
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll be eagerly waiting for more chapters to this. It was very well written and easy to read--a pleasure to read, even. It's rare that I read something (even among published works) in which every sentence draws me more into the characters and plot, no matter how subtle or grand the scenario at hand may be. Best wishes and luck to your muse!
person hrsegrrl
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* I like smart-and-savvy!Riddick. And the Riddick/Vaako is just going to be icing on the cake... when it gets here!
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking what you're doing with this story, I was wondering if you were going to update it...
person Melissa
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really love your story! I noticed you haven't updated in a while and really hope you haven't stopped writing! I cant wait to find out what happens between riddick and Vaako there really aren't enough fanfictions with those two together! (Oh yea and I like your other fanfictions too) ^_^
person dee
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was absolutely delighted to see you writing a new fic about Riddick and Vaako. I loved "Beginnings" and look forward to more of this one. Write more soon!
person Jaye
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

I am enjoying this story, but I'm getting the sense that Riddick has had it awfully easy so far. (Perhaps because his troubles settling in were handled in just a few paragraphs.) I'm actually hoping that Vaako doesn't end up in Riddick's bed just as quickly, in part because he is still married. Vaako seems like an honorable man, one who would be true to whatever pledge of fidelity he'd made (at least until the bond was formally dissoved), even if the relationship wasn't all it should be or he was attracted to someone else.

In reading chapter 4, I'm also wondering whether you'll have Riddick consider the fact that since he'll be aging so much more slowly, anyone he gets involved with (including Vaako) will die long before him.

Looking forward to more,
Jaye
person claire
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great fic ! UPdate soon!
person kenya
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good. Please keep writing
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Hugs Silversun* Yay! A new Riddick/Vaako fic to love! I just love the way you write your stories. I'm glad this one not only got reposted but with three more chapters from the last time I checked! *giggles with happiness* Thanks and I'm dying to know how this one ends. The suspense is killing me. Hope there's more to come soon!!