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for Silence Speaks Louder Than Words

by jennigirl

schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just had to read that again when I saw it here! I love the concept of no words. What need are they when their actions speak so much louder? It just made it all the more intense. Great job! Poor Padme, she saw the writing on the wall, so to speak. Still, I say let no one, man or woman get between these two Jedi.
person PadwanKayla
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you posted this here. This is such an intense story with the silence really speaking louder than any words. You did manage to evoke some feelings of pity for Padme here even though her actions at the beginning made me want to cry out to leave the two boys alone. Padme was a smart girl in the end knowing she'd lost to their love. Great job!
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I totally loved this story! Yay for Obi and Ani! ^^
person Phoenix Red Lion
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense...and with no actually words shared between characters! AWESOME! To get that much emotion and suspense in just descriptions is very HARD! Great job! I salute you! Gotta admit that I do feel bad for Padma...kinda. Sometimes I really like her...and other times she annoys the hell out of me. *laughs*

Great job with this! I loved it!