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by Greyson

schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ha bout to get very interesting I hope
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Koi
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please write more!!! I love this story!!
schedule November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW I hope you update soon!! It is a great story!!
person peyaluna
schedule June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this story!! and now that you´ve started editing i´m hoping for more chapters...i just need to know how things go on, i hope the aliens will survive the yautjas for i really like the cunning queen, she´s a nice change to the stereotype instincts-but-no-brain-alien everyone writes, and i´m dying to see what becomes of red+leanna, will she be able to get impregnated by him? so many possibilities, so many unanswered questions...date the hell up, PLEASE!!!
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like this one. what happens next??? keep up the good work.
person random hyper person
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
RHP: I haves a question!!!!!!

Is Redd pronounced like 'red' or like 'reed'?

I think it's like 'reed' but i wanted to make sure...


But anyways- the story is great you are a very good author! Please update, I'm hooked! :D
person angelina
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
k i read this whole story the other day but my computer was sucky and wouldnt let me review so im doing it now and i have to say: i LLOOOVVVVEEEE it! this is exactly the kind of story i love and am interested in! i love redd, hate jason, want redd and leanna to be together (i think she should start to fall for him) and....yeah so update as soon as u possible can! cause i wanna know the out-come of this story! REDD BETTER NOT DIE!!!!!!!
person sethfc
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic i love it Please update this is a great fanfiction and i will continue to review and read it untill its completion.

Now for the actual 'review' Spelling is perfectly fine grammar's also fine and i like how its going its very good im sorry this review's short normally i write them longer but right now its late and im not up for along review promise to give you one next chapter tho!.
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love the story no matter how twisted it is... lol
I love Redd and Leanna...!