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Will a predator be making his way to the planet? Spider

THAT WAS AWESOME!!! I mean everything!!! You got to keep it going Malie. I know alot of people read this because its great and keep up with the coffee. Is it French roast LOL

ALIEN KEEP AWAY SWEEEETTTTTT!!!! I cracked up that was so sweet. THose tow brothers got the snot stomped out of them after Redd took care of Leanna ( Man stlye) LOL. The Queen knows her son she knew a beating was going to happen she wanted the males to see it and be amazed at the power of Redd and they were afraid. She is not stupid. Keep drinking that coffee Malie

I am so shocked that I like this as much as I do. It's weird and cool all at the same time do more!!!

This is a totally thought out stroy girlie and I applaud you and ask for more of this wierd , well written story that I like!

How bizzare.I like it.Women sure are strong.

If Jason helped her then he is a monster. She has this all thought out and like everyone else I wnat to read the battle of the Queens. Redd better get back to his honey before the brothers sample her. Awesome stuff love the info.

again you surprise me... the queen is more intelligent than i thought, concerning the two aliens.. looks like some one got too adicted to human females... concerning the drones... sicne they are not warriors.. they only serve has workers but still they are deadly... lacking sexual organs and a mind of their own,they are just like... the human robots, obeying the queen.. but the warriors are the ones the have a mind of their own... and by the looks of it those two aliens are very excited with the discovering of a non guarded human female... while the others are guarded by the drones, orders of the queen.. and their plaything "jean" was taken away from them... they are realy excited... of course this is bad for this Womam, Jean, because when the queen allows the brothers to have their "toy" again.... i am certain thay they will not let her escape... in fact they will be very, but, very close to her.... look at the bright side Jean..at least you will be treated like royalty.... in the point of view of the alien that is....

MAn she's got this all planned out is Jason helping for other reasons. Did he give her the robot? The two brothers are going to cause trouble aren't they. Leanna better run I hope Redd returns but I bet he'sgoing back to the compound with the others. Leanna is in danger. If you have the Queens fight DUDE I am all over that. Keep going. Jean was lucky this time.

Hey keep drinking that coffee I find this tale of yours very good and WOW. This Queen is covering everything and if she goes to war with the other Queen I know you are going to write about it and I can't wait. Jean was lucky i hope Redd comes back and put these two brothers in their place. Awesome chapter loved the info keep it coming.