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She is a thinker isn't she. Keeping the females to breed and making the human males do all the work to defend the clan or I think so. I know you are going to write the Queen's battling don't even have to ask and is Jason working for the man or what. I hope Redd gets back to Leanna. I am hooked love the Queen being all powerful and stuff keep it up! Great work

Oh yeah she's plotting stuff and with back up plans I mean the droids can watch the place while sh's gone. She's going to be a Monster whent hat egg laying organ dries. LOOK OUT! Is Jason helping and What are you going to do to the Two brothers? I hope Redd destroys them for trying to touch Leanna. MORE!!!!!

You se animals are very intelligent. She will all the resources of the soft skins for her clan. I can't wait to see what Jason has to do with this. Damn Jean was sparred by the Queen. I want you to teach those brothers a lesson they can't touch Redd's Leanna it ain't natural. I need some more and keep drinking that coffee and I don't think this will be posted into oblivion and if it is I'll still read it. Excellent chappie

Aliens have the ability to evolve in order to survive, and i think the queen might be very inteligent in her aproach, if the aliens reproduce with human females the alien colony not only will grow faster, but also be able to adapt more... in a certain twisted way it is a symbiosis.... the aliens reproduce with the human females, in order to create hybrids "like redd" since this aliens have sexual organs, while the human females, will receive "protection" from other threats, and if the alien queen is able to comunicate with humans she will be realy interested in techonology.. since their mortal enemy is the predator.

concerning the human males... i can clearly say that some of them are going to die.
the idea of the queen also relieves the tension in the hive and his less likely to occur batles to see who his the dominat male to reproduce with the queen, not to mention that humans females in the alien point of view.. must be now a rare delicacy.... from what i could see only the strongests aliens " warriors" are able to have a humam female.
also the queen might also benefit, having human female to serve has "spies" in order for her to know if there might be a riot... and since they are human females they do not represent a threat to her power, not to mention that humas can produce their own food, such has the animasl of the planet, there must be som that the humans could tame.. in order to have a infinite source of food, catle perhaps.... yes, this alien queen realy did her homework.

You are going to continue your story right I am asking nicely here. I don't care what you are drinking I like it LOL. I even like Redd. Please find Jason okay. Later

I don't care what you were drinking either LOL I want you to continue with this strange tale that I like to read whne you post.

That is something you dont see everyday. Human and alien chatting about stuff. What do the Aliens want with the humans if not as hosts. Jean is going to have fun EWWWW. Redd is having fun with the Queen's approval. WHere is Jason? Isn't he going to save everyone? Well go ahead and write more

I don't know what you were drinking when you wrote this but I like it cause it's weird and strange. So keep going I am interested.

Okay you got some wierd thing going on with the chapters better change that and put this back on top so it can be posted over into oblivion. Lol Where is JAson? He better not be dead. I wonder if he will still want Leanna after what Redd does to her . How can he measure up LOL. I hope Harold gets bit or something he is such an a-hole. What oh what are the two brohters going ot do with JEan? Hey keep going I am listening.

Hornet you are not a lazy reader.
whatever Coffee
SafeHaven I know it will be posted over into oblivion LOL. I'll fix it when no one is looking
Thanks for reviewing guys.