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by Greyson

person Piano manner
schedule June 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay if they are not using the people as host what are they using them for? I think Jean will find out LOL. Where is JAson he better not be dead cause Dude..... Redd is handling his business LOL The Queen I hope she rips Harold in half. But he is a monster so he will think of something. I am anxious to know what.
person Hornet
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know I am not the only one reading this so can you update for us dude Thanks Hornet Always in your face
person Hornet
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EWwww the part with the girl. Where is Jason is he dead? What the hell is Harold thinking she already sent the children to die after she played with them. Who is using whom here. I know he thinks he's god and all. Wjat the heck are the two brothers going to do to Jean. Tell me Hornet the lazy reader.
person Bluflame
schedule May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay who is the Monster Jason , Redd or Harold and his team. Dude I can't wait to see what they will use Harold for He needs to die. More alien sex with Redd and Leanna *smiles*
person SafeHaven
schedule April 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kill he evil scientist. Are all the people going to die and will the robots be disabled. Will Redd have Leanna again I want to know so update.
person Rhayn
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE ALIEN LOVIN'!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rhayn
schedule April 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ALIEN SEX!!!!! WOW I was hoping for death of the scientist but I guess it will be a hide and seek thing going on. I hope LEanna and Jason get some revenge. Great stuff keep writing I'll keep reading .
person Bluflame
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this did I mention that before. I love anything with an alien or any type of Monster in it; but I REALLY like this. I anxiously await your next installment. Bluflame burning bright
person AngelaH
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want you to continue I love Aliens!!!! and this fic.
person wydow
schedule April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW ans ouch!! Dude I must say I am hooked now that we know Redd was sent there to cause choas and mayhem for the humans. I can not wait for you to update so hurry I am hooked on Alien