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I want more!!!!!!! Kill all the scientist please I must have more.NOW I mean NOW!!!!!!!!!!

Mating ritual of the Redd I liked how it was written even though Leanna was not willing. I hate her father and poor Josan had to watch; but I await for more of this. What will JAson do for revenge against his father. Write more please.

I knew the Queen had something planned and I hope that Redd kills the scientists for doing that to that to Leanna and Jason. I hate them ,but I love this story please continue with this and I will read and comment.

I like this and wish for you to continue. I don't know if many people read the Alien section but I will if you continue to write it.

I hope you update soon because I want to know what LEonard has planned and if this is the Queen's plan to get insid ethe city after all the gas did not work on Redd. Hurry and write more!!!

Damn scientists. I hope Redd goes to town. I feel so sad for Jason and Leanna. I can feel the tension between them and the danger if they touch. What sick reason could the butcher have for his daughter.Harold is a prick who thinks he can control an alien he is insane. Whta is the deal with the gas if it did not work on Redd then I am guessing the Queen wanted them to take the egg. You know I think they will fiind out just how intelligent these creatures are. I want more I am very into this and can feel the Angst and danger to come.

I love the writing here Malestorm. I love the potential love and the bad things that could happen to destroy it. I wnat more I love all the characters and it's only the first chapter. Keep going I love the feel of this and I am a Predator girl but this I like.

That is so mean what Leonard is doing to his daughter and Jason. I really hate him. Is he saving her for something with the Alien because he is a bastard. Harold is insane if he thiks he can control an Alien or I should say Redd. I feel for all these people and I desperately want Redd to do his thing and rip some idiots and down right evil people to shreds. I think The queen had this planned and knew they would come for this egg I think it was her plan all along. Am I right? this is great and it's an alien fic and I like it very much please continue the great character development and story Hornet