rate_review Reviews

You have done a beautiful job. Congratulations! I will look for other writings you do. You are quite talented. If I were you I would try to invent a story and your own characters and run with it. I am sure you could. How do you say it 'over there' - - t'was 'brilliant!'

Just some encouragement to continue the story. It is quite enchanting.

Very good story. I like that the characters are well developed. I hope you will be able to finish it soon. I enjoy it immensely. Even if Jack was quite careless and selfish about Nell it seems he has risen to the challenge of being loved and loving. A real fun read. Continue.......Thanks, I give you top rating.

simply amazing! this is a great continuation of the story of nell. so very glad that will, elizabeth, norrington and everyone else is taking such a critical role in this installment of the adventures of nell and jack continue on. i love the plot twisting and turning. the tsunami is a great touch, and a dash of hope that spencer, gillete and davenport will fail in people able to reapprehend our star characters. i hope they get away safe. i hope a ship the size of the pearl can withstand the force of the tsunami. cannnot wait for your next installment. cliff hanger!! again great job so far. bravo!

I was so excited to see that you had updated this story. I've been waiting, which seems like forever for another creative chapter, so to my surprise when I logged onto the site, you added two chapters. YAY!!! This is hands down the best Captain Jack story I have read and believe me I have read a lot of them. I never want this story to end. So thank you for the update and the many chapters of pure entertainment. Looking forward to reading more............

This is the second time I've read "The Map" through, and I was delighted to see new chapters! (When I first read it, I think it ended with Jack killing DeMornay and Beaumont.) Anyway, I'm glad you had Jack and Nell marry! And the words that Jack has been saying to Nell in the past few chapters! My! Takes one's breath away, doesn't it? Sure wish just once in my life I'd have a fellow saying such loving sentiments to me and meaning them! Sigh... I was rereading it over at fanfiction but just had to finish reading it on this site once the two became intimate. I mean, 34 chapters or some such into it before they actually get down to business... had to reward myself by reading the unexpurgurated version! I will keep an eye out for further chapters. I don't recall if you ever explained why it is Nell thinks she can't have children. I'm hoping that is just a tale told to her by the horrible B & DeM when she fell off her horse as a child, and that she and Jack will conceive and raise a family. Only one small complaint: you had Brown and Knowles lose their heads in the caves and then had them alive again, and then had them dead again, fighting with the monks and villagers against Jack et al on the beach. That was a little jarring. Otherwise, thanks for a great tale - right up there with the best works of AniSparrow and Hils!

I do protest to the marry at sea not being legal!

While I was in Key West this summer (enjoying the current "pirate fever" they've got going on down there) I decided to go on one of the sunset cruises on a schooner called "Western Union" (yes Western Union really used the ship, way back in the early 1900's to lay copper wire down so wire transmissions could be sent between the US and the islands.. but anyway) During the sunset cruise the Captain married a couple, they signed the marriage license, and the bride tossed the flowers.

Want proof? Check out this picture

http://pics.livejournal.com/slayer22187/pic/00008yhb/s640x480

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW They got married!! Jack and Nell together at least. It was beautifully written but the one I feel sorry for now is Bryant because like Norrie in the first film he lost out, so maybe that can be sorted? I loved it, more soon please!

Phew! What was there NOT to enjoy?! Spare a thought for me, having to TRY and edit that...

YAY! Married! That was lovely *le sigh*