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for The Map

by Boshomengro

person Ash
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! I can't wait to see what happens to Jack and Nell next. I hope you're able to update soon. I really want to see if Nell ever meets her brother.
person 1BabyBoy
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a wonderful story that I keep reading and reading, hoping it will never end, even as I get impatient with Nell about just not totally surrendering her entire self to Jack. Seems she has some sense of self left to keep finding the inner strength not to completely fall apart after everything she's been through. And Jack has been so marvelously selfless with her! (Where can I find a hero like that in real life?) I like how you have developed all the secondary characters. Hock is so sexy. And I laughed at Lady Clarence being Tilly. I'd have thought from the outset that her given name would have been Penelope or Beatrice or something equally prim, proper and holier-than-thou. Back to the next chapter!
person BabyBoy1
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please, aanother chapter! I NEED to know how they get back to Port Royal; how Jack & Nell make out; will Will ever blacksmith or swordfight again? Does Elizabeth bring this child into the world without incident? Can Bryant take permanent command of the Relentless? Wat about Hock and Tilly? Yes, I want to see your side story too! Please, another chapter. Quick! Oh, the suspense is killing me!
person Suriya
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
¤¤¤I have no words describing how amazing job you have done with writing The Map.¤¤¤
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY THE BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ! And I have to agree with some previous rewiew that this story should have been filmed.
Don't get me wrong, I loved Dead man's chest too, but still...
I can think far better ideas what to do with Jack than barbecue him!
Not to mention the "honour factor" that was one of the things that made first film
so great! You have managed to savour that too, without compromising Jack.
For instance, I was so sad how they portrayed Norry (allthough he looked hot)
Forever grateful for your work!-Your humble fan-
person night
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hullo from la gomera,
yes in fact i do believe u should post the side story! hock is my fav. character. besides nell n jack o´course.
also i think u should start to consider a sequel! nell n jack ... off to save the world from super natural things ... dun dunn...
lol
i loved this chapter. more nell jack fluff, please!
byes!
person Charli
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! How do you write like that! Those exchanges between Jack and Nell were so touching but yay it's not the end and yay the evil 2 are dead even though I did feel sorry for them by the end. This story is brilliant, no denying that and I'll be sad to see it finish. Question- will there be a sequel in the future??? I sure hope so!
person M M
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Of course we are interested (silly question). Lovely chapter as always. What will they do to occupy themselves now?
person jessica
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter, luv!

Thank God they're finally DEAD! I don't think my heart could take another Nell-napping by the likes of those two!
And the monks are gone! Phew. I hope that Jack and Nell will be able to get some much needed rest & relaxation w/
one another now. *wink wink* *nudge nudge*
person danzapalooza
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally they're gone!! I love this story...update soon!
person anna
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-puts down the popcorn-

darn those cliffhangers. something the whole world of pirates has come accustomed to doing. (if you've seen POTC 2 you know what i'm talking about)

please update soon!